Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 「Yes」と直接答えた後に、具体的な記憶の例を1つ加えると、内容がより効果的になります。「I'm a person super organized」は不自然なので、「I'm a very organised person」と言いましょう。また、「so far till now」「as long as」が繰り返されており、文の意味が不明確です。責任感について述べる場合は、「I remember things well when I am responsible for them」のように簡潔に表現してください。

Example: Yes, I’m quite good at memorising things because I’m a very organised person. I usually remember tasks and appointments easily, especially when I’m responsible for them. I also write down important information to make sure I don’t forget anything.

Suggestion: 回答の方向性は明確ですが、「I’m a person really self disciplined」は「I’m very self-disciplined」に、「others feeling」は「other people’s feelings」に直してください。最後の部分は意味が伝わりにくく、文法的にも不自然です。重要なものを忘れたことがないと答える場合でも、完全に忘れた経験がないというより、「大きな問題になるようなものは忘れたことがない」と表現すると、より自然で信頼性のある回答になります。

Example: I don’t think I’ve ever forgotten anything seriously important. I’m quite self-disciplined, so I usually keep track of my responsibilities and appointments. I may occasionally forget small things, but I try to deal with them before they become a problem.

Suggestion: 質問には答えられていますが、「memorize about my work tasks」は「remember my work tasks」または「keep track of my work tasks」が自然です。「deadline there」「by by by a prior to the deadline」は不明瞭なので、「finish everything before the deadline」と簡潔に言いましょう。仕事と勉強について、具体的な例や管理方法を1つ加えると、内容と語彙の評価が上がります。

Example: In my daily life, I need to remember my work tasks and my study schedule. I often have several deadlines, so I make a to-do list and check it every morning. This helps me complete each task in the right order and avoid rushing at the last minute.

Suggestion: 「It’s like a talent」という主張の後に、実際の方法を明確に説明する必要があります。「naturally growing my head」は意味が通らないため、「the information stays in my mind naturally」などに直してください。また、「remainder」は「reminder」の誤りです。携帯電話のリマインダーやメモなど、具体的な方法を使っていることを、対比のリンク語「However」や「If necessary」で整理して述べましょう。

Example: I can remember some important things quite naturally, especially if I use them regularly. However, when I have a busy schedule, I set reminders on my phone and write important tasks in my notebook. These methods help me remember appointments and deadlines.

× Yes, I'm a person super organized and I really keep everything in mind as long as it's related to me.

✓ Yes, I'm a super-organized person, and I really keep everything in mind as long as it's related to me.

In English, adjectives normally come before the noun they describe. Use super-organized person, not person super organized.

× And so far till now I can remember everything as long as I need to help out or I need to be responsible for.

✓ So far, I can remember everything whenever I need to help out or be responsible for something.

The original sentence has an incomplete structure because be responsible for needs an object. The repeated phrase so far till now is also unnecessarily repetitive. Use whenever to introduce the situation and add something after the preposition for.

× I think it's type of the quality that everyone should maintain.

✓ I think it's the type of quality that everyone should maintain.

The noun phrase type needs the definite article the because it refers to a specific type. The word quality is used generally here, so the is not needed before quality.

× No, I haven't forgotten anything important because I'm a person really self disciplined.

✓ No, I haven't forgotten anything important because I'm a really self-disciplined person.

The adjective phrase must come before the noun in this structure. Use really self-disciplined person, not person really self disciplined. Self-disciplined is normally written with a hyphen.

× I do care about others feeling and also myself feeling.

✓ I do care about other people's feelings and my own feelings.

Feelings should be plural because the speaker is referring to emotions in general. Other people's is the correct plural possessive form, and my own feelings is the correct possessive phrase.

× I do care about others feeling and also myself feeling.

✓ I do care about other people's feelings and my own feelings.

Myself is a reflexive pronoun and cannot be used as a normal possessive determiner in this sentence. Use my own to emphasize that the feelings belong to the speaker.

× If I did something that's let this type the album feel super pure.

✓ If I do something that lets other people feel comfortable, I feel good about it.

The original sentence does not form a clear grammatical sentence. The conditional clause needs a main clause, and the verb let must be followed by an object and a base verb, as in lets other people feel.

× Most of the time I need to memorize about my work tasks and my study progress because I always have a deadline there.

✓ Most of the time, I need to memorize my work tasks and keep track of my study progress because I always have deadlines to meet.

Memorize is a transitive verb and does not need the preposition about before its object. Keep track of is a more grammatically suitable structure for progress. The preposition to is used in the phrase deadlines to meet.

× I need to make sure by by by a prior to the deadline.

✓ I need to make sure that everything is completed before the deadline.

Before is the correct preposition for referring to a time earlier than a deadline. The original phrase contains several incorrect and repeated prepositions. Make sure that should be followed by a complete clause.

× Everything was happening in a correct order.

✓ Everything happens in the correct order.

The question asks about a regular part of daily life, so the present simple is appropriate. Use happens rather than the past continuous was happening. The definite article the is used because the order is specific.

× Everything was happening in a correct order.

✓ Everything happens in the correct order.

Use the definite article the because the sentence refers to a particular order in which the tasks are completed. A correct order suggests one of several possible orders and is less appropriate here.

× I think it's something for me it's like a talent.

✓ I think it's like a talent for me.

The original sentence contains two clauses joined incorrectly. Use one clear structure, such as It's like a talent for me, or For me, it's a kind of talent.

× I don't need to carefully remember everything but it's just naturally growing my head.

✓ I don't need to remember everything carefully because it is naturally stored in my head.

The meaning requires a passive structure because the information is stored in the speaker's head. Use is stored, not is growing. The adverb carefully is placed after the object for a more natural sentence.

× I don't need to carefully remember everything.

✓ I don't need to remember everything carefully.

With this verb phrase, the adverb carefully is more naturally placed after the object everything. This position makes the sentence clearer and avoids interrupting the verb phrase.

× Even though sometimes maybe I'm really too many in touch in hand I will set up the remainder for myself and it's also easy to grasp.

✓ Even though sometimes I have too many things on my mind, I set a reminder for myself, and the information is easy to remember.

Too many must modify a plural countable noun, such as things. The original phrase too many is incomplete. Use too many things on my mind to describe having a large amount of information to remember.

× Even though sometimes maybe I'm really too many in touch in hand I will set up the remainder for myself and it's also easy to grasp.

✓ Even though sometimes I have too many things on my mind, I set a reminder for myself, and the information is easy to remember.

The natural preposition in the expression is on, as in things on my mind. In touch in hand is not a correct prepositional phrase for this meaning.