Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences simpler and more natural. Also, avoid redundancy and focus on clear reasons why you like singing. For example, explain how singing makes you feel relaxed when alone.

Example: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax when I am alone. Singing my favorite songs makes me feel happy and calm.

Suggestion: Your answer has some unclear phrases and grammar mistakes. Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about your experience learning singing.

Example: Yes, I have learnt how to sing. When I was a child, I attended music classes at school where I practiced singing. However, I think I am not a very good singer yet.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and has many grammatical errors. Try to answer directly and clearly. Explain who you like to sing for and why, using simple and correct sentences. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases.

Example: I usually sing for myself because I want to improve my singing skills. Singing also helps me relax when I am alone or feeling sad.

Suggestion: Your answer has some unclear words and grammar mistakes. Try to give a clear opinion and support it with reasons. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and provide specific details about how singing brings happiness.

Example: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. Singing different types of music helps them relax and release stress, which makes them feel better.

× I will be lying if I say no because usually I sing song when I am alone because it makes filming so much relax.

✓ I will be lying if I say no because usually I sing songs when I am alone because it makes me feel so relaxed.

The phrase 'makes filming so much relax' is incorrect. 'Filming' is not the intended word; it should be 'feel' and 'relax' should be 'relaxed' as an adjective. Also, 'sing song' should be plural 'sing songs' to indicate multiple songs.

× I will be lying if I say no because usually I sing song when I am alone because it makes filming so much relax.

✓ I will be lying if I say no because usually I sing songs when I am alone because it makes me feel so relaxed.

The word 'song' should be plural 'songs' because it refers to singing multiple songs in general.

× It says I don't have Bob, why so good vocal?

✓ People say I don't have a good voice, so why do I have such good vocals?

'It says' is incorrect; it should be 'People say'. 'Bob' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo. 'Why so good vocal?' is ungrammatical; it should be 'why do I have such good vocals?'. Also, 'vocal' should be 'vocals' or 'voice'.

× But I enjoy singing song alone.

✓ But I enjoy singing songs alone.

'Singing song' is incorrect; it should be 'singing songs' to indicate the activity of singing multiple songs.

× Yes, Ah, of course. When I was a kid there was a music class in my school and I used to go over there and listen and try to sing music but try to song using music.

✓ Yes, ah, of course. When I was a kid, there was a music class in my school and I used to go there to listen and try to sing songs using music.

The phrase 'try to song using music' is incorrect; 'song' should be the verb 'sing'. Also, 'go over there' can be simplified to 'go there'. The sentence needed clearer verb forms and structure.

× But usually I'm not a good vocalist, so I don't find that very good for me.

✓ But usually I'm not a good vocalist, so I don't think that is very good for me.

'I don't find that very good for me' is awkward; 'I don't think that is very good for me' is the correct expression.

× Well to be honest I usually want to sing for myself because as I mentioned earlier that I don't have good vocal so that I can learn so my skill to other.

✓ Well, to be honest, I usually want to sing for myself because, as I mentioned earlier, I don't have a good voice, so I can learn and improve my skills for others.

The sentence has incorrect conjunctions and missing articles. 'Good vocal' should be 'a good voice'. The phrase 'so that I can learn so my skill to other' is ungrammatical and needs restructuring.

× But I I can listen by myself or to get relax when I am alone.

✓ But I can listen by myself or relax when I am alone.

'To get relax' is incorrect; it should be 'relax'. Also, the repeated 'I' is a typo.

× When I feel so down I can I usually sing such songs are sitting on.

✓ When I feel down, I usually sing songs that I like.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Such songs are sitting on' does not make sense. It should be rephrased for clarity and correct structure.

× Of course definitely is singing can bring happiness to people because.

✓ Of course, definitely singing can bring happiness to people because...

The phrase 'is singing can bring' is incorrect. The modal verb 'can' should directly follow the subject 'singing' without 'is'.

× By singing different kinds of classical music in all kinds of music they get filex.

✓ By singing different kinds of classical and other music, they get relaxed.

'Filex' is likely a misspelling of 'relax'. The sentence structure is awkward and needs correction for clarity.

× The it's I mentioned previously.

✓ As I mentioned previously,

The phrase 'The it's I mentioned previously' is ungrammatical and should be corrected to 'As I mentioned previously'.

× It helps to release the stress and all the negative energy from the body so that everyone failed phrase.

✓ It helps to release stress and all the negative energy from the body so that everyone feels refreshed.

'Failed phrase' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo. It should be 'feels refreshed' or similar. Also, 'the stress' can be 'stress' in general.