Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Try to avoid unclear phrases and redundancy. Start with a direct response, then explain why you like singing with specific reasons, using linking words to connect your ideas.

Example: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. For example, when I feel stressed, singing allows me to feel better and more peaceful.

Suggestion: Your answer should be more structured and clear. Begin with a direct answer, then add details with linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Use past tense correctly and provide specific information about your learning experience.

Example: Yes, I learned to sing when I was young. I took singing classes with a professor named Ann. However, over time, I lost interest and now I only sing casually at home.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and contains many unclear phrases. Try to answer directly and clearly. Use linking words to explain your feelings and give specific examples. Avoid grammatical errors and redundancy.

Example: I don't have a specific person to sing for, but sometimes I sing to express my emotions when words are not enough. For example, I often sing at birthday parties to share my feelings with others.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and clearer sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Provide specific examples to support your opinion.

Example: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness to people. For instance, when people feel happy, they often listen to upbeat pop songs that lift their mood and reduce stress. Personally, I sing when I feel sad to improve my emotions.

× Yes, I like singing there the several ease up by the singing.

✓ Yes, I like singing because of the several ease brought by singing.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'there' and 'ease up by the singing'. The preposition 'because of' correctly indicates the reason, and 'brought by singing' properly expresses the cause of ease.

× We can express service press an it's also work as as test Buster.

✓ We can express ourselves and it also works as a stress buster.

The phrase 'service press an' is incorrect; it should be 'express ourselves'. Also, 'work' should be 'works' to agree with singular subject 'it', and 'test Buster' should be 'stress buster'.

× For me this is the best way to to express over emotions.

✓ For me, this is the best way to express our emotions.

The word 'over' is incorrect here; it should be 'our' to indicate possession of emotions.

× Yes, when I was young I tried to learn some singing something in from my professor Ann.

✓ Yes, when I was young I tried to learn some singing from my professor Ann.

The phrase 'some singing something in from' is incorrect and redundant; 'some singing from' is sufficient and grammatically correct.

× I also join the singing classes.

✓ I also joined the singing classes.

The verb 'join' should be in past tense 'joined' to match the past time frame indicated by 'when I was young'.

× But with the passage of time I forgot my forgot about this passion and with during the time I just become bathroom singer.

✓ But with the passage of time I forgot about this passion and during that time I just became a bathroom singer.

The phrase 'forgot my forgot' is redundant; 'forgot about' is correct. 'With during the time' is incorrect; 'during that time' is correct. 'Become' should be past tense 'became'. Also, 'a bathroom singer' needs the article 'a'.

× Well, there are not any a person in my life with for whom I can sing for, but still some sometimes their dispatch location where I want to express my emotion.

✓ Well, there is not any person in my life for whom I can sing, but sometimes there are special occasions where I want to express my emotions.

'There are not any a person' is incorrect; 'there is not any person' is correct for singular. 'With for whom I can sing for' is redundant; 'for whom I can sing' suffices. 'Their dispatch location' is unclear and incorrect; 'special occasions' fits context. 'Emotion' should be plural 'emotions'.

× But I was really struggled to express my emotions in words.

✓ But I really struggled to express my emotions in words.

'Was really struggled' is incorrect; 'really struggled' is the correct past tense form.

× Then I tried to sing and let them know to others what I have feeling on that occasion.

✓ Then I tried to sing and let others know what I was feeling on that occasion.

'Let them know to others' is incorrect; 'let others know' is correct. 'I have feeling' should be 'I was feeling' to match past tense and correct verb form.

× For example on birthdays. Are you?

✓ For example, on birthdays.

The sentence 'Are you?' is incomplete and unrelated; it should be removed. A comma after 'For example' improves clarity.

× Yes, I believe singing can bring the happiness for the people.

✓ Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people.

'The happiness' is incorrect here; 'happiness' is an uncountable noun and does not need 'the'. Also, 'for the people' should be 'to people'.

× Whenever they are happy, they try they listen some happy and pop songs which which elevate their mood also help them to relieve their stress.

✓ Whenever they are happy, they listen to some happy and pop songs which elevate their mood and also help them relieve their stress.

'They try they listen' is incorrect; 'they listen to' is correct. 'Which which' is repeated. 'Help them to relieve' should be 'help them relieve'.

× An apart from that usually I start singing whenever I am feeling sad.

✓ Apart from that, I usually start singing whenever I am feeling sad.

'An apart from that' is incorrect; it should be 'Apart from that'. Also, a comma after 'Apart from that' improves sentence flow.