Part 1
Examiner
Is it easy for you to remember people's names?
Candidate
It depends on the name of people. Sometime I'm mad some people who have really interesting and unique named and I remember right after. But if it's very common and use your name then I couldn't remember and match it.
Examiner
How do you remember people's names?
Candidate
I try a different method to remember it. For example, I extract first character of people's name and match it to the people's face or their story to remember longer.
Examiner
How do you feel when people can't remember your name?
Candidate
Actually I just don't mind even if the people can't remember my name. So I rather use my character names called Mia for my foreigner friends and UMM. Colleagues.
Examiner
Do you often forget people's names?
Candidate
Yes, I forget unintentionally sometimes. If I met someone for the first time in a while, so I say sorry to people that I don't remember.
Is it easy for you to remember people's names?
Score: 48.0Suggestion: Answer the question directly with a clear contrast, such as “It depends.” Correct the grammar and word choice: use “people’s names,” “sometimes,” “I meet people,” “unique names,” and “common names.” Avoid unclear phrases such as “I’m mad some people” and “use your name.” Add one specific reason explaining why unusual names are easier to remember.
Example: It depends on the person’s name. I can usually remember unusual or distinctive names because they stand out to me. However, I sometimes forget common names, especially when I meet several new people at once.
How do you remember people's names?
Score: 62.0Suggestion: Give a direct topic sentence and then explain the method clearly. Use “methods” or “techniques” instead of “a different method,” and say “the first letter of their name” rather than “the first character.” Improve the linking and grammar by explaining that you associate the name with the person’s face or something they have told you. Add a brief result to make the answer more effective.
Example: I use a few techniques to remember people’s names. For example, I focus on the first letter of a person’s name and associate it with their face. I also connect the name with something they have told me, which helps me remember it for longer.
How do you feel when people can't remember your name?
Score: 45.0Suggestion: State your feeling directly and explain it with a natural reason. Replace “I just don’t mind” with “I don’t really mind,” and avoid the unclear phrase “my character names.” Clarify that you use the name “Mia” with foreign friends and colleagues if that is your intended meaning. Do not end with an incomplete phrase such as “UMM. Colleagues.”
Example: I don’t really mind when people forget my name because I know names can be difficult to remember. In fact, I sometimes introduce myself as Mia when I meet foreign friends or colleagues because it is easier for them to pronounce and remember.
Do you often forget people's names?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: Answer with a clear frequency, such as “Sometimes, but not very often.” Correct the tense and sentence structure: use “when I meet someone for the first time” and avoid combining “if” with “so.” Explain that you politely apologize or ask the person to remind you of their name. Use a linking word such as “if” or “when” to connect the reason and response.
Example: Yes, I sometimes forget people’s names, especially when I meet several new people in a short period of time. When this happens, I apologize and politely ask them to remind me of their name. Most people understand because it happens to everyone.
× It depends on the name of people.
✓ It depends on people's names.
The question refers to people's names in general, so the plural forms names and people's are needed. Use the possessive plural form people's to show that the names belong to people.
× Sometime I'm mad some people who have really interesting and unique named and I remember right after.
✓ Sometimes, I am impressed by people who have really interesting and unique names, and I remember their names right away.
Sometimes is the correct adverb for repeated occasions. Mad does not express the intended meaning here; impressed is more suitable. Named is a verb form, but names is the plural noun required after unique.
× Sometime I'm mad some people who have really interesting and unique named and I remember right after.
✓ Sometimes, I am impressed by people who have really interesting and unique names, and I remember their names right away.
The noun name must be plural because the sentence refers to the names of multiple people. The phrase their names also clearly indicates possession and number.
× Sometime I'm mad some people who have really interesting and unique named and I remember right after.
✓ Sometimes, I am impressed by people who have really interesting and unique names, and I remember their names right away.
The adjective impressed is followed by the preposition by when identifying the person or thing that causes the impression. The original phrase mad some people does not use an appropriate preposition or grammatical structure.
× But if it's very common and use your name then I couldn't remember and match it.
✓ But if the name is very common, I cannot remember it or associate it with the person.
This answer describes a general situation, so the present tense is appropriate: is and cannot. The original sentence incorrectly changes to could not, which suggests a past or hypothetical meaning.
× But if it's very common and use your name then I couldn't remember and match it.
✓ But if the name is very common, I cannot remember it or associate it with the person.
A singular countable noun such as name needs a determiner. The phrase the name is used because the sentence refers to the name being discussed.
× But if it's very common and use your name then I couldn't remember and match it.
✓ But if the name is very common, I cannot remember it or associate it with the person.
The pronoun it must refer clearly to the name, and the phrase the person identifies what the name is being associated with. Avoid switching between unclear pronouns and the incorrect phrase use your name.
× I try a different method to remember it.
✓ I try different methods to remember people's names.
Because the student is describing several possible techniques, methods should be plural. People's names is also more accurate than the singular pronoun it because the topic is people's names in general.
× I try a different method to remember it.
✓ I try different methods to remember people's names.
The pronoun it does not clearly refer to a specific singular noun. Replacing it with people's names makes the reference clear.
× For example, I extract first character of people's name and match it to the people's face or their story to remember longer.
✓ For example, I extract the first letter of people's names and associate it with their faces or their stories so that I can remember their names for longer.
The singular countable noun letter needs the definite article the because it refers to a specific part of the name. The nouns names, faces, stories, and names also need appropriate plural forms because the sentence describes multiple people.
× For example, I extract first character of people's name and match it to the people's face or their story to remember longer.
✓ For example, I extract the first letter of people's names and associate it with their faces or their stories so that I can remember their names for longer.
People's names, their faces, their stories, and their names refer to multiple people and therefore require plural nouns. Using plural forms makes the number agreement consistent.
× For example, I extract first character of people's name and match it to the people's face or their story to remember longer.
✓ For example, I extract the first letter of people's names and associate it with their faces or their stories so that I can remember their names for longer.
Associate something with something is the appropriate prepositional structure for connecting a letter with a face or a story. The original wording match it to is less suitable for the intended meaning.
× Actually I just don't mind even if the people can't remember my name.
✓ Actually, I do not mind even if people cannot remember my name.
People is being used in a general sense, so it does not need the definite article the. The article would suggest a specific group of people.
× So I rather use my character names called Mia for my foreigner friends and UMM. Colleagues.
✓ So I would rather use my name, Mia, with my foreign friends and colleagues.
The original sentence contains an incomplete and disconnected phrase, especially UMM. Colleagues. The corrected version forms one complete sentence with a clear subject, verb, object, and list of people.
× So I rather use my character names called Mia for my foreigner friends and UMM. Colleagues.
✓ So I would rather use my name, Mia, with my foreign friends and colleagues.
Foreigner is normally a noun, so foreigner friends is not the natural adjective-noun combination. Use foreign friends instead. The adverb rather should be used with would rather to express preference.
× So I rather use my character names called Mia for my foreigner friends and UMM. Colleagues.
✓ So I would rather use my name, Mia, with my foreign friends and colleagues.
The expression for expressing a preference is would rather + base verb. Therefore, use would rather use rather than rather use.
× Yes, I forget unintentionally sometimes.
✓ Yes, I sometimes forget people's names unintentionally.
Frequency adverbs such as sometimes usually come before the main verb in a simple present sentence. Placing sometimes before forget makes the sentence sound more natural. The object people's names also makes the meaning clear.
× Yes, I forget unintentionally sometimes.
✓ Yes, I sometimes forget people's names unintentionally.
The verb forget needs a clear object in this context. Adding people's names tells the listener exactly what is forgotten.
× If I met someone for the first time in a while, so I say sorry to people that I don't remember.
✓ If I meet someone for the first time in a while, I say sorry to people whose names I do not remember.
This describes a repeated or general situation, so the present tense meet is needed instead of the past tense met. The present tense keeps the conditional sentence consistent with I say.
× If I met someone for the first time in a while, so I say sorry to people that I don't remember.
✓ If I meet someone for the first time in a while, I say sorry to people whose names I do not remember.
An if-clause should not be followed by so when it is directly connected to the main clause. Remove so and use the structure If..., I....
× If I met someone for the first time in a while, so I say sorry to people that I don't remember.
✓ If I meet someone for the first time in a while, I say sorry to people whose names I do not remember.
The phrase for the first time in a while is the natural prepositional expression for an event that has not happened recently. The corrected sentence also uses whose to connect people with their names.