Flowers— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Reduce repetition, use a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting reasons. Correct minor grammar (say "real" instead of "original") and avoid trailing fragments. Use linking words for clarity.

Example: Yes, I love flowers, but I prefer real ones rather than artificial ones. For example, I enjoy their natural fragrance and delicate appearance, which artificial flowers cannot reproduce.

Suggestion: Start with a direct sentence, avoid repetitions, and explain clearly why your mother likes flowers with specific details. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct verb agreement.

Example: Yes, my mother loves flowers. She especially appreciates their fragrance and beauty, and she often arranges fresh blooms at home because they make her feel peaceful and happy.

Suggestion: Give a concise direct answer, then add specific supporting details. Avoid hesitations and repeated words; use linking words (however, but, because) and correct articles and plurals.

Example: Not many. Where I live there aren’t many flower beds, but there is a nearby park with some flowering plants. However, the park doesn't have the roses and lilies I like most.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence and one or two precise reasons. Reduce repetitions and use natural phrasing (e.g., "catch my eye"). Use linking words like "but" or "however" appropriately.

Example: Not every day, but I do take photos of flowers when I see vibrant or unusual blooms. For instance, if a flower catches my eye because of its color or shape, I usually take a quick picture.

Suggestion: Answer directly, avoid filler words (uh, um), and give specific occasions with correct tense and plural forms. Use linking words to list examples (for example, such as) and make sentences concise.

Example: Yes, people in my country often give flowers on special occasions. For example, my husband gives me flowers on my birthday and our anniversary, and sometimes he surprises me with them on ordinary days as well.

× Yes, my mother also love flowers because she she loves the fragrance and when we when she she is for me like a flower. Yeah, so she loves flower.

✓ Yes, my mother also loves flowers because she loves the fragrance, and to me she is like a flower. So she loves flowers.

The subject 'my mother' is singular and requires the third person singular verb form 'loves' (ID 2). Repeated words 'she she' are disfluencies and were removed. 'She is for me like a flower' is awkward; corrected to 'to me she is like a flower' for natural word order. Also 'she loves flower' needed plural 'flowers' to match general sense (singular/plural agreement). Suggestions: Use 'loves' with he/she/it, avoid repeated words, and use plural 'flowers' when speaking generally.

× No, where I am living there is no flowers and there is a there is a park which has some plants, some flower plants but but the which flowers I like the Rose and the Lily. There is no Lily and rose plants.

✓ No, where I live there are no flowers. There is a park which has some plants and some flowering plants, but the flowers I like are the rose and the lily. There are no lily or rose plants.

Several pluralization and agreement errors (ID 1). 'Where I am living there is no flowers' should be 'there are no flowers' because 'flowers' is plural and requires 'are'. Use simple present 'where I live' for habitual location. 'Some flower plants' is changed to 'some flowering plants' for natural phrasing. 'Which flowers I like the Rose and the Lily' needed subject-verb inversion and capitalization corrected; changed to 'the flowers I like are the rose and the lily.' Final sentence corrected to 'There are no lily or rose plants' for plural agreement. Suggestions: Match 'be' verb to plural nouns (are for plural), use consistent capitalization and natural adjective forms ('flowering plants').

× Not on a daily basis I click photos but when I see the vibrant flower and the flower the flower was eye catches. So yes I click the picture of the flower.

✓ Not on a daily basis do I take photos, but when I see a vibrant flower that catches my eye, I do take its picture.

Errors involve verb forms and participles (ID 8). 'I click photos' is informal; 'take photos' is more natural. The clause 'the flower was eye catches' is ungrammatical; correct form is 'that catches my eye' using a relative clause with present tense. Also inverted auxiliary 'do I take' for negative fronting. Suggestions: Use 'take photos' and 'catch my eye' idiomatically, and form relative clauses with 'that' + present verb.

× Yes I I do love flowers, but only original flowers, not artificial flowers like rose and Lily and. It's.

✓ Yes, I do love flowers, but only natural flowers, not artificial ones like roses and lilies.

Present simple tense is appropriate, but errors include repetition 'I I', awkward word 'original' (use 'natural'), incorrect noun forms 'rose and Lily' need plurals 'roses and lilies', and trailing fragments 'and. It's.' which were removed (ID 6). Suggestions: Avoid word repetition, choose correct adjectives ('natural' or 'real'), and pluralize common nouns when speaking generally.

× Yes, uh, people do in my country, uh, also my husband, uh, do for me. Uh, they, uh, they, they took flower for me, uh, on my birthday, anniversaries and uh, umm, on random days also they uh, gave me flowers.

✓ Yes, people in my country do. Also my husband does for me; he has given me flowers on my birthday, our anniversaries, and on random days.

Pronoun and verb agreement issues (ID 12). 'My husband, do for me' should be 'my husband does for me' (third person singular). The sentence used 'they' ambiguously; replaced with 'he' to refer to husband. Tense consistency: changed 'took flower for me' to present perfect 'has given me flowers' to indicate past actions relevant now. Pluralized 'anniversaries' appropriately and added possessive 'our' for clarity. Suggestions: Ensure pronouns match their antecedents and keep subject-verb agreement; use consistent tense for related actions.