Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise and grammatically accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence (I am currently working and studying part-time at university), then add one short supporting detail (e.g., how long or what you study). Keep to 1–2 sentences and correct verb forms.

Example: I am currently working while I finish my university degree part-time. I have been working part-time for over two years to support my studies.

Suggestion: Give a clear statement of your workplace and your role. Use simple, relevant vocabulary and avoid hesitations. One sentence naming the company and one sentence describing your main duties with linking words (for example, 'I work at... where I...').

Example: I work at Aromas Shop in Bangkok, Thailand. I explain our products to customers and encourage them to buy promotional and upsell items.

Suggestion: Answer directly then give one or two clear supporting points with linking words (e.g., 'however', 'because'). Fix common errors (place vs. workplace, timing). Keep sentences short and specific about what is good and what is challenging.

Example: Yes, it is a good place to work because the office is comfortable and my colleagues are friendly, which makes teamwork easy. However, it can be noisy at times, and long customer phone calls — sometimes up to an hour — make it hard to concentrate.

Suggestion: Start with a clear opinion sentence then provide a specific reason using linking words ('because', 'so'). Correct grammar (e.g., 'the work I do gives me time'). Mention a concrete example of improvement to make it specific.

Example: Yes, I like my workplace because the work I do gives me many opportunities to practice English with customers. For example, speaking on the phone and helping tourists has improved my communication skills and increased my confidence.

Suggestion: Provide a concise topic sentence about your current plan and one or two specific goals. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., 'short-term plan', 'improve English communication', 'customer service', 'solve problems efficiently'). Use linking words like 'at the moment' and 'because' to connect ideas.

Example: I don't have a fixed long-term plan yet, but at the moment I am focusing on improving my English communication and customer service skills. Specifically, I want to be better at interacting with clients and solving problems efficiently because these skills will help my future career.

× I am currently working but I haven't finished university student yet and I am work part time for a long time.

✓ I am currently working, but I haven't finished university yet, and I have been working part-time for a long time.

Tense and verb form errors: 'haven't finished university student' is incorrect word order and article use; use 'finished university' or 'finished my university studies'. 'I am work part time for a long time' mixes present simple and duration; use present perfect continuous 'have been working' for an action that started in the past and continues. Also use hyphen in 'part-time'. (Grammar problem type ID: 6)

× I walk for seas and desert at Aromas shot in Bangkok, Thailand.

✓ I work on seas and deserts at Aromas Shot in Bangkok, Thailand.

Wrong verb and prepositions: 'walk' is incorrect; context indicates 'work'. 'for seas and desert' should be 'on seas and deserts' but likely means areas or locations—adjusted to plural 'deserts'. Also corrected company/place name capitalization. Use 'at' for location. (Grammar problem type ID: 11)

× I mean, uh, these are the explain our product and the promo our upselling items.

✓ I mean, uh, these involve explaining our products and promoting our upselling items.

Unclear structure and incorrect word forms: 'these are the explain' should be 'these involve explaining'; 'the promo our upselling items' should be 'promoting our upselling items'. Use gerunds after 'involve' and correct noun plurals. (Grammar problem type ID: 26)

× Yes, Is this good for a place to walk? Because the office is comfortable and The thing is very friendly which makes collaboration easy.

✓ Yes, it is a good place to work because the office is comfortable and the team is very friendly, which makes collaboration easy.

Pronoun and capitalization errors: 'Is this good for a place to walk?' should be 'it is a good place to work'. 'The thing' is incorrect; context requires 'the team'. Fix capitalization of 'the'. Combine clauses for fluency. (Grammar problem type ID: 12)

× However, it can be quite nicely time, so it is sometime hard to concentrate during phone call and they come on taking about an hour each while each week, which can be trying.

✓ However, it can be quite a busy time, so it is sometimes hard to concentrate during phone calls, which can take about an hour each week and be quite trying.

Wrong word choices and tense/adverb forms: 'nicely time' should be 'a busy time'; 'sometime' should be 'sometimes'; 'during phone call' needs plural 'phone calls'; 'they come on taking about an hour each while each week' is ungrammatical—clarified to 'which can take about an hour each week'. Use present simple or present progressive as appropriate. (Grammar problem type ID: 6)

× Yes, I like the place where I work because The Walking I do the giving me time to practice my English and talk with customers.

✓ Yes, I like the place where I work because the walking I do gives me time to practice my English and talk with customers.

Pronoun and verb form errors: 'The Walking I do the giving me' is ungrammatical. Use lowercase 'the'. 'gives' is needed for subject-verb agreement with 'walking' (singular noun/gerund). Remove extra 'the'. (Grammar problem type ID: 12)

× Even though my English care is not perfect yet, working there has helped me improve my English communication skills and confidence.

✓ Even though my English is not perfect yet, working there has helped me improve my English communication skills and confidence.

'English care' is incorrect; use 'my English' or 'my English skills'. Removed 'care'. The rest is fine. (Grammar problem type ID: 12)

× That is a difficult question.

✓ That is a difficult question.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. (Grammar problem type ID: 26)

× I don't know my long term plan yes, but at the moment I am focusing on improve my English communication and customer service case.

✓ I don't know my long-term plan yet, but at the moment I am focusing on improving my English communication and customer service skills.

Adverb and verb form errors: 'yes' should be 'yet' to express uncertainty. Use hyphen in 'long-term'. 'focusing on improve' requires gerund 'improving'. 'customer service case' is incorrect; use 'customer service skills'. (Grammar problem type ID: 6)

× I want to become better at integrating with client and solving problem efficiency which I think will help me future career.

✓ I want to become better at interacting with clients and solving problems efficiently, which I think will help my future career.

Preposition and word choice errors: 'integrating with client' is wrong; 'interacting with clients' fits context and plural 'clients'. 'solving problem efficiency' should be 'solving problems efficiently' (adverb for manner and plural noun). Add possessive 'my future career'. (Grammar problem type ID: 11)