Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Perbaiki struktur kalimat agar lebih natural dan efektif. Hindari kalimat yang terputus dan gunakan kalimat lengkap. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren, misalnya 'because' dan 'so'.

Example: I don't really like singing because I think my voice is not very good. Also, I often feel nervous when I sing in front of others, so I prefer to listen to music instead.

Suggestion: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih lengkap dan natural. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk menghubungkan ide, misalnya 'because'.

Example: No, I have never learnt how to sing because I am not really into singing. I prefer listening to music instead.

Suggestion: Perbaiki struktur kalimat agar lebih natural dan gunakan kalimat lengkap. Hindari pengulangan kata yang tidak perlu dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih lancar.

Example: I don't want to sing for anyone because my voice is not very good. Therefore, I prefer listening to music.

Suggestion: Perbaiki pengucapan dan struktur kalimat agar lebih jelas dan koheren. Gunakan kalimat lengkap dan kata penghubung untuk menjelaskan alasan dengan lebih baik.

Example: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it releases oxytocin hormones, which make people feel relaxed and happy.

× I don't really like singing because I think my voice is not. Very good.

✓ I don't really like singing because I think my voice is not very good.

The sentence is incorrectly split into two parts, causing a sentence structure error. The phrase 'my voice is not. Very good.' should be combined into one sentence without a period to maintain proper sentence flow.

× I prefer to listen to music rather than seeing myself.

✓ I prefer to listen to music rather than see myself.

After 'rather than', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'seeing' should be corrected to 'see'.

× No, I have not because I not really into singing.

✓ No, I have not because I am not really into singing.

The sentence is missing the verb 'am' to complete the present tense structure 'I am not really into singing.' This omission causes a sentence structure error.

× I prefer listening to the music.

✓ I prefer listening to music.

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary before 'music' when speaking generally. Removing 'the' makes the sentence more natural.

× I prefer listening to the music.

✓ I prefer listening to music.

Same as above, 'the' before 'music' is unnecessary in this context.

× Yes, I think seeing can bring happiness to people because. It can be released. The oxytocin hormones. An it make. People feels relaxed, Ann.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it can release oxytocin hormones and it makes people feel relaxed.

The original sentences are fragmented and contain multiple sentence structure errors. 'Seeing' should be 'singing'. The phrase 'It can be released. The oxytocin hormones.' is incorrect; oxytocin is released, not 'it'. Also, 'An it make. People feels relaxed, Ann.' is fragmented and contains errors in verb forms and pronouns. The corrected sentence combines these ideas into a coherent sentence with correct verb forms and pronouns.