WorkPart 1 Report

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Part 1

Examiner

Do you work or are you a student?

Candidate

I finished my studies on 2023 and I used to work on private clinic in my home country. However, currently I am focusing on my studies to continue my specialist.

Examiner

Where do you work?>

Candidate

I'm currently unemployed. I need to finish my paperwork and continue my training to become specialist on cosmetics. I used to work at private clinic in my home country.

Examiner

Is it a good place to work?

Candidate

Yes, the place where I used to work and was fully developed, equipped with the very advanced technological device and the team was so professional, we had to plan each.

Examiner

Would you like the place where you work?

Candidate

Definitely, it was one of my past experiences. My colleagues helped me to become more professional, to deal with my challenges without fear and be independent.

Examiner

What are your future work plans?

Candidate

I'm looking forward to expand my knowledge and skills by attending different training sessions and courses. I am planning to continue my studies and become specialists in cosmetics, dentistic dentistry.

Evaluation

Overall

Overall: 6.0Fluency & Coherence: 6.0Pronunciation: 6.0Grammar: 5.5Lexical Resource: 6.0

Part 1

Do you work or are you a student?

Score: 65.0

Suggestion: Make the answer more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence stating current status, then give a brief past and present explanation using correct tense and word choice. Use one or two linking words (e.g., 'but', 'now') and avoid redundancy. Correct phrases: 'I finished my studies in 2023', 'I used to work at a private clinic', 'specialist training' or 'specialist studies'.

Example: I finished my studies in 2023, and I used to work at a private clinic in my home country. However, now I am focusing on further specialist training to advance my career.

Where do you work?

Score: 70.0

Suggestion: Answer directly with current status, then provide one or two specific supporting details with correct phrasing and linking words. Replace 'become specialist on cosmetics' with 'become a cosmetic specialist' and 'finish my paperwork' could be specified (e.g., visa or registration). Avoid repeating past workplace twice.

Example: At the moment I'm not working because I need to finish my immigration paperwork. Once that's done, I plan to resume training to become a cosmetic specialist; previously I worked at a private clinic in my home country.

Is it a good place to work?

Score: 60.0

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence ('Yes, it was a great place to work.'), then support with two specific reasons using linking words ('because', 'and'). Improve grammar and complete the final idea (e.g., 'we had to plan everything carefully'). Use vocabulary like 'well-equipped' and 'state-of-the-art'.

Example: Yes, it was a great place to work because it was well-equipped with state-of-the-art technology, and the team was very professional. As a result, we had to plan procedures carefully to ensure high-quality patient care.

Would you like the place where you work?

Score: 75.0

Suggestion: Start with a clearer topic sentence ('Yes, I really liked working there.') then add specific examples of how colleagues supported you, using linking words ('for example', 'so'). Improve phrasing: 'become more professional', 'handle challenges confidently', 'become more independent'. Keep it concise.

Example: Yes, I really liked working there because my colleagues mentored me. For example, they taught me new techniques and encouraged me to handle difficult cases confidently, which helped me become more independent professionally.

What are your future work plans?

Score: 68.0

Suggestion: Provide a clear topic sentence about your main goal, then give 1–2 concrete steps and use correct word forms: 'looking forward to expanding', 'become a specialist in cosmetic dentistry' or 'dentistry'. Avoid listing too many unclear terms; choose precise phrasing. Use linking words like 'so' or 'therefore' to show purpose.

Example: My main goal is to become a specialist in cosmetic dentistry, so I'm looking forward to expanding my knowledge by attending advanced training courses and continuing my formal studies in dentistry.

Grammar

Past tense issue

× I finished my studies on 2023 and I used to work on private clinic in my home country.

I finished my studies in 2023 and I used to work at a private clinic in my home country.

Use 'in' for years not 'on'. Use the preposition 'at' for places of work and include the indefinite article 'a' before 'private clinic'. Suggestion: say 'I finished my studies in 2023' and 'I used to work at a private clinic'. Grammar problem type ID:5

Incorrect use of prepositions

× However, currently I am focusing on my studies to continue my specialist.

However, I am currently focusing on my studies to continue my specialist training.

The adverb 'currently' usually follows subject + auxiliary; 'to continue my specialist' is incomplete — you need a noun like 'training'. Suggestion: 'I am currently focusing on my studies to continue my specialist training.' Grammar problem type ID:11

Sentence without a verb

× I'm currently unemployed. I need to finish my paperwork and continue my training to become specialist on cosmetics.

I'm currently unemployed. I need to finish my paperwork and continue my training to become a specialist in cosmetics.

Missing article 'a' before 'specialist' and preposition should be 'in' rather than 'on'. Also 'become a specialist in cosmetics' is the correct collocation. Suggestion: include 'a' and use 'in'. Grammar problem type ID:23

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I used to work at private clinic in my home country.

I used to work at a private clinic in my home country.

Missing indefinite article 'a' before 'private clinic'. Use 'at' for workplace and include 'a'. Suggestion: 'at a private clinic'. Grammar problem type ID:11

Sentence structure errors

× Yes, the place where I used to work and was fully developed, equipped with the very advanced technological device and the team was so professional, we had to plan each.

Yes, the place where I used to work was well developed and equipped with very advanced technological devices, and the team was very professional; we had to plan everything carefully.

Original sentence has extra conjunctions and missing verbs; 'and was fully developed' incorrectly attached. 'Device' should be plural 'devices'. 'We had to plan each' is incomplete — 'everything' or 'each procedure' fits. Suggestion: break into clauses with correct verb forms, pluralize 'devices', and finish the thought. Grammar problem type ID:26

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× Would you like the place where you work?

Did you like the place where you worked?

Question context asks about a past workplace. Use past tense 'did you like' and past 'worked'. Suggestion: match tense to time frame — 'Did you like the place where you worked?'. Grammar problem type ID:13

Present tense issue

× Definitely, it was one of my past experiences.

Definitely, it was one of my past experiences.

Sentence is grammatically acceptable but context requires no change. Keep as is. (No correction needed.) Grammar problem type ID:6

Incorrect use of pronouns

× My colleagues helped me to become more professional, to deal with my challenges without fear and be independent.

My colleagues helped me become more professional, to deal with my challenges without fear, and to be independent.

Parallel structure requires consistent 'to' before verbs or remove repeated 'to'; add comma before 'and' in a list. Suggestion: maintain parallel infinitives: 'helped me become..., to deal..., and to be...'. Grammar problem type ID:12

Verb form issue (infinitive vs base)

× I'm looking forward to expand my knowledge and skills by attending different training sessions and courses.

I'm looking forward to expanding my knowledge and skills by attending different training sessions and courses.

After 'looking forward to' the verb should be in -ing form. Suggestion: use the gerund 'expanding'. Grammar_problem_type_id:8

Incorrect use of prepositions and plural

× I am planning to continue my studies and become specialists in cosmetics, dentistic dentistry.

I am planning to continue my studies and become a specialist in cosmetic dentistry.

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