Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details (where you work and since when). Avoid repetition and keep to two or three sentences. Use correct tense and articles.

Example: I work as a dentist. I practise part-time at a local clinic near my home, and I completed my dental degree in 2004.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer followed by specific details. Use correct noun forms and link ideas with a short connector. Avoid unnecessary words and correct collocations (e.g., 'near my house', 'general dentistry', 'check-ups').

Example: I work at a private clinic near my house, where I provide general dentistry and routine check-ups for patients.

Suggestion: Answer directly and give one or two clear reasons. Use correct verb forms and simpler phrasing to express feelings. Replace awkward phrases with natural collocations (e.g., 'a supportive environment', 'patient satisfaction').

Example: Yes, it is. The clinic offers a supportive environment where I can work independently, and I feel rewarded when patients leave satisfied.

Suggestion: Keep the answer brief and grammatically correct. Use one or two clear reasons and correct tense. Avoid repeated words and finish the sentence logically (e.g., mention calm atmosphere or manageable workload).

Example: Yes, I like it because the clinic is peaceful and I rarely feel overwhelmed while working there, so I can concentrate on patient care.

Suggestion: Give a clear goal and explain briefly why and how you will achieve it. Avoid repetition and complete the sentence with a reason or plan. Use correct articles and plural/singular forms.

Example: I want to become an international dentist and work abroad to treat patients in different countries; to achieve this I plan to gain additional certifications and improve my language skills.

× I work as a dentist. I usually I currently doing my practice as a part time practitioner in a clinic. I have completed my degree in 2004.

✓ I work as a dentist. I am currently practising part-time in a clinic. I completed my degree in 2004.

Mixed and incorrect verb forms: 'I usually I currently doing' mixes adverbs and lacks auxiliary; use present continuous 'I am currently practising' for ongoing action. 'Practice' spelling: use British 'practising' (verb) or American 'practicing'. 'I have completed my degree in 2004' uses present perfect with a specific past time, which is incorrect; use simple past 'I completed my degree in 2004'. Suggestions: remove duplicated words, place adverbs correctly before main verb or with auxiliary, and use simple past with specific past time expressions.

× I currently work at a private clinic that is nearer to my house where I focus on a general dentistry and patient check UPS.

✓ I currently work at a private clinic near my house, where I focus on general dentistry and patient check-ups.

Preposition and word choice errors: 'nearer to my house' is incorrect; use 'near my house' or 'closer to my house'. 'A general dentistry' is uncountable; use 'general dentistry'. 'check UPS' should be 'check-ups'. Also remove redundant relative phrasing. Suggestions: use correct prepositions ('near'), use uncountable noun forms for fields, and hyphenate 'check-up'.

× Yes, it is definitely because it provide the environment that is suitable for me where I can do my work independently and feeling and seeing the patient satisfaction in happy that satisfied me.

✓ Yes, definitely, because it provides an environment that suits me, where I can work independently and feel satisfied when I see my patients happy.

Subject-verb agreement and sentence structure: 'it provide' should be 'it provides'. 'the environment that is suitable for me' is wordy; use 'an environment that suits me'. 'feeling and seeing the patient satisfaction in happy that satisfied me' is ungrammatical: use 'feel satisfied when I see my patients happy'. Suggestions: ensure verb agrees with subject, simplify noun phrases, and restructure to express cause and effect clearly.

× Yes I do because the place where I work is a quite peaceful and I don't get overwhelmed whenever I was there and it energy energy.

✓ Yes, I do, because the place where I work is quite peaceful and I don't get overwhelmed when I am there; it gives me energy.

Article and tense errors: 'is a quite peaceful' should be 'is quite peaceful' (no indefinite article before adjective phrase). 'whenever I was there' uses past tense incorrectly; use present 'when I am there'. Repetition 'energy energy' is redundant; clarify as 'it gives me energy'. Suggestions: remove unnecessary articles before adjective phrases, match tense to current habitual situation, and avoid repetition.

× I want to become a international dentist and use my skill to use my skill to treat patient internationally because.

✓ I want to become an international dentist and use my skills to treat patients internationally.

Article and number errors plus repetition: 'a international' needs 'an international'. 'use my skill to use my skill' is repeated; remove duplicate. 'patient' should be plural 'patients' to match general meaning. Sentence ends with 'because' leaving it incomplete; remove or complete the clause. Suggestions: use correct indefinite article before vowel sound ('an'), avoid repetition, and use plural nouns for general statements.