Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more fluent, concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. “We have four distinct seasons.”), avoid filler words, and complete the thought. Add one specific detail about a season using a linking word. Keep it to 1–3 sentences.

Example: We have four distinct seasons where I live. For example, summers are quite hot, while winters are often very cold.

Suggestion: Give a direct opinion first, then a clear reason with correct vocabulary and linking words. Avoid repetition and filler. Use 2–3 concise sentences and correct collocations (e.g. “sensitive to heat”, “feel faint” or “feel exhausted”).

Example: I prefer cold weather to hot weather because I am sensitive to heat. When it's very hot, I often feel faint and exhausted, so I avoid it when possible.

Suggestion: Answer directly and use correct comparative structure (“prefer X to Y”). Give a clear reason with accurate vocabulary (e.g. “my skin stays more hydrated in humid weather”). Avoid fragments and fillers; use 1–2 clear sentences.

Example: I prefer wet weather to dry weather because humid air keeps my skin more hydrated. In contrast, dry weather often makes my skin flaky and uncomfortable.

Suggestion: Respond with a clear tense and frequency adverb. Say when and how often using natural phrases (e.g. “I usually check the forecast every morning before I leave for work”). Reduce filler words and give one brief reason.

Example: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before I leave for work because I walk to work and need to know if I should bring an umbrella.

Suggestion: Start with a clear statement about climate change, then give a specific observable effect and an example. Use correct tense and avoid hesitation. Keep to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like “for example” or “so”.

Example: I think climate change has made temperatures higher in recent years. For example, when I was younger I could walk outside without shade, but now I often need an umbrella or hat because it gets so hot.

Suggestion: Give a clear yes/no, then a reason and a brief detail about when or where you would go. Use correct prepositions (e.g. “sensitive to heat”) and avoid fillers. Keep it to 2 sentences.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit cities with cooler climates because I am sensitive to heat. For example, I hope to visit a mountain town in summer to enjoy cooler temperatures and outdoor walks.

× Uh, uh, in my place we have Four Seasons.

✓ In my place we have four seasons.

Use lowercase for common nouns and no article needed before 'four seasons' when stating a general fact. Also avoid filler words 'Uh, uh'.

× So, umm, the, umm, in summer is really hotter and in winter is really cold and.

✓ In summer it is really hot, and in winter it is really cold.

The original sentence lacks a clear subject and verb order. Use 'it is' for weather descriptions and correct adjectives ('hot' not 'hotter' when making a simple statement). Remove trailing 'and'.

× I prefer cold rather than hot weather because I'm really sensitive of the hot weather.

✓ I prefer cold rather than hot weather because I'm really sensitive to hot weather.

Use 'sensitive to' not 'sensitive of'. Also omit the definite article before a general noun 'hot weather'.

× When I try to walk on the in the hot weather, I'm Sometimes I'm fused out, yeah, feeling fused out.

✓ When I try to walk in hot weather, sometimes I feel exhausted.

Use 'in hot weather' not 'on the in the'. 'Sometimes' should be lowercase and placed before the verb. 'Fused out' is incorrect; use 'feel exhausted' or 'get tired'. Remove repeated 'I'm'.

× I prefer wet weather than dry to dry because wet weather makes my body wet.

✓ I prefer wet weather to dry weather because wet weather makes my body damp.

Use the construction 'prefer A to B' not 'prefer A than B'. 'Damp' is a better adjective than repeating 'wet' for the body. Include 'weather' after 'dry' for clarity.

× Umm while I can. My skin is really humidity and more better than dry weather.

✓ My skin becomes very humid and is better in wet weather than in dry weather.

Do not use 'humidity' to describe skin; use 'humid' or 'moist'. 'More better' is incorrect — use 'better'. Combine fragments into one sentence and include comparison 'than in dry weather'.

× I already checked the weather forecast, uh, especially before, uh, leaving my house because I always walked.

✓ I always check the weather forecast, especially before leaving my house because I often walk to work.

Use present simple 'check' for habitual actions, not past 'checked' when describing a habitual behavior. 'Always walked' is incorrect tense and missing object; 'walk to work' clarifies meaning.

× So it is important to check the, uh, weather.

✓ So it is important to check the weather.

Remove filler and unnecessary commas. Sentence structure is fine after removing disfluencies.

× Umm, I think I can feel more, uh, hotter than the past because when I, uh, was younger, I, I, I can't, I could walk without the, the umbrella, but these days I can't, I can't without the.

✓ I feel hotter than in the past because when I was younger I could walk without an umbrella, but these days I cannot.

Use 'feel hotter than in the past' for comparison. 'Was younger' and 'could' are correct for past ability. Avoid mixing 'can't' with past; use 'cannot' or 'can't' consistently for present inability. Include 'an umbrella' and finish the idea.

× Yes, I want because I'm really sensitive of the hot weather, so usually I hope to visit the cool weather in summer.

✓ Yes, I do because I'm really sensitive to hot weather, so I usually hope to visit a place with cool weather in summer.

Use 'sensitive to' not 'sensitive of'. 'I want' is incomplete — use 'I do' or 'I want to' and specify 'visit a place with cool weather' for clarity. 'Hope to visit the cool weather' is ungrammatical.