Name— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: ตอบตรงคำถามได้ดีและยกตัวอย่างประกอบ แต่ควรใช้คำนามพหูพจน์ให้ถูกต้องเป็น “people’s names” และแก้ “limber” เป็น “remember” นอกจากนี้ควรหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดซ้ำเรื่องการพบผู้คนจำนวนมาก และเพิ่มรายละเอียดที่เฉพาะเจาะจง เช่น การพบเพื่อนร่วมงานหรือคนในงานสังคม

Example: No, I find it difficult to remember people's names because I meet so many new people. For instance, when I attend social events, I often remember someone's face but forget their name.

Suggestion: คำตอบชัดเจนและมีตัวอย่างที่เกี่ยวข้อง ควรแก้ “people’s name” เป็น “people’s names” และลดการกล่าวซ้ำระหว่างประโยคแรกกับตัวอย่าง โดยเชื่อมวิธีการจำกับสถานการณ์ที่ทำงานให้กระชับขึ้น

Example: I remember people's names by repeating them when we first meet. At work, for example, I use my colleagues' names in conversation, which helps me remember them.

Suggestion: ตอบความรู้สึกได้ตรงคำถาม แต่ “It’s not normal” ไม่สื่อความหมายตามที่ต้องการ ควรใช้ “It’s understandable” เพื่อบอกว่าเข้าใจได้ว่าคนอื่นอาจลืม และเพิ่มคำเชื่อม เช่น “especially if” เพื่อให้เหตุผลลื่นไหล

Example: I don't mind if people forget my name because I think it's understandable. They may only see me occasionally, especially if we haven't met for a long time.

Suggestion: มีคำตอบตรงประเด็นและยกตัวอย่าง แต่มีคำซ้ำใน “many people new people” ควรใช้ “many new people” และแก้ “remember face” เป็น “remember faces” ส่วน “later than memorizing names” ใช้ไม่เป็นธรรมชาติ ควรอธิบายว่าให้ความสนใจกับบทสนทนามากกว่าการจำชื่อ

Example: Yes, I sometimes forget people's names, especially when I meet several new people at once. At networking events, I often remember their faces because I'm focused on the conversation rather than memorizing their names.

× No, I find it difficult to remember people's name because I meet a lot of new people every day.

✓ No, I find it difficult to remember people's names because I meet a lot of new people every day.

People's refers to multiple people, so the plural noun names is needed. Use people's names when referring generally to the names of several people.

× I usually remember people's name by meeting them regularly and repeating their names when I talk to them.

✓ I usually remember people's names by meeting them regularly and repeating their names when I talk to them.

People's refers to multiple people, so name should be plural: names. Use the plural when speaking generally about the names of different people.

× I sometimes forget people's name, especially when I meet many people new people at once.

✓ I sometimes forget people's names, especially when I meet many new people at once.

Use names, not name, because people's refers to multiple people. The phrase many people new people also repeats the noun and places new awkwardly; say many new people.

× I sometimes forget people's name, especially when I meet many people new people at once.

✓ I sometimes forget people's names, especially when I meet many new people at once.

The phrase many people new people contains a redundant noun phrase and is not well formed. Put the adjective before the noun and say many new people.

× For example, at networking events I often remember face but not names because I'm focused on the conversation later than memorizing names.

✓ For example, at networking events I often remember a face but not names because I'm focused on the conversation later than memorizing names.

Face is a singular countable noun and needs an article here. Use a face when referring to recognizing someone's face in general.

× For example, at networking events I often remember face but not names because I'm focused on the conversation later than memorizing names.

✓ For example, at networking events I often remember a face but not names because I'm focused on the conversation rather than memorizing names.

Later than refers to time, but the intended meaning contrasts two activities. Use rather than to show that the speaker focuses on conversation instead of memorizing names.