Name— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答直接，观点和例子都很清楚，且使用了“unless”和“For example”来补充细节。主要问题是部分表达不够自然：“I find it difficult for me”应改为“I find it difficult to”，“the same as a celebrity's name”可改为“the same as a celebrity’s”。“at the first time we met each other”不自然，应使用“when we first met”。另外，例子中的因果关系可以表达得更清晰。

Example: Not really. I find it quite difficult to remember people’s names, unless their names are unusual or remind me of a celebrity. For example, one of my high school classmates had a name that meant a type of fish in Chinese, so I remembered it when we first met.

Suggestion: 回答基本回应了问题，但“没有方法”与后面“记住姓氏”的方法之间衔接不够清楚。建议先直接说明自己的具体做法，再解释为什么这样做。“a spontaneous and natural process”较抽象且有些重复；“someone strange”容易表示“奇怪的人”，应改为“someone new”或“a stranger”；“remember their surname at first”应改为“remember their surname first”。可以补充一个具体技巧，例如在交谈中重复对方的名字。

Example: I don’t have a very systematic method, but I usually repeat a person’s name silently after meeting them. I also try to remember their surname first because it helps me recall the whole name later. If possible, I use their name again during the conversation, which makes it easier to remember.

Suggestion: 回答结构很好，先说明不介意，再通过“But”进行对比，观点清晰且理由充分。可以进一步提升自然度：“if we've just met each other a few times”应改为“if we’ve only met a few times”，“we've already known each other”应改为“we’ve known each other”。“bad at memorizing people's names”可以更口语化地说成“not very good at remembering names”。

Example: I don’t mind if someone forgets my name when we’ve only met a few times, because I’m not very good at remembering names either. However, if we’ve known each other for a long time and they still forget my name, I feel frustrated and a little disappointed. It makes me wonder whether they really value our relationship.

Suggestion: 回答有明确观点，也给出了记住名字的原因，但句子过长，缺少标点和连接词，影响流畅度。“I don’t think so”后应停顿或使用句号；“I feel forgetting...”应改为“ I feel that forgetting...”或更自然的“It seems disrespectful to forget...”。“for another occasion”应改为“if I’ve only met someone a few times”；“madame”拼写应为“madam”，但在日常英语中称呼陌生人更自然的方式是“excuse me”或使用“Mr./Ms. + 姓氏”。

Example: No, not very often. I think forgetting someone’s name after knowing them for a long time can seem disrespectful, so I make an effort to remember names and leave a good impression. If I’ve only met someone a few times, I usually avoid using their name until I’m sure I remember it correctly.

× For example, one of my high school classmates has a name which means a fish in Chinese so I remembered her name at the first time we met each other.

✓ For example, one of my high school classmates has a name that means “fish” in Chinese, so I remembered her name the first time we met.

表示“第一次……时”时，通常使用“the first time”，不使用“at the first time”。另外，在此处省略“each other”后句子更自然，但核心介词错误是“at”的使用。

× No, I don't think so I feel forgetting someone's name after we've known each other for a long time seems disrespectful so I will try to remember other people's names to leave a good impression.

✓ No, I don't think so. I feel that forgetting someone's name after we've known each other for a long time seems disrespectful, so I will try to remember other people's names to leave a good impression.

原句把多个完整分句直接连接在一起，缺少句号和逗号，造成连写句。应在“I don't think so”后加句号，并在“so”前加逗号；在“I feel”后加入“that”也能使从句结构更清晰。

× And for another occasion that we just meet with each other a few times I will call them by madame or sir.

✓ And on occasions when we have only met each other a few times, I will call them Madam or Sir.

这里描述的是已经发生过几次见面后的情况，应使用现在完成时“have only met”，而不是一般现在时“just meet”。“when”比“that”更适合引导时间状语从句。

× And for another occasion that we just meet with each other a few times I will call them by madame or sir.

✓ And on occasions when we have only met each other a few times, I will address them as Madam or Sir.

表示“称呼某人为……”时，应使用“address someone as ...”，而不是“call someone by ...”。“call someone by”通常用于表示“以某个名字称呼某人”，例如“call him by his first name”。