Flowers— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cevap kısa ve doğrudan olsa da dilbilgisi ve ifade hataları var. ‘I have no actual interest to flowers’ yerine ‘I’m not really interested in flowers’ demelisiniz. Gereksiz dolgu kelimeler (‘uh’) azaltılmalı. İkinci cümlede ‘they really smell like bed’ ifadesi anlamsız; muhtemelen ‘they smell lovely’ demek istediniz. Cümle yapısını düzeltip bağlaç kullanarak akışı iyileştirin (ör. ‘However, I enjoy the flowers my mother keeps at home because they smell lovely.’).

Example: I'm not really interested in flowers. However, I enjoy the flowers my mother keeps at home because they smell lovely.

Suggestion: Cümleler karışık ve tekrarlı, dilbilgisi hataları mevcut (‘my mom really love’ → ‘my mom really loves’). Gereksiz tekrarları ve uzun yan cümleleri sadeleştirerek net bir konu cümlesi kurun. Bağlaçlarla mantığı netleştirin (ör. ‘When she went to Italy, she asked us to take care of them, which shows how much she cares.’).

Example: Yes. My mother really loves flowers. When she went to Italy, she asked us to take care of her plants, which shows how much she cares about them.

Suggestion: Cevap mantıklı ama karışık ve bazı ifadeler yanlış (‘not so much flowers’ → ‘not many flowers’; ‘known for athletic’ belirsiz). Konuyu doğrudan ifade eden bir topic sentence kurun, sonra kısa destekleyici cümleler verin. Örneğin şehir hakkında kısa açıklama ve evdeki durumu ayrı cümlelerle söyleyin.

Example: It depends on where I live. In my city there are not many flowers because it is more urban, but at home my mother grows several plants and flowers.

Suggestion: Cümleler dilbilgisi ve kelime seçimi açısından zayıf (ör. ‘flowers is not evoke my insights’ yanlış). Doğrudan cevap verin, sonra kısa gerekçe ve bir istisna belirtin. Basit ve doğru ifadeler kullanın (ör. ‘They don't really interest me, although I would photograph roses if I found them romantic.’).

Example: No, I usually take photos of myself rather than flowers because they don't interest me much. However, I would photograph a rose if I thought it looked especially romantic.

Suggestion: Cevap alakasız ve belirsiz; sınav sorusuna doğrudan yanıt vermelisiniz. Genel bir gözlem verin ve birkaç örnek ekleyin. Dilbilgisini düzeltin ve gereksiz ifadeleri çıkarın (ör. ‘People in my country often send flowers for weddings, funerals and anniversaries.’).

Example: Yes, people in my country often send flowers for special occasions such as weddings, funerals and anniversaries. It is a common way to show respect or affection.

× I have no actual interest to flowers because I don't have uh flowers in my house, but my mom has and I really enjoyed her flowers because they really, uh, smells like bed.

✓ I have no real interest in flowers because I don't have any flowers in my house, but my mom does and I really enjoy her flowers because they really smell like perfume.

'Interest in' is the correct prepositional phrase, not 'interest to'. Use 'real' instead of 'actual' for natural phrasing. 'Any' is used with negative sentences for countable nouns. 'Mom does' replaces 'mom has' to avoid repetition and 'enjoy' should be present tense to match habitual or current enjoyment. 'Smell' must agree with plural subject 'they' so use base form. 'like bed' is incorrect metaphor; 'like perfume' or similar is appropriate. Suggestions: learn common verb-preposition collocations (interest in, depend on), use 'any' in negatives, ensure subject-verb agreement.'},{

× Yes, my mom really love flowers and also my mom went to Italy, even if she went to Italy which is important to her, she said to us take care of my flowers and this is explains her interests to her flowers I think.

✓ Yes, my mom really loves flowers and she went to Italy; because going to Italy was important to her, she told us 'take care of my flowers', which shows her interest in them, I think.

Use 'loves' for third person singular present. 'She went to Italy' is fine, but use clearer connectors: 'because' or 'since'. Change 'she said to us take care of my flowers' to reported speech or a quoted imperative. 'This explains her interests to her flowers' should be 'shows her interest in them'. Suggestions: ensure verb forms agree with subjects, and use 'interest in' and correct reporting verbs.

× It depends on the city I live or the house I live. In my house there are some flowers my mom grows, but in my city there are not so much flowers. My city is known for athletic actually, but in my house.

✓ It depends on the city I live in or the house I live in. In my house there are some flowers my mom grows, but in my city there are not many flowers. My city is actually known for sports, but not for flowers.

Use 'live in' (preposition). 'Not so much' is unnatural with countable plural 'flowers'; use 'not many'. 'Known for athletic' is incorrect word form; use 'known for sports' or 'athletics'. Suggestions: match quantifiers to countable/uncountable nouns ('many' with countable), and remember required prepositions after 'live'.

× No, I actually take photos of myself instead of taking photos of flowers because flowers is not evoke my insights and meaning like they're just flowers. But if I found romantic I choose rose for.

✓ No, I actually take photos of myself instead of taking photos of flowers because flowers do not evoke my interest or feelings; they're just flowers. But if I find them romantic, I choose roses.

'Evoke' requires plural agreement with 'flowers' so 'flowers do not evoke'. 'Insights and meaning' is awkward; use 'interest or feelings'. 'Found' should be present 'find' to match general preference. 'Choose rose for' is incorrect; use 'choose roses' or 'choose a rose'. Suggestions: ensure subject-verb agreement and use correct verb forms for habitual statements; select appropriate nouns for meaning (interest/feelings).

× This is not a question about my country. Actually this is so personal in my opinion because if they are lawyers or they are friends and they have a low insights, uh, they want to sense their lover or friends a flowers and this is normal.

✓ This is not a question about my country. Actually, this is very personal in my opinion, because if they are lovers or friends and they have low empathy, they want to send flowers to their loved ones or friends, and this is normal.

'They are lawyers' is likely incorrect context; 'lovers' fits better for sending flowers. 'Low insights' is unidiomatic; 'low empathy' or 'little affection' conveys meaning. 'Want to sense their lover or friends a flowers' has multiple pronoun and word-order errors; correct is 'send flowers to their loved ones or friends'. Suggestions: choose correct pronouns and collocations ('send flowers to someone'), and use appropriate nouns for intended meaning.