Name— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 先直接回答，再简要解释原因。注意所有格和词形：用“other people's names”，而不是“others people named”；“记忆力好”可说“have a good memory”；“一两次”说“once or twice”；情态动词后用动词原形“call”。避免把多个想法塞进一个句子，可用“because”连接原因。

Example: No, I’m not very good at remembering people’s names. I don’t have a particularly good memory, so if I’ve only met someone once or twice, I may struggle to remember their name.

Suggestion: 说明你具体采用的方法，并补充它为什么有效。“尽力记住”可说“make an effort to remember”；“对我很重要”应说“important to me”；“记录我的记忆”不自然，可改为“so I can check it later”。注意使用“people’s names”表达复数所有格。

Example: I try to make an effort to remember people’s names, especially when I know I’ll see them again. If someone is important to me, I write their name in my phone so I can check it later.

Suggestion: 回答中有些矛盾：先说“不介意”，又说“感到尴尬”，可以说明虽然不介意，但偶尔会有一点尴尬。注意用“whether people remember my name or not”；“尴尬”是形容词“embarrassed”；“对方的名字”可说“the other person’s name”。删除重复部分，并用“because”说明原因。

Example: I don’t take it personally, but I do feel a little embarrassed sometimes. It can be awkward when we’ve met before but the other person can’t remember my name.

Suggestion: “It depends on the situation”是合适的开头；接下来要清楚对比熟人和只见过一两次的人。可说“people I’ve met several times”和“people I’ve only met once or twice”。注意将来时结构“will forget”，以及用“their name”避免性别不明时使用“her”或“its”。

Example: It depends on how often I see them. I can usually remember the names of people I’ve met several times, especially if they’re familiar to me. However, I often forget the names of people I’ve only met once or twice.

× No, it's not easy for me to remember others people named because I am not kind of the person have the good memories when I meet the people one or twice a time, I cannot called his name.

✓ No, it's not easy for me to remember other people's names because I'm not the kind of person who has a good memory. When I meet people once or twice, I can't recall their names.

“others people”应改为“other people's”，“other”修饰名词，“people's”表示“人们的”；指代不明性别的人时，用“their”比“his”合适。

× No, it's not easy for me to remember others people named because I am not kind of the person have the good memories when I meet the people one or twice a time, I cannot called his name.

✓ No, it's not easy for me to remember other people's names because I'm not the kind of person who has a good memory. When I meet people once or twice, I can't recall their names.

这里谈论的是许多人的名字，因此应使用复数“names”。“a good memory”表示“记性好”，用单数形式；“memory”在这里是可数名词。

× No, it's not easy for me to remember others people named because I am not kind of the person have the good memories when I meet the people one or twice a time, I cannot called his name.

✓ No, it's not easy for me to remember other people's names because I'm not the kind of person who has a good memory. When I meet people once or twice, I can't recall their names.

“the person have...”缺少连接主句和从句的关系代词，应改为“the person who has...”。原句还用逗号连接了多个完整意思，结构不清晰；建议拆成较短的句子。

× No, it's not easy for me to remember others people named because I am not kind of the person have the good memories when I meet the people one or twice a time, I cannot called his name.

✓ No, it's not easy for me to remember other people's names because I'm not the kind of person who has a good memory. When I meet people once or twice, I can't recall their names.

情态动词“can”后面必须接动词原形，所以“cannot called”应改为“cannot call”。

× I don't try my heart to remember other people named, but if the person is very important for me, I usually write down the name on my smartphone. It can record my memory.

✓ I don't try my heart to remember other people's names, but if the person is very important to me, I usually write down the name on my smartphone. It can record my memory.

这里指许多人的名字，应使用复数“names”。“other people named”不能表达“其他人的名字”；应说“other people's names”。

× I don't try my heart to remember other people named, but if the person is very important for me, I usually write down the name on my smartphone. It can record my memory.

✓ I don't try my heart to remember other people's names, but if the person is very important to me, I usually write down the name on my smartphone. It can record my memory.

要表达“其他人的名字”，需要用所有格“people's”，而不是“people”。所有格形式用于说明名字属于这些人。

× I don't try my heart to remember other people named, but if the person is very important for me, I usually write down the name on my smartphone. It can record my memory.

✓ I don't try my heart to remember other people's names, but if the person is very important to me, I usually write down the name on my smartphone. It can record my memory.

表示某人“对我很重要”时，通常使用“important to me”，而不是“important for me”。

× I don't mind people remembered my name or not. If in this situation I will feel a little bit embarrass because we know each other but we don't know the we don't know the others named.

✓ I don't mind whether people remember my name or not. If this happens, I will feel a little embarrassed because we know each other, but we don't know each other's names.

“I don't mind”描述现在的态度，后面的从句也应使用一般现在时，因此“remembered”应改为“remember”。

× I don't mind people remembered my name or not. If in this situation I will feel a little bit embarrass because we know each other but we don't know the we don't know the others named.

✓ I don't mind whether people remember my name or not. If this happens, I will feel a little embarrassed because we know each other, but we don't know each other's names.

表达“我不介意别人是否记得我的名字”时，应用“whether ... or not”连接两种可能；不能直接用“people ... or not”这样的结构。

× I don't mind people remembered my name or not. If in this situation I will feel a little bit embarrass because we know each other but we don't know the we don't know the others named.

✓ I don't mind whether people remember my name or not. If this happens, I will feel a little embarrassed because we know each other, but we don't know each other's names.

“If in this situation”缺少完整的主语和谓语，可改为“If this happens”。原句还重复了“we don't know”，并且后半句结构混乱；建议删除重复内容，清楚表达一个完整意思。

× I don't mind people remembered my name or not. If in this situation I will feel a little bit embarrass because we know each other but we don't know the we don't know the others named.

✓ I don't mind whether people remember my name or not. If this happens, I will feel a little embarrassed because we know each other, but we don't know each other's names.

“feel”后面需要形容词描述人的感受，所以应使用“embarrassed”（感到尴尬的），不能用动词“embarrass”。

× It depends on the situation. If the people I meet the several times, I will still remember her name clearly all the familiar people. However, if the people I just meet one or twice a time, I will forgot its name.

✓ It depends on the situation. If I meet people several times, I will still remember their names clearly. However, if I meet people only once or twice, I will forget their names.

泛指“人”时通常不需要在“people”前加“the”；“several times”前也不需要加“the”。只有在指双方都知道的特定人群或次数时，才使用定冠词“the”。

× It depends on the situation. If the people I meet the several times, I will still remember her name clearly all the familiar people. However, if the people I just meet one or twice a time, I will forgot its name.

✓ It depends on the situation. If I meet people several times, I will still remember their names clearly. However, if I meet people only once or twice, I will forget their names.

“If the people I meet...”没有形成完整的条件从句，句中“all the familiar people”也没有和前面的结构正确衔接。建议直接写成“If I meet people...”，并删除不完整的尾部短语。

× It depends on the situation. If the people I meet the several times, I will still remember her name clearly all the familiar people. However, if the people I just meet one or twice a time, I will forgot its name.

✓ It depends on the situation. If I meet people several times, I will still remember their names clearly. However, if I meet people only once or twice, I will forget their names.

“people”是复数，不能用单数代词“her”或“its”指代。这里用“their”指代这些人的名字。

× It depends on the situation. If the people I meet the several times, I will still remember her name clearly all the familiar people. However, if the people I just meet one or twice a time, I will forgot its name.

✓ It depends on the situation. If I meet people several times, I will still remember their names clearly. However, if I meet people only once or twice, I will forget their names.

“will”后面应接动词原形。表示将来“会忘记”时，应说“will forget”，不能说“will forgot”。