Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise and organized: start with a clear topic sentence stating current status (working), then give one or two brief, relevant details (place of work and future plan). Avoid hesitations and irrelevant or confusing phrases (e.g. “I've applied to my students are behind me”). Also correct small grammar mistakes (use past/present forms correctly) and use articles (a/an/the) properly.

Example: I am currently working as a doctor at Munnu Medical College and Hospital. I recently passed my final professional exam in November 2025, and in the future I would like to pursue a PhD in biomedical science to continue my research.

Suggestion: Use present tense for current jobs and give a clearer location with one or two specific details. Avoid mispronunciations/incorrect names and unnecessary words like “the” before a city unless needed. Use a linking phrase to connect location and relation to city.

Example: I work at Munnu Medical College and Hospital, which is located in Manikganj, close to Dhaka. It serves patients from both the nearby town and surrounding rural areas.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence and follow with two specific supporting reasons connected by linking words. Reduce fillers (uh) and correct grammar: use possessive form (its environment), correct verbs (they help with analysis and diagnosis). Be specific about what makes it friendly (e.g. supportive team, good facilities).

Example: Yes, I think it is a very good place to work because the environment is supportive and the staff cooperate well. For example, my colleagues always help with clinical analysis and share ideas during difficult diagnoses.

Suggestion: Answer directly and avoid repetition. Use precise vocabulary instead of vague words like “grainy.” If you mean rural or agricultural surroundings, say so. Provide one specific detail or example about why the countryside setting is pleasant (quiet, fresh air, slower pace).

Example: Yes, I like working there because it is in the countryside, so the surroundings are peaceful and quiet. The fresh air and slower pace help me focus on patient care and research.

Suggestion: Start with a clear statement of your future plan, then give a concrete reason and one specific goal connected to that plan. Remove hesitations and use precise language (how medicines work in the human body; to research drug mechanisms). Mention a potential research area to show focus.

Example: In the future I plan to pursue a PhD in biomedical science because I want to study how medicines work in the human body. For example, I hope to research drug interactions and mechanisms to improve treatment outcomes.

× Oh I've applied to my students are behind me.

✓ Oh, I've applied and my students are behind me.

Original sentence mixes expressions and lacks clear structure. It seems the student meant two ideas: they have applied for something and their students are behind them (supporting). Join with a conjunction and use correct verbs: 'I've applied' and 'my students are behind me.' Use a comma after 'Oh' for clarity.

× Currently I'm working as an Indian doctor in Muno Medical College and Hospital.

✓ Currently I'm working as a doctor at Munnu Medical College and Hospital.

Use 'a doctor' (article) and 'at' for institutions. 'Indian' is unnecessary if context already implies nationality; keep consistency with actual place name spelling 'Munnu'. This corrects article use and preposition choice.

× I passed my final professional examination at November 2025.

✓ I passed my final professional examination in November 2025.

Use 'in' with months and years, not 'at'. The past tense 'passed' is correct; only preposition was incorrect.

× And in future I would love to pursue PhD degree on biomedical science.

✓ In the future I would love to pursue a PhD degree in biomedical science.

Add definite article 'the' and 'a' before 'PhD degree'. Use preposition 'in' rather than 'on' for fields of study. 'In the future' is the usual phrasing.

× I worked at Munnu Medical College and Hospital which is situated in the Manicones near the Dhaka city.

✓ I work at Munnu Medical College and Hospital, which is situated in Manikganj near Dhaka city.

Question asked 'Where do you work?' so present tense 'I work' is required. Also correct place names and remove unnecessary 'the' before city names. Use a comma before the relative clause.

× Yes, it is a very good place to work in my opinion because, uh, it's environment is very work friendly and my coworkers are very good.

✓ Yes, it is a very good place to work in my opinion because its environment is very work-friendly and my coworkers are very supportive.

Do not use contraction 'it's' for possessive; use 'its'. 'Work friendly' should be hyphenated as 'work-friendly' when used as a compound adjective. 'Very good' coworkers is vague; 'supportive' is clearer. Remove unnecessary commas.

× Uh, they would help you uh, analysis and diagnosis the disease.

✓ They would help you analyze and diagnose the disease.

Use base verbs 'analyze' and 'diagnose' after 'help' rather than noun forms 'analysis' and 'diagnosis'. Also no article needed before 'disease' if speaking generally; if a specific disease, use 'the'.

× Yes. I like the place I work because it is situated, uh, at a place, uh, basically it is a countryside and its environment is very peaceful and uh, it is very grainy.

✓ Yes. I like the place I work because it is located in the countryside; the environment is very peaceful and it is very green.

Do not say 'a countryside'; use 'the countryside' or 'in the countryside'. 'Situated at a place' is redundant; use 'located in'. 'Grainy' is incorrect word choice; likely meant 'green'. Use 'the environment' for specificity and proper articles.

× Uh, in future I hope to pursue a PhD degree in biomedical science.

✓ In the future I hope to pursue a PhD degree in biomedical science.

Add article 'the' for natural phrasing: 'In the future'. The rest of the sentence is correct.

× Uh, basically I want to know how the medicine works in a human body and uh, research it.

✓ Basically, I want to know how medicines work in the human body and research them.

Use plural 'medicines' or 'a medicine' consistently; 'works' should match plural subject 'medicines' so use 'work'. Use 'the human body' for general reference. 'Research it' is awkward; use 'research them' or 'conduct research on them'.