Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more natural and grammatically correct, keep answer concise (max 5 sentences), and add a brief reason with linking words. Avoid filler sounds like 'uh' and correct verb forms (e.g., 'that makes me' → 'which makes me').

Example: No, I'm not very good at memorising things, which is why I don't enjoy subjects like biology. Instead, I prefer studying subjects that focus on understanding concepts because I find them more engaging and longer-lasting.

Suggestion: Organise the answer with a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words (for example, 'for instance' or 'so') and correct tense and countable/uncountable forms (information, ID card). Avoid trailing off at the end.

Example: Yes, I have. For instance, I once forgot my ID card when I was going to the airport, so I had to return home to pick it up. That experience taught me to double-check my documents before I leave.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence stating what you need to remember, then give specific examples and use linking words like 'for example' or 'also'. Correct awkward phrasing (e.g., 'I am a student' and 'I have important meetings'). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Example: As a student, I need to remember my schedule and any meetings or appointments. For example, I often have group meetings with classmates or meetings with teachers, so I check the agenda beforehand to prepare. I also set reminders on my phone to avoid missing anything.

Suggestion: Provide a clear topic sentence explaining your method, then add a brief reason or example. Use correct phrasing ('store them on my phone' or 'set reminders') and avoid repetition. Include linking words like 'so' or 'for example'.

Example: I usually store important information on my phone and set calendar reminders so I don't forget important dates. For example, I add exam dates and meeting times to my calendar and enable alarms a day before and an hour before.

× Honestly, I'm not good at it at all, so that make me don't like studying biology.

✓ Honestly, I'm not good at it at all, so that makes me not like studying biology.

The subject 'that' (referring to being bad at memorising) is singular, so the verb must be 'makes' (third person singular) — this is a subject-verb agreement error (ID 27). Also the construction 'don't like' is incorrect after 'makes me'; use 'makes me not like' or 'makes me dislike.' Suggestion: use 'that makes me not like studying biology' or 'that makes me dislike studying biology.'

× I would prefer studying things that require uh concepts, not memorizations.

✓ I would prefer studying things that require concepts, not memorization.

The noun 'concepts' is fine but 'memorizations' is an unidiomatic plural. Use the uncountable noun 'memorization.' This fits plural/singular and word-form issues (ID 1). Suggestion: use 'memorization' or 'memorising a lot of facts.'

× Yeah, sometimes I forgot like in some important, uh, informations or important things like ID cards when I'm going to airport, then I have to come back home, pick it up and.

✓ Yeah, sometimes I forget important information or things like ID cards when I'm going to the airport, and then I have to go back home to pick them up.

The student mixed past and present tenses and used incorrect plural and article forms. Use present simple 'forget' for habitual actions (ID 6 and ID 5). 'Informations' is incorrect; 'information' is uncountable. 'Going to airport' needs the definite article 'the airport' (Article error ID 22 / Incorrect use of prepositions ID 11). 'Pick it up and.' was incomplete; make a full clause 'pick them up.' Suggestions: use present simple for habitual actions, use 'information' (uncountable), include 'the' before 'airport,' and ensure complete clauses.

× Since now I'm studying as a student in on weekdays I always have like important meeting with my friends or teachers.

✓ At the moment I'm studying, and on weekdays I always have important meetings with my friends or teachers.

The original has misplaced prepositions 'in on weekdays' and missing articles and plural agreement. Use 'at the moment' or 'right now' for current time and 'on weekdays' for habitual time (ID 11). Also 'important meeting' should be plural 'important meetings.' Suggestion: restructure to 'At the moment I'm studying, and on weekdays I always have important meetings with my friends or teachers.'

× So I have to remember like what is the agenda of today?

✓ So I have to remember what the agenda for today is.

Embedded question word order must use statement order after verbs like 'remember.' Using 'what is the agenda of today?' keeps question order incorrectly inside a statement — this is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Also 'agenda for today' is more natural than 'agenda of today.' Suggestion: use 'remember what the agenda for today is.'

× Actually I forgot like the important things often, so I have to load it on my phone to so that I can keep the right information like the important dates.

✓ Actually I often forget important things, so I have to put them in my phone so that I can keep the correct information, like important dates.

Use present simple 'forget' for habitual actions rather than past 'forgot' (ID 6). 'Load it on my phone' is awkward and uses singular 'it' for plural 'things' — change to 'put them in my phone.' Remove extra 'to.' Use 'correct' or 'accurate' information rather than 'right' in this context. Suggestion: use 'I often forget important things, so I put them in my phone to keep accurate information such as important dates.'