Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“you find learning English vocabulary list”不符合英语表达习惯。建议简化句子结构，使用更自然的表达方式，并注意时态和单复数的正确使用。

Example: I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, when I learn English vocabulary, I have to repeat the words more than ten times to remember most of them. However, I can't recall many special events from my early childhood.

Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“with my husband brothers birthday”和“feel so tech”不符合英语习惯。建议使用正确的句子结构，清楚表达忘记的事情，并避免拼写错误。

Example: Yes, definitely. Recently, I forgot my husband's brother's birthday. I usually wish him happy birthday at midnight, but this time I completely forgot until 10 PM. I felt very bad about it.

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和重复表达，如“every each day”和“are detailed are in details”。建议简化句子，使用准确的词汇，并避免重复。

Example: My daily memory tasks are mostly related to my work. As a trader, I make hundreds of trades every day, so I need to remember prices, counterparties, and the notional amounts carefully.

Suggestion: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不流畅，如“make it remember in my icalendar”和“rely on solely on my memory is specially”。建议学习正确的表达方式，注意句子结构和词序。

Example: If I need to remember something important, I usually write it down in a note or add it to my iCalendar. I can't rely solely on my memory, especially when I have many tasks and deadlines to meet.

× For example, you find learning English vocabulary list.

✓ For example, you find learning English vocabulary lists.

这里的 "vocabulary list" 应该用复数形式 "vocabulary lists"，因为通常学习的是多个单词表，而不是单个。

× But I can't remember something happened really early in my childhood, which are special to me.

✓ But I can't remember something that happened really early in my childhood, which is special to me.

句中缺少关系代词 "that"，且 "something" 是单数，后面的谓语动词应使用单数形式 "is"。

× The most recent time that I forgot something important with my husband brothers birthday.

✓ The most recent time that I forgot something important was my husband's brother's birthday.

句子缺少谓语动词 "was"，且 "husband brothers birthday" 应为所有格形式 "husband's brother's birthday"。

× And I never missed it, but this time I've completely forgot until 10:00 PM.

✓ And I never missed it, but this time I've completely forgotten until 10:00 PM.

"forgot" 是一般过去时，句中应使用过去分词 "forgotten" 与完成时态 "have" 搭配。

× I feel so tech.

✓ I feel so terrible.

"tech" 不是正确的形容词，应该用表达感受的形容词 "terrible"。

× I do hundreds of trades every each day.

✓ I do hundreds of trades every day.

"every each day" 是错误的重复表达，应只用 "every day"。

× So I need to remember all the price, counterparty and the notional amount.

✓ So I need to remember all the prices, counterparties, and the notional amounts.

名词应使用复数形式，且 "counterparty" 复数为 "counterparties"，以匹配上下文。

× Yeah, all the factors are detailed are in details.

✓ Yeah, all the factors are detailed and in detail.

"are detailed are in details" 结构重复且错误，应改为 "are detailed and in detail"。

× If I know something is important for me to remember, I usually write it down as a note or make it remember in my icalendar.

✓ If I know something is important for me to remember, I usually write it down as a note or make a reminder in my iCalendar.

"make it remember" 用法错误，应改为 "make a reminder"，且 "iCalendar" 拼写规范。

× Because I can't rely on solely on my memory is specially when they are many tasks for me to complete word deadlines for me to catch up.

✓ Because I can't rely solely on my memory, especially when there are many tasks for me to complete with deadlines to catch up.

句中 "rely on solely on" 重复介词，应去掉一个 "on"；"specially" 应为 "especially"；"they are" 应为 "there are"；"word deadlines" 应为 "with deadlines"。