Shopping— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and natural. Begin with a clear topic sentence, avoid awkward phrases like "too much for shopping," and limit to up to 3–4 short sentences. Add one specific detail about what you enjoy to make the answer richer.

Example: Yes, I enjoy shopping on weekends. I usually go with friends or family, and I like browsing for clothes and small gifts. It’s a social activity for me and a way to relax after a busy week.

Suggestion: Make your point clearly and use linking words to explain the reason. Avoid unclear phrases like "come back one price." State the action and the reason in two succinct sentences and give a brief example of how you compare prices.

Example: Yes, I always compare prices because I want to stick to my budget. For example, I check online and in-store prices before buying electronics to make sure I get the best deal.

Suggestion: Improve clarity and grammar. Start with a direct answer, then give one clear supporting detail with correct word choice (e.g., "make decisions by myself"). Use linking words and specific checks you perform when choosing groceries.

Example: Not at all — I usually make decisions by myself. For example, when buying vegetables I check for freshness and firmness, and I avoid items with bruises or soft spots.

Suggestion: Express your opinion clearly and give a concise, specific comparison. Use linking words (e.g., "however," "for example") and correct phrasing like "sometimes" and "fresher." Keep it to two or three sentences.

Example: No, expensive items are not always better. For example, vegetables from a local market are often fresher and cheaper than those in a supermarket, so price alone doesn’t guarantee quality.

× Yes, I like to shop in weekends and I often go along with my friends and family too much for shopping.

✓ Yes, I like to go shopping on weekends and I often go with my friends and family for shopping.

Use the article/preceding preposition 'on' with 'weekends' and prefer 'go shopping' not 'shop in weekends'. Remove 'too much' which is awkward; use 'often' already. 'Along with' is acceptable but 'go with' is more natural.

× Definitely, I come back one price along with another price because it's very important to know the budget rate, so I will compare.

✓ Definitely, I compare prices because it's very important to know the budget, so I compare them.

The original mixes tenses and uses incorrect phrases like 'come back one price along with another price' and 'budget rate'. For habitual action use present simple 'I compare'. Use 'prices' and 'compare them' for clarity.

× Not at all. I will take my decision solitude so it's not very difficult for me.

✓ Not at all. I make my decisions by myself so it's not very difficult for me.

Use present simple for habitual behaviour: 'I make my decisions'. 'Will' implies future and is inappropriate. 'Solitude' is a noun meaning 'state of being alone'; the phrase 'by myself' or 'alone' is the correct expression.

× For example, if I go for shopping some groceries like carrot or vegetables, I will to for some check checks like any any bad.

✓ For example, if I go shopping for groceries like carrots or other vegetables, I check them for any signs of spoilage.

Use 'go shopping' (verb + -ing) and 'for groceries'. Use plural 'carrots' and 'vegetables'. Remove awkward 'I will to for some check checks'; use 'I check them' present simple for habitual action. 'Any any bad' is ungrammatical; use 'any signs of spoilage'.

× No I don't think so. Some expensive products are even though bad and some cheaper are even though better than expensive one.

✓ No, I don't think so. Some expensive products can be bad, and some cheaper ones can be better than expensive ones.

Phrases like 'even though bad' are incorrect. Use modal 'can be' to indicate possibility. Use 'cheaper ones' and 'expensive ones' for correct noun reference and plural agreement.

× Like sometimes we will shop from umm market which will be fresh but it will won't be fresh enough from the malls or we shop from any vegetable shop.

✓ For example, sometimes we buy from the market where produce is fresh, but it may not be as fresh in malls or other vegetable shops.

Avoid 'will' for habitual statements; use present simple or modal 'may'. 'Will won't' is contradictory and incorrect. Use 'buy' or 'shop' appropriately and clarify comparison: 'may not be as fresh'.