Part 1
Examiner
Is it easy for you to remember people's names?
Candidate
Yeah, probably I used to remember people's name because whenever I used to talk to them I talked in a fully friendly manner so when I am free I am literally keeping their names in my mind so it's easy for me to remember people's name.
Examiner
How do you remember people's names?
Candidate
I used to remember people's name by recalling their faces or their presence or whenever I used to meet them I literally bust out my mind that his or her name is this or death so this is how I memor people's snake.
Examiner
How do you feel when people can't remember your name?
Candidate
I feel kinda low because I really feel bad when people don't remember my name because which energy I used to give them if I don't get back, so I feel kinda bad or sad type of feelings.
Examiner
Do you often forget people's names?
Candidate
Yeah, I used to forget people's name often because if I don't meet them or if I don't talk with them I literally forget their names. So if making a day to day connections, I can remember or recall your name as soon as possible.
Is it easy for you to remember people's names?
Score: 58.0Suggestion: Answer the question directly in the present tense. Avoid repeating “people's names” and using unnatural phrases such as “when I am free, I am literally keeping their names in my mind.” Use one clear reason and, if possible, a brief example. Also, say “people's names” rather than “people's name.”
Example: Yes, I usually find it quite easy to remember people's names, especially when I have a friendly conversation with them. I try to use their name during the conversation, which helps me remember it later. However, I sometimes forget a name if I only meet someone briefly.
How do you remember people's names?
Score: 42.0Suggestion: Use the present simple because you are describing your usual method. The answer contains unclear and incorrect expressions, including “bust out my mind,” “this or death,” and “people's snake.” Organize the response with a clear method followed by a specific explanation, and avoid listing several ideas without linking them clearly.
Example: I usually remember people's names by connecting their names with their faces. I also repeat the person's name during our conversation, because this helps me memorize it. If I am still unsure, I write the name down on my phone after we meet.
How do you feel when people can't remember your name?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: State your feeling directly and explain it with one natural reason. Avoid repeating “feel bad” and “sad,” and replace the unclear phrase “which energy I used to give them if I don't get back” with a precise explanation. Use natural expressions such as “I feel a little disappointed” or “I understand that people may forget.”
Example: I feel a little disappointed when someone forgets my name, especially if we have already spoken several times. It makes me feel that our conversation was not very memorable to them. However, I understand that people meet many others, so I do not take it too personally.
Do you often forget people's names?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: Use “I often forget” instead of “I used to forget” if this is still true. Answer directly, then explain that you remember names better when you interact with people regularly. Correct “day-to-day connections” and avoid addressing the examiner directly with “your name.”
Example: Yes, I sometimes forget people's names, particularly when I meet them only once. However, I remember them more easily when I have regular, day-to-day contact with someone. Talking to people frequently helps me recall their names much faster.
× Yeah, probably I used to remember people's name because whenever I used to talk to them I talked in a fully friendly manner so when I am free I am literally keeping their names in my mind so it's easy for me to remember people's name.
✓ Yeah, I can usually remember people's names because whenever I talk to them, I speak to them in a friendly manner. When I am free, I keep their names in mind, so it is easy for me to remember them.
People's names should be plural because the answer refers to the names of multiple people. The question asks about a current habit, so use the present tense, such as can remember and talk, rather than used to remember and used to talk, which usually describe past habits. Speak to them in a friendly manner is more natural than talked in a fully friendly manner. Finally, them correctly refers to people's names and avoids repeating the full noun phrase.
× I used to remember people's name by recalling their faces or their presence or whenever I used to meet them I literally bust out my mind that his or her name is this or death so this is how I memor people's snake.
✓ I remember people's names by recalling their faces or their presence. Whenever I meet them, I remind myself of their names. This is how I memorize people's names.
Use people's names because the answer discusses several names. Since this is a general method that is still true, use the present tense remember and meet instead of used to remember and used to meet. The original sentence contains several clauses joined together without clear structure, so separating it into three sentences improves grammatical organization. Their is an appropriate pronoun for referring to a person's name without repeating his or her.
× I feel kinda low because I really feel bad when people don't remember my name because which energy I used to give them if I don't get back, so I feel kinda bad or sad type of feelings.
✓ I feel kind of low because I feel bad when people do not remember my name. I give them positive energy, so I feel disappointed when I do not get the same energy back.
The original sentence has too many because and if clauses, which makes its structure unclear. Use separate sentences and a clear conjunction such as so. The phrase which energy is not grammatically appropriate here; use the same energy to refer back to the energy you give people. Because this describes a current feeling and habit, use the present tense give and do not get rather than used to give. Get the same energy back is the natural prepositional phrase.
× Yeah, I used to forget people's name often because if I don't meet them or if I don't talk with them I literally forget their names. So if making a day to day connections, I can remember or recall your name as soon as possible.
✓ Yeah, I often forget people's names if I do not meet or talk to them. However, if I make day-to-day connections with them, I can remember their names more easily.
People's names should be plural because the answer refers to multiple people. The sentence describes a present habit, so use the present tense forget rather than used to forget. If making is an incomplete -ing clause; after if, use a complete clause with a subject and verb: if I make. Connections should be plural in this general expression, and with them is needed because the speaker is referring to the people mentioned earlier. Also, their names is more consistent than suddenly changing to your name.