Part 1
Examiner
Is it easy for you to remember people's names?
Candidate
Yes, of course I always remember other names because Because I always look at their face and remember their names. I think their names is very suit for their face.
Examiner
How do you remember people's names?
Candidate
To be honest, I really could I remember others names because I always think their their face face is very suited for their names because if a girl named Anna
Examiner
How do you feel when people can't remember your name?
Candidate
To be honest, I really don't care that if somebody can't remember my name, I will tell him again. It's not a big problem for me. I don't feel responsive respect for me.
Examiner
Do you often forget people's names?
Candidate
No, just like I said, I really good at it I not often forget people's names and I think it's not deal with me so I don't
Is it easy for you to remember people's names?
Score: 38.0Suggestion: 先直接回答“容易”或“不容易”,再用一个清楚的原因补充。避免重复 because 和 remember their names;注意主谓一致及搭配,例如说“their names suit their faces”或“their names seem to match their faces”。
Example: Yes, I usually find it quite easy to remember people's names. I try to connect each name with the person's face, and sometimes the name seems to suit them.
How do you remember people's names?
Score: 24.0Suggestion: 这一回答有多处重复和语法错误,而且句子没有说完。直接说明一个具体记忆方法,并用完整的例子解释;注意使用“a person’s name”和“their face”,避免连续重复 because。
Example: I usually repeat a person's name shortly after I meet them. I also connect the name with a feature of their face, which helps me remember it later.
How do you feel when people can't remember your name?
Score: 53.0Suggestion: 你的态度表达得比较清楚,也给出了应对方式。把“don't care that if”改为“don't mind if”,并删除或改写含义不清的“responsive respect”;可以补充一句说明为什么你不介意。
Example: I don't mind if someone forgets my name. I just tell them again, because it's an easy mistake to make. It doesn't make me feel disrespected.
Do you often forget people's names?
Score: 32.0Suggestion: 先用完整句回答“No, I don’t”,再说明你通常记得住名字的原因。注意使用“I’m good at it”和“I don’t often forget”,并删去没有说完的结尾,避免重复前面已经表达过的内容。
Example: No, I don't often forget people's names. I'm fairly good at remembering them, especially when I've had a proper conversation with someone.
× I think their names is very suit for their face.
✓ I think their names really suit their faces.
主语“their names”是复数,不能与单数形式“is”搭配。改为“suit”后,动词与复数主语一致;“their face”也应改为“their faces”,与“their names”所指的多人保持一致。
× I think their names is very suit for their face.
✓ I think their names really suit their faces.
“suit”在这里表示“适合”,应作为动词使用,不能写成“is very suit”。可以说“their names really suit their faces”,即“他们的名字确实很适合他们的脸”。
× To be honest, I really could I remember others names
✓ To be honest, I really can remember other people's names.
陈述句中应使用“主语 + 情态动词 + 动词”的语序,不能写成“I could I remember”。此处谈论现在的能力,用“can”比“could”更合适。
× I really could I remember others names
✓ I really can remember other people's names.
“others”不能直接放在“names”前表示“别人的名字”。应使用所有格“other people's”,或写成“others' names”。
× because if a girl named Anna
✓ For example, if a girl's name is Anna, I remember it.
原句以“because if”引出条件从句,但没有主句,因此句子不完整。可以用“For example”引出例子,并补上完整主句。
× I really don't care that if somebody can't remember my name, I will tell him again.
✓ I really don't care if somebody can't remember my name; I will tell them again.
“care”后面表示“是否”时直接用“if”,不需要再加“that”。此外,“somebody”指代不特定的人时,可以用单数“they/them”避免默认使用男性代词。
× I don't feel responsive respect for me.
✓ I don't feel that people disrespect me.
“responsive respect”不能表达“别人不尊重我”这一意思。这里可以用动词“disrespect”,并用“that”引导完整从句。
× I don't feel responsive respect for me.
✓ I don't feel that people disrespect me.
原句中“feel”后面的“responsive respect for me”结构不完整,无法构成清楚的从句。改为“feel that + 主语 + 动词”后,句子结构完整。
× I really good at it
✓ I'm really good at it.
“good”是形容词,作表语时需要系动词“be”。主语“I”对应“am”,缩写为“I'm”。
× I not often forget people's names
✓ I don't often forget people's names.
一般现在时的否定句需要在动词前加“do not”或“don't”。不能直接说“I not forget”。
× I think it's not deal with me
✓ I think it's not a big deal to me.
“deal”在这里是可数名词,单数形式前需要冠词;常用表达是“a big deal”。
× I think it's not deal with me
✓ I think it's not a big deal to me.
表示“对我来说不是什么大事”时,常用介词“to”,表达为“a big deal to me”,而不是“deal with me”。
× so I don't
✓ so I don't worry about it.
“don't”后面还需要接动词原形;原句在助动词后中断,没有表达完整意思。根据上下文,可以补为“don't worry about it”。