Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Ответ частично ясен, но содержит грамматические ошибки, неправильные времена и лишние слова. Следует: 1) использовать правильные времена (Present Simple/Present Perfect) и согласование; 2) сократить ответ до 2–3 предложений; 3) добавить связку и конкретику о квалификации. Например, начать с прямого утверждения, потом добавить краткое пояснение.

Example: I'm not working at the moment. I recently graduated from a four‑year college with a diploma in art education, so I'm planning to start work soon as an art teacher.

Suggestion: Ответ повторяет предыдущую информацию и содержит неточные выражения и грамматику. Нужно прямо ответить, затем добавить конкретику о желаемом месте и причинах. Используйте связки (for example, because, so) и избегайте неопределённых фраз («I will hope»).

Example: I don't work at the moment. I'm hoping to find a teaching position at a primary school because it would give me valuable experience and strengthen my CV for future opportunities.

Suggestion: Ответ расплывчат и содержит ошибки словосочетаний и грамматики. Следует сначала уточнить, что вы говорите о прошлом месте, затем дать короткую оценку и конкретные причины (физическое/психологическое состояние). Используйте связки (however, because) для ясности.

Example: I don't have a current workplace, but my last job was in a restaurant as a server. It paid well, however it was hard physically and stressful, so it wasn't a good long‑term fit for me.

Suggestion: Ответ слишком короткий и неинформативный; не использованы связки и подробности. Даже если вы не уверены, нужно развить мысль: сказать причину сомнения и что вы цените в рабочем месте. Дайте 2–3 предложения с причинами.

Example: I'm not sure because I don't have a current job, but I would prefer a workplace that supports creativity and has a friendly atmosphere. For example, I would like a school where colleagues collaborate and students are encouraged to explore art.

Suggestion: Ответ понятен, но содержит грамматические ошибки (число, времена, артикли), повторения и немного общей информации. Нужно сформулировать чётко: цель, конкретные шаги и временные рамки или предпочтения. Используйте связки (because, so, for example) и исправьте ошибки согласования.

Example: I plan to pursue a career in education as an art teacher. Specifically, I want to teach children how to draw and I am currently looking for positions at primary schools or community centres to gain classroom experience.

× Well, actually I didn't have a job right now, but I'm also not a student anymore because I just ended up my College of four years and now I have a diploma to work.

✓ Well, actually I don't have a job right now, and I'm not a student anymore because I just finished my four-year college and now I have a diploma to work.

The speaker mixed past simple with present time expressions (didn't have + right now) which is incorrect; use present simple 'don't have' for current state. 'Ended up my College of four years' is unidiomatic; use 'finished my four-year college'. Replace 'and' for clearer connection. Suggestion: use consistent present tense for current situations and natural collocations like 'finished college'.

× I'm an artist teacher, so I'm going to have a job as soon as possible.

✓ I'm an art teacher, so I hope to find a job as soon as possible.

'Artist teacher' is a wrong collocation; correct form is 'art teacher'. 'I'm going to have a job as soon as possible' is awkward for intention/hope; use 'I hope to find a job' or 'I expect to find a job'. Suggestion: learn common collocations and use verbs like 'hope', 'expect', or 'plan' for intentions.

× Well, as I said, I do not work anywhere right now, but I'm planning on starting to work soon.

✓ Well, as I said, I do not work anywhere right now, but I'm planning to start working soon.

'Planning on starting to work' is not incorrect but 'planning to start working' is more natural. Use 'start working' (verb + -ing) rather than 'starting to work' for smoother phrasing. Suggestion: prefer 'planning to' + base verb or 'start' + -ing form.

× I will hope to get a work that teaches me a lot, mostly to have a quite good resume for the future.

✓ I hope to get a job that will teach me a lot, mostly to build a good resume for the future.

Do not use 'will hope'; 'hope' is a present-state verb. 'Get a work' is incorrect; use 'get a job'. 'That teaches me a lot' can be future-oriented: use 'that will teach me a lot'. 'Have a quite good resume' is unidiomatic; use 'build a good resume'. Suggestion: use 'hope' without 'will' and correct noun collocations.

× As I said, I do not work anywhere, but my last working place was the restaurant.

✓ As I said, I do not work anywhere, but my last workplace was a restaurant.

Use 'workplace' as one word. Using 'the restaurant' implies a specific restaurant already known; better 'a restaurant' when introducing it. Suggestion: choose correct article ('a' vs 'the') and compound nouns.

× I was a server and I was making quite a good money on this, although it was not good to me physically and psychology.

✓ I was a server and I earned quite good money from it, although it was not good for me physically or psychologically.

'Was making' is awkward; 'earned' is clearer for repeated past action. 'Quite a good money' is ungrammatical; 'quite good money' or 'a good amount of money'. 'Not good to me' should be 'not good for me'. 'Psychology' is a noun; use 'psychologically' as the adverb. Suggestion: use proper past tense verbs for past jobs, correct preposition 'for', and adverb form 'psychologically'.

× Would you like the place where you work?

✓ Did you like the place where you worked?

Examiner asked about a past workplace; the student should answer in past tense. The original question form 'Would you like the place where you work?' is awkward; for past job use 'Did you like the place where you worked?'. Suggestion: match tense to the time frame of the job.

× I don't know.

✓ I don't know whether I liked it or not.

Short answer 'I don't know.' is grammatically fine but vague. To respond clearly to the question about liking the workplace, provide a full clause like 'I don't know whether I liked it or not.' Suggestion: give a complete response matching the question.

× I have a big plans for my future in the career area.

✓ I have big plans for my future in my career.

'A big plans' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'plans'; remove 'a' or use singular 'plan'. 'In the career area' is awkward; use 'in my career' or 'in my professional life'. Suggestion: ensure article and noun number agree and use natural phrases.

× My currently plans is to get a job in a teaching area.

✓ My current plan is to get a job in the field of teaching.

'Currently plans' is wrong: use adjective 'current' with singular 'plan' or plural 'plans'. 'Is' must agree with singular 'plan'. 'Teaching area' is awkward; 'field of teaching' or 'teaching field' is better. Suggestion: match adjective form and noun number, ensure subject-verb agreement.

× I'm an artist myself so I I would like to teach children to draw.

✓ I'm an artist myself, so I would like to teach children to draw.

Duplicate 'I I' is a typographical error; remove the extra 'I'. Also add a comma before 'so' for clarity. Suggestion: proofread to remove duplicated words and use punctuation for clarity.