Name— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 질문에 직접 답하는 주제문이 먼저 필요합니다. 현재 문장은 어순과 문법이 불분명하고, ‘eight people names’와 ‘I’m not fine remember’가 자연스럽지 않습니다. ‘It isn’t easy for me to remember people’s names’처럼 답한 뒤, 이름을 잘 기억하지 못하는 이유나 구체적인 상황을 한 문장으로 덧붙이세요.

Example: No, it isn’t very easy for me to remember people’s names. I often forget them because I meet many new people at school. However, I usually remember a name better if I use it several times during a conversation.

Suggestion: 질문은 이름을 기억하는 방법을 묻고 있으므로, 사용하는 전략을 직접 설명해야 합니다. 현재 답변은 문장 구조와 의미가 불명확하고 ‘wanna’는 말하기에서 가능하지만 IELTS에서는 ‘want to’가 더 적절합니다. 이름을 반복해서 말하거나, 그 사람의 특징과 이름을 연결하는 등 구체적인 방법을 제시하고 연결어를 사용하세요.

Example: I usually repeat the person’s name immediately after I hear it. For example, I might say, “Nice to meet you, Sarah.” I also try to connect the name with the person’s appearance or personality.

Suggestion: 감정을 나타내는 문장을 완전한 형태로 말해야 합니다. ‘I am so sad’는 가능하지만, 뒤의 표현은 어순과 연결이 자연스럽지 않습니다. 먼저 ‘I feel disappointed or a little hurt’처럼 감정을 직접 답하고, 그 이유와 상대방의 행동에 대한 바람을 덧붙이세요.

Example: I feel a little disappointed when people can’t remember my name. It makes me feel that they were not paying attention when we first met. However, I understand that remembering names can be difficult, especially in a large group.

Suggestion: ‘Do you often forget...?’에는 ‘No, I don’t’처럼 조동사를 사용해 답해야 하며, ‘No, I’m not’은 적절하지 않습니다. ‘Apple travels’는 질문과 관련이 없어 삭제해야 합니다. 이름을 잘 기억하는지 또는 자주 잊는지 분명히 말한 뒤, 그 이유나 예외적인 상황을 구체적으로 설명하세요.

Example: No, I don’t often forget people’s names. I usually remember them by repeating their names during our first conversation. However, I sometimes forget a name if I meet several new people at the same time.

× Now I found it eight people names remembered because I'm not fine remember.

✓ Now, I find it difficult to remember people's names because I'm not good at remembering them.

The answer describes a general present situation, so find is more appropriate than the past-tense verb found. Use the present-tense structure I find it difficult to... for current difficulty.

× Now I found it eight people names remembered because I'm not fine remember.

✓ Now, I find it difficult to remember people's names because I'm not good at remembering them.

After the preposition at, use a gerund with the -ing form: good at remembering. Do not use the base verb remember after at.

× Now I found it eight people names remembered because I'm not fine remember.

✓ Now, I find it difficult to remember people's names because I'm not good at remembering them.

Fine is not the natural adjective in the expression fine at remembering. Use good at remembering to describe ability. A useful pattern is be good or bad at + verb-ing.

× I wanna remember her name. I might First in your names remember me

✓ I want to remember their names. First, I repeat their names to myself.

The question asks about people's names in general, so their names is more appropriate than her name. Also, to refer back to the people whose names are being remembered, use their rather than your.

× I wanna remember her name. I might First in your names remember me

✓ I want to remember their names. First, I repeat their names to myself.

The adverb first should be placed at the beginning of the sentence or before the main verb. The natural order is First, I repeat their names..., not I might First in your names remember me.

× I wanna remember her name. I might First in your names remember me

✓ I want to remember their names. First, I repeat their names to myself.

The second sentence is not organized as a complete grammatical sentence. Use a clear subject, verb, and object: I repeat their names to myself. In formal speaking, use want to instead of the informal wanna.

× I might I am so sad when And I want you remember me

✓ I feel very sad when people cannot remember me, and I want them to remember me.

Might expresses possibility, but the answer describes a regular feeling. Use the present-tense verb feel instead. Avoid using might before I am when no possibility is intended.

× I might I am so sad when And I want you remember me

✓ I feel very sad when people cannot remember me, and I want them to remember me.

After want, use the object pronoun them to refer to people: want them to remember me. You is incorrect here because the answer is referring generally to people, not directly to the examiner.

× I might I am so sad when And I want you remember me

✓ I feel very sad when people cannot remember me, and I want them to remember me.

And should connect two complete ideas, but it cannot appear directly after when in this sentence. Use when to introduce the situation and and to connect it to the second main idea.

× I might I am so sad when And I want you remember me

✓ I feel very sad when people cannot remember me, and I want them to remember me.

The original answer contains fragments and an incomplete when-clause. A complete sentence needs a subject and a verb in each clause: people cannot remember me and I want them to remember me.

× No I'm not I don't forget people's names However, Apple travels

✓ No, I don't often forget people's names. However, I sometimes forget them when I travel.

The question asks about a usual habit, so use the present simple. The form don't forget is correct for this meaning. Use I travel, not Apple travels, because I is the subject of the sentence.

× No I'm not I don't forget people's names However, Apple travels

✓ No, I don't often forget people's names. However, I sometimes forget them when I travel.

Frequency adverbs such as often and sometimes usually come before the main verb: don't often forget and sometimes forget. This position makes the meaning clear.

× No I'm not I don't forget people's names However, Apple travels

✓ No, I don't often forget people's names. However, I sometimes forget them when I travel.

Use the object pronoun them to avoid repeating people's names. The subject of the final clause should be I because the speaker is describing their own travel.

× No I'm not I don't forget people's names However, Apple travels

✓ No, I don't often forget people's names. However, I sometimes forget them when I travel.

The original answer combines several incomplete ideas and includes the unrelated phrase Apple travels. Separate the answer into complete sentences and connect the contrasting idea with However.