Flowers— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve grammar, sentence structure and clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence (yes/no), then give one or two concise reasons using correct tense and subject-verb agreement. Avoid redundancy and keep within 3–4 short sentences. Use linking words (however, but, so) correctly.

Example: No, I don't really like keeping flowers because they need a lot of care and time. However, I sometimes buy bouquets for my girlfriend to make her happy when I want to surprise her.

Suggestion: Make the answer clear and natural. Give a direct topic sentence, then support with a specific reason. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., 'water them', 'tend to care for') and simpler sentences to avoid confusion.

Example: Not really — most of my friends are men and they don't like looking after plants. They say watering and caring for flowers takes too much time, so they prefer low-maintenance hobbies.

Suggestion: Answer directly and fix grammar and word order. Use one topic sentence and one supporting detail with correct prepositions. Mention specific locations and who looks after them.

Example: Yes, there are many flowers just below my apartment on the university grounds. The campus gardeners take very good care of them, so the flowerbeds always look neat and colourful.

Suggestion: Clarify meaning and correct vocabulary (e.g., 'unusual' instead of 'stringship'). Use linking words to explain preference and give a specific example. Keep sentences concise and grammatically correct.

Example: Yes, I often photograph unusual flowers rather than ordinary ones because common flowers are everywhere on campus. I like capturing flowers with interesting shapes or insects on them because they make more unique photos.

Suggestion: Organize your answer with a clear topic sentence, then give 2 specific examples. Correct vocabulary and collocations (e.g., 'express love', 'Valentine's Day', 'Mother's Day', 'prices rise'). Avoid repetition.

Example: Yes, people often send flowers to express love or appreciation. For example, many give roses on Valentine's Day, and I usually send flowers to my mother on Mother's Day, when prices tend to be higher.

× No, I don't like flowers because it need too much time to take care of them, but sometimes I also will buy some rules for my girlfriend and she he will be more pleased after received my gift.

✓ No, I don't like flowers because they need too much time to take care of, but sometimes I also buy some roses for my girlfriend and she is more pleased after receiving my gift.

Errors: subject-verb agreement and plural ('it need' should be 'they need') = Present tense/subject-verb agreement; incorrect noun 'rules' should be 'roses'; unnecessary modal 'will' for habitual action replaced with simple present; pronoun confusion 'she he' corrected to 'she'; wrong verb form 'received' should be gerund 'receiving'. Suggestion: ensure subject and verb agree in number, use correct vocabulary, use simple present for habitual actions, and use gerund after verbs like 'after'. ID:6

× No, most of my friends are boys. They are unwilling to keep some flower because water watering will spend most of their spray time and their unlocked tenderly to grow flowers.

✓ No, most of my friends are boys. They are unwilling to keep flowers because watering them takes most of their spare time and they lack the patience to grow flowers.

Errors: 'some flower' should be plural 'flowers' (singular/plural issue); awkward phrase 'water watering' should be 'watering them'; 'will spend most of their spray time' incorrect word choice and tense—use 'takes most of their spare time'; 'their unlocked tenderly' is incorrect—intended meaning 'they lack the patience'. Suggestion: use correct plural forms, choose appropriate nouns and verbs for common phrases (e.g., 'watering takes time', 'spare time'), and express inability with 'lack the patience'. ID:1

× Yeah, there are many flowers just downstairs my apartment and they are taking care by the gardeners in my university is very well.

✓ Yes, there are many flowers just downstairs from my apartment and they are very well taken care of by the gardeners at my university.

Errors: missing preposition 'downstairs from my apartment'; passive voice formation incorrect: 'they are taking care by' should be 'taken care of by'; extra clause 'is very well' moved into 'very well taken care of'; incorrect preposition 'in my university' corrected to 'at my university'. Suggestion: use correct prepositions for locations, form passive with 'be + past participle + by', and place adverbs appropriately. ID:3

× Yes, I always take photos of stringship flowers rather than the beautiful flower because the beautiful flowers is too common in my university.

✓ Yes, I always take photos of strange flowers rather than beautiful flowers because beautiful flowers are too common at my university.

Errors: 'stringship' is incorrect word—use 'strange'; inconsistent pluralization 'flower' vs 'flowers' and subject-verb agreement 'flowers is' should be 'flowers are'; unnecessary article 'the' before adjectives used generically. Suggestion: use correct vocabulary, keep noun number consistent, and ensure verb agrees with plural subjects. ID:8

× You can you can see that anywhere but the flowers with strange bees vary so I'm interested in take photos of.

✓ You can see them anywhere, but flowers with strange bees are rare, so I'm interested in taking photos of them.

Errors: repeated 'you can you can'; pronoun reference improved ('them'); 'vary' used incorrectly—intended 'rare'; 'interested in take photos of' requires gerund: 'interested in taking photos of'. Suggestion: avoid repetition, use correct adjectives ('rare'), and use gerund after 'interested in'. ID:10

× Yeah, as many people send flowers to others in order to express their emotion of love to others, such as many people send rose to girlfriend in the lovers day, and I always send two days to my mother in Mother's Day, and the price of flowers in this day will be higher.

✓ Yes, many people send flowers to others to express love; for example, many people send roses to their girlfriends on Valentine's Day. I always send flowers to my mother on Mother's Day, and the price of flowers on that day is higher.

Errors: awkward phrasing 'as many people' and repetition of 'to others'; 'emotion of love' simplified to 'love'; 'send rose to girlfriend' should be 'send roses to their girlfriends' (plural and possessive); 'in the lovers day' corrected to 'on Valentine's Day'; 'I always send two days to my mother' unclear—corrected to 'send flowers to my mother'; tense and modal: 'will be higher' changed to present 'is higher' when stating general fact. Suggestion: use idiomatic expressions ('express love', 'on Valentine's Day'), correct plural nouns and possessives, and use simple present for habitual facts. ID:6