Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: حاول تجيب إجابة مباشرة ومختصرة في جملة موضوعية ثم تضيف تفاصيل داعمة صريحة. قلل الترديد والكلمات الحشو (مثل "uh" و"to be honest") واصحح التركيب النحوي (مثلاً: "I graduated with a degree in Marketing in 2017"). وضح السبب بطريقة مرتبة: اذكر المشكلة ثم نتيجة واضحة. حاول ألا تتعدى 3-4 جمل واستخدم رابط بسيط مثل "so" أو "because".

Example: I graduated with a degree in Marketing in 2017, but I haven’t found a job yet because my English skills are limited. Because of that, I am focusing on improving my language by taking courses and practicing speaking. So I can apply for marketing roles confidently soon.

Suggestion: أجب مباشرة عن السؤال (مثلاً: "I don’t work at the moment") ثم أوضح ماذا تفعل حالياً كدعم. استخدم روابط واضحة مثل "so" أو "and" لترتيب الأنشطة. كن أكثر تحديدًا في الأفعال: اذكر أنك تطلب وظائف عبر البريد الإلكتروني، منصات التوظيف أو زيارات شخصية، واذكر أمثلة إن أمكن.

Example: I don’t work at the moment. I am actively looking for jobs by sending application emails, contacting companies via WhatsApp, and visiting several offices in person. I also check online job portals every day to find suitable marketing roles.

Suggestion: أجب بوضوح ثم ادعم إجابتك بتفاصيل محددة ومرتبة. استخدم روابط مثل "and" أو "also" لربط الأفكار. تجنب التكرار واذكر مثالًا واحدًا يوضح دعم الزملاء أو بيئة العمل بدلاً من صفات عامة متعددة بدون تفاصيل.

Example: Yes, it’s a good place to work. The office is conveniently located and spacious, which makes commuting and working comfortable. Also, my colleagues are supportive—for example, my boss Huda always gives clear feedback and helps me solve problems.

Suggestion: الإجابة ليست مباشرة على السؤال الحالي (يطلب رأيك الحالي). ابدأ بجملة واضحة: "No, I wouldn't like to work there" أو "Yes, I would"، ثم اشرح السبب بشكل منظم. صحح الأخطاء النحوية وضمائر الشخص (company = it). تجنب الارتباك بالحديث عن تجربة سابقة بدون ربطها بصيغة الحاضر أو الرغبة المستقبلية.

Example: No, I wouldn’t want to work there again. I joined a company called Eva in 2020, but I left because the location was very inconvenient and the commute was stressful. For that reason, I prefer workplaces that are easier to reach.

Suggestion: ابدأ بجملة واضحة عن خطتك المستقبلية ثم قدم تفاصيل ملموسة عن كيفية تحقيقها (دورات، خبرة، مهارات). صحح التعبيرات مثل "support me" إلى ما تقصده فعلاً (مثلاً: "improve myself" أو "seek support"). استخدم رابط مثل "because" أو "so" لشرح السبب والخطوات. اجعل الجواب منطقيًا ومحددًا في 2-4 جمل.

Example: My goal is to become a team leader in marketing because I’ve wanted that since childhood. To achieve this, I plan to improve my English, take leadership courses, and gain practical experience by managing small projects. This will help me lead a team confidently in the future.

× 'To be honest, I graduated from university with degree in, in marketing in 2017.'

✓ 'To be honest, I graduated from university with a degree in marketing in 2017.'

'The sentence uses the past tense correctly (graduated), but is missing the article "a" before "degree" and has an extra comma and repeated filler. Add the article and remove repetitions to make the noun phrase grammatically correct and fluent.'

× 'but I haven't, uh, been able to get a job yet because, uh, I haven't, I haven't, uh, strong English language skills.'

✓ 'but I haven't been able to get a job yet because I don't have strong English language skills.'

'The speaker combines present perfect (haven't been able) correctly but then uses an incorrect construction "I haven't strong English language skills." English requires a form of "have" with a noun (I don't have) or have + past participle. Use the simple present negative "I don't have" to express current lack of skills.'

× 'At the moment I'm looking for a job sending an e-mail, WhatsApp or going to a several companies.'

✓ 'At the moment I'm looking for a job by sending e-mails, using WhatsApp, or visiting several companies.'

'The present continuous "I'm looking" is fine, but the verb forms and articles are incorrect. Use a parallel structure with gerunds introduced by "by" or coordinate verbs. Use the plural "e-mails" and drop "a" before "several companies." Also use "using WhatsApp" or "messaging on WhatsApp" for clarity.'

× 'Yes, it's a great place to work because the location is very convenient and the office is spacious. Colleagues are friendly, especially my boss Huda, she is a very kind.'

✓ 'Yes, it's a great place to work because the location is very convenient and the office is spacious. My colleagues are friendly, especially my boss Huda; she is very kind.'

'The sentence had a comma splice and awkward reference "Colleagues are friendly" following a singular possessive context. Use "My colleagues" to match ownership, and fix the run-on by splitting or using a semicolon. Also remove the extra article "a" before "very kind." '},{