Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more natural and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your status, then give one or two concise supporting details. Correct verb forms and articles (e.g., 'I have just finished my 12th grade' or 'I recently finished high school') and avoid redundancy. Use linking words like 'so' or 'because' if explaining reason.

Example: I have just finished my 12th grade and I’m not working right now. I am focusing on improving my English communication skills because I plan to study abroad next year.

Suggestion: Answer the question directly. If you don't work, say so at the start, then briefly explain what you are doing instead. Use past or present continuous appropriately and include a linking word if needed.

Example: I don’t work at the moment. As I mentioned, I recently finished high school and I’m focusing on improving my English skills so I can study abroad.

Suggestion: Give a short direct answer first (e.g., 'No, I don’t work at a company'), then expand slightly with a reason. Avoid fillers like 'uh' and repeat information less. Keep to two or three sentences maximum.

Example: No, I don’t work at a company. I’m currently concentrating on my communication skills to prepare for further study abroad.

Suggestion: Be concise and natural. Start with a clear response, then explain briefly. Avoid negative phrasing that sounds unnatural; instead say you don’t work and what you prefer to do now.

Example: I don’t have a workplace at the moment, so that question doesn’t apply to me. I would prefer to focus on studying and improving my English instead.

Suggestion: Provide a clear topic sentence about your plan, then add one or two specific details about how you will achieve it. Use correct tense and natural phrasing (e.g., 'I hope to become an entrepreneur' and 'by working hard' or 'by gaining business skills'). Avoid awkward phrases like 'with the doing hard working'.

Example: I want to become an entrepreneur in the future. To achieve this, I plan to study business, improve my English, and gain practical experience through internships or small projects.

× I just crossed my 12th and for the time being I am working on my communication skill for further study in abroad.

✓ I just finished my 12th grade and for the time being I am working on my communication skills to study abroad.

Use of 'crossed my 12th' is incorrect in English; 'finished my 12th grade' or 'completed 12th grade' is standard. 'For the time being' combined with present continuous 'am working' is acceptable. 'Communication skill' should be plural 'communication skills'. Use 'to study abroad' rather than 'for further study in abroad'. Suggestions: replace 'crossed' with 'finished' or 'completed', pluralize 'skills', and use 'to study abroad'.

× Like I earlier mentioned, I just crossed my 12th and for the time being I improve my English skill.

✓ As I mentioned earlier, I just finished my 12th grade and for the time being I am improving my English skills.

Word order 'Like I earlier mentioned' is unnatural; use 'As I mentioned earlier'. 'Just crossed my 12th' should be 'just finished my 12th grade' (past tense). 'I improve' is simple present but the action is ongoing, so present continuous 'I am improving' is correct. 'English skill' should be plural 'English skills'. Suggestions: reorder phrase, use past tense for completion, and use present continuous for ongoing improvement.

× Is it a good place to work?

✓ Is it a good place to work?

This sentence is grammatically correct and fits the question context. No change needed.

× Sorry, I don't work in any company because uh, nowadays I am working on my communication skills for further study.

✓ Sorry, I don't work for any company because nowadays I am working on my communication skills to prepare for further study.

'Work in any company' is understandable but 'work for any company' is more natural. 'Because uh' contains filler 'uh' which can be omitted. 'For further study' is okay but 'to prepare for further study' is clearer. Present continuous 'am working' correctly indicates ongoing action. Suggestions: use 'work for any company', remove filler words, and clarify purpose with 'to prepare for'.

× Would you like the place where you work?

✓ Would you like the place where you work?

Question is grammatically correct. No change needed.

× No, I don't like because I don't work in any company.

✓ No, I don't, because I don't work for any company.

Short answer with explanation needs a comma: 'No, I don't,'. 'Work in any company' is less natural than 'work for any company'. Suggestions: add a comma after 'No' and use 'for' with company.

× What are your future work plans?

✓ What are your future work plans?

This question is correct and needs no change.

× I want to become an entrepreneur and I achieve my goal with the doing hard working.

✓ I want to become an entrepreneur and I will achieve my goal by working hard.

Second clause uses present simple 'I achieve' incorrectly for a future intention; use 'I will achieve' or 'I hope to achieve'. The phrase 'with the doing hard working' is ungrammatical; correct forms include 'by working hard' or 'through hard work'. Suggestions: use a future modal 'will' for intended achievement and replace the phrase with 'by working hard' or 'through hard work'.