Name— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 質問に直接答えられており、顔と名前を比較して理由を示せています。「eh」は不要なつなぎ言葉なので、短い間を置いて言い直すとより自然です。また、「remember people's names」と「remember someone's face」の比較を滑らかに伝えましょう。

Example: No, I find it quite difficult to remember people's names. I'm much more likely to remember someone's face than their name.

Suggestion: 名前を会話の中で繰り返すという具体的な方法に加え、例と理由も述べられていて効果的です。例の部分は、相手の名前を呼びかけとして自然に使う形にしましょう。また、最後の「the name」は「the person's name」とすると、何を指すかがより明確です。

Example: I usually repeat people's names during a conversation. For example, I might say, “It was nice meeting you, Kento.” Hearing and saying the person's name helps me remember it.

Suggestion: 気持ちを直接伝えたうえで、「何度も会っている場合」という具体的な状況と、相手を理解する理由を加えられています。「when when」の繰り返しを避け、「other people's name」は複数形の「other people's names」に直しましょう。2文目は、前の文との対比が分かるように「At the same time」などでつなぐと自然です。

Example: I feel a little disappointed when someone forgets my name, especially if we've met several times. At the same time, I understand that names can be hard to remember because I sometimes forget other people's names, too.

Suggestion: 「一度に何人もの人に会うとき」という具体的な状況と、自分なりの対策を答えられています。ただし、最後の「when I fast when we fast meet」は意味が不明瞭です。「when we first meet（初めて会うとき）」とし、名前を繰り返すタイミングを簡潔に説明しましょう。また、「Yes, I do」の後にコンマを入れ、回答の流れを整えてください。

Example: Yes, I do, especially when I meet several new people at once. I think forgetting someone's name can seem a little rude, so I try to repeat their name when we first meet.

× I feel a little disappointed when when someone forgets my name, especially if we've met several times.

✓ I feel a little disappointed when someone forgets my name, especially if we've met several times.

The word when is repeated, creating an unnecessary conjunction. Use it only once to introduce the time clause.

× However, I understand that names can be hard to remember because I sometimes forget other people's name too.

✓ However, I understand that names can be hard to remember because I sometimes forget other people's names too.

Other people's refers to multiple people, so the plural noun names is needed.

× Yes I do, especially when I meet several new people at once. I think forgetting someone's name can seem a little rude, so I try to repeat it when I fast when we fast meet.

✓ Yes, I do, especially when I meet several new people at once. I think forgetting someone's name can seem a little rude, so I try to repeat it when we first meet.

The ending contains a false start and repeated, incomplete time clauses, which make the sentence structure unclear. Remove the false start and use the complete clause when we first meet. In speaking, pause and restart with a complete phrase if you lose your place.