Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và thiếu sự rõ ràng, bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax. For example, I often sing along to my favorite songs when I take a bath or at my friend's weddings to lift the mood.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản và rõ ràng, tránh dùng câu hỏi lại cho người phỏng vấn.

Example: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in primary school. My music teacher taught us to sing high-pitched notes and practice vocal exercises, which I found very interesting.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và từ vựng, bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lỗi chính tả và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I want to sing for my daughter because I enjoy singing lullabies to help her sleep. Also, during family reunions, we sing carols together, which helps us bond.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng nhưng sử dụng từ vựng không chính xác và câu không rõ ràng, bạn nên dùng từ phù hợp và cấu trúc câu đơn giản, rõ ràng hơn.

Example: Absolutely, singing can bring happiness. People often sing sad songs when they feel down, but they also sing joyful songs to celebrate victories in life.

× I have an app for singing so I tend to home to the music and put on some songs on repeat when I am having a bath.

✓ I have an app for singing so I tend to listen to the music and put on some songs on repeat when I am having a bath.

The phrase 'tend to home to the music' is incorrect because 'home' is not a verb in this context. The correct verb is 'listen' which requires the preposition 'to'. The error is related to incorrect verb usage and preposition combination, which fits under the 'Verb + -ing form' problem type as the verb form and usage are incorrect.

× So oh occasionally when I go to my friend's wedding I would put on some songs to uplift spirit.

✓ So occasionally, when I go to my friend's wedding, I would put on some songs to uplift the spirit.

The phrase 'to uplift spirit' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'spirit'. Also, commas are needed for clarity. The error is an incorrect use of the definite article, which is related to prepositional phrase structure and article usage.

× My music teacher asked to sing very high pitch note and sometimes we need to get some vocals while learning music and that's really pretty impressive back in.

✓ My music teacher asked us to sing very high-pitched notes and sometimes we needed to get some vocals while learning music, and that was really pretty impressive back then.

The sentence has multiple tense errors: 'asked to sing' should be 'asked us to sing' to include the object; 'high pitch note' should be 'high-pitched notes' for correct adjective form and plural; 'we need' should be 'we needed' to maintain past tense; 'that's really pretty impressive back in' should be 'that was really pretty impressive back then' for past tense and correct expression. These are past tense issues.

× My daughter obviously is because I love to sing a lullaby songs to get a slip easier an every now and then when we have a family reunion will put on some Carol case Oct.

✓ My daughter obviously is, because I love to sing lullaby songs to help her sleep easier, and every now and then when we have a family reunion, we will put on some carols.

The sentence has pronoun and article errors: 'a lullaby songs' should be 'lullaby songs' (no 'a' before plural noun); 'to get a slip easier' is incorrect, should be 'to help her sleep easier' to use correct pronoun and verb; 'will put on some Carol case Oct' is unclear and likely meant 'we will put on some carols'. The errors involve incorrect pronoun use and article usage.

× That's a good way to bond with each other.

✓ That's a good way to bond with each other.

This sentence is correct as is; no correction needed.

× Absolutely, people sing when they are down the dumb, so it would be Milan shall meloncholy musics or when they are celebrating a victory or triumph in life they just sing a very up lip spirit songs instead.

✓ Absolutely, people sing when they are down in the dumps, so it would be melancholic music, or when they are celebrating a victory or triumph in life, they just sing very uplifting songs instead.

The original sentence contains multiple errors: 'down the dumb' should be 'down in the dumps' (correct idiom); 'Milan shall meloncholy musics' is incorrect and should be 'melancholic music'; 'a very up lip spirit songs' should be 'very uplifting songs'. These are errors in adjective and adverb usage and idiomatic expressions.