Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors which affect naturalness. Try to be more concise and directly answer the question with clear reasons. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for better clarity.

Example: I don't really enjoy singing because I had a bad experience with online singing classes, so I gradually stopped. However, I do enjoy listening to others sing on YouTube sometimes.

Suggestion: Your answer is repetitive and contains unclear phrases. Try to organize your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Also, avoid incomplete sentences and improve grammar for better coherence.

Example: Yes, I took online singing classes during high school because a friend encouraged me. However, the experience was not good, so I stopped after one or two lessons.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use clearer sentence structures and provide more specific reasons to enrich your answer.

Example: I would like to sing for my idol, Cristiano Ronaldo, because I have been a big fan since 2018. Singing his favorite songs would be a way to show my admiration for him.

Suggestion: Your answer has good ideas but is difficult to understand due to grammar and word choice errors. Try to express your thoughts more clearly and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Example: I believe singing can bring happiness because when people sing, they forget their worries and focus on the music, which helps them feel more positive and relaxed.

× Will I am not very into singing simply because I used to take online singing classes an my experience was not good so I gradually lift it.

✓ I am not very into singing simply because I used to take online singing classes and my experience was not good so I gradually left it.

The use of 'Will' at the beginning is incorrect as it does not fit the sentence context. Modal verbs like 'will' are used to express future intentions or requests, which is not the case here. Removing 'Will' corrects the sentence.

× Will I am not very into singing simply because I used to take online singing classes an my experience was not good so I gradually lift it.

✓ I am not very into singing simply because I used to take online singing classes and my experience was not good so I gradually left it.

The preposition 'an' is incorrect and should be 'and' to connect the two clauses properly.

× Will I am not very into singing simply because I used to take online singing classes an my experience was not good so I gradually lift it.

✓ I am not very into singing simply because I used to take online singing classes and my experience was not good so I gradually left it.

The verb 'lift' is incorrect in past tense context; the correct past tense form is 'left'.

× But now I sometimes do listen to someone singing in on YouTube.

✓ But now I sometimes do listen to someone singing on YouTube.

The preposition 'in' before 'on YouTube' is unnecessary and incorrect; 'on YouTube' is the correct phrase.

× Yes, as I mentioned earlier, I took online singing classes. It was during my high school days and at that time I was influenced by one of my friends to take online classes, singing classes. So because of that I took but it went extremely horrible. So after 1-2 classes eyes.

✓ Yes, as I mentioned earlier, I took online singing classes during my high school days. At that time, I was influenced by one of my friends to take singing classes. However, it went extremely badly, so I stopped after 1-2 classes.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'So because of that I took but it went extremely horrible. So after 1-2 classes eyes.' is incomplete and confusing. Rewriting improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So because of that I took but it went extremely horrible.

✓ So because of that I took the classes but it went extremely badly.

The phrase 'went extremely horrible' is incorrect; 'went extremely badly' is the correct adverbial form to describe how the classes went.

× I think I would like to sing for my idol Cristiano Ronaldo because I am his big fan since our 2018 and I would like to serve him by singing his favorite songs.

✓ I think I would like to sing for my idol Cristiano Ronaldo because I have been his big fan since 2018 and I would like to serve him by singing his favorite songs.

The preposition 'our' before '2018' is incorrect; it should be omitted. Also, 'I am his big fan since 2018' should be 'I have been his big fan since 2018' to correctly express duration from past to present.

× I am his big fan since our 2018

✓ I have been his big fan since 2018

When expressing an action or state that started in the past and continues to the present, the present perfect tense ('have been') is required instead of simple present ('am').

× Well, I have never thought about it, but I suppose singing does bring happiness because it while singing a person forgets all his sorrow and sadness and you are see only focuses on singing that makes them positive Lee effective.

✓ Well, I have never thought about it, but I suppose singing does bring happiness because while singing, a person forgets all his sorrow and sadness and only focuses on singing, which makes them positively effective.

The original sentence has misplaced words and unclear phrasing. 'it while singing' is incorrect; 'while singing' should start the clause. 'you are see only focuses' is incorrect and should be 'only focuses'. 'positive Lee effective' is a misspelling of 'positively effective'. Proper placement of adverbs and correction of spelling improves clarity.