Shopping— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make your answer grammatically correct, more concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and correct verb forms and articles (e.g., “it allows me,” “useful items,” “clothing store”).

Example: Yes, I enjoy shopping because it allows me to find useful items and try different styles. For example, I like visiting clothing stores where I can try on new outfits to see what suits me best.

Suggestion: Make sentences grammatically correct and more specific. Use linking words like “because” and “for example,” and correct plural and article use (e.g., “compare prices,” “electronic devices,” “shops”). Remove unclear fragments.

Example: Yes, I usually compare prices because I want the best value for my money. For example, before buying an electronic device I check prices and reviews on several online and local shops to find the best deal.

Suggestion: Organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and one specific reason. Use correct phrasing (e.g., “sometimes,” “make choices,” “the same price and promotions,” “before deciding to purchase”). Keep it concise and avoid unnecessary words.

Example: Sometimes it's difficult for me to make choices when shopping because many items have the same price or promotions. Therefore, I usually read reviews on social media before deciding to purchase.

Suggestion: Provide a clear opinion and support it with one or two coherent reasons. Fix grammar (e.g., “it depends on the product,” “high-priced products are usually made from higher-quality materials,” “this does not guarantee quality”). Avoid fillers and finish your thought with a concrete example.

Example: I don't think expensive products are always better; it depends on the product. For example, high-priced items are often made from higher-quality materials, but price doesn't guarantee better performance—some affordable brands offer excellent value.

× Yes I enjoy shopping because it's allow me to find useful item and try different styles especially in closet shop I love trying on new clothes since I try on new suit it.

✓ Yes, I enjoy shopping because it allows me to find useful items and try different styles. Especially in clothing shops, I love trying on new clothes and suits.

Errors: 'it's allow' uses incorrect modal/verb form; should be 'it allows' (third person singular present). 'item' should be plural 'items' (singular/plural issue). 'closet shop' is wrong collocation; use 'clothing shops'. The clause 'since I try on new suit it' is ungrammatical and redundant; revised to 'and suits'. Suggestion: use correct subject-verb agreement for third person singular, pluralize countable nouns when appropriate, and use common collocations for shops.

× Yes, I usually compare price when I shop because I want to get the best value for my money.

✓ Yes, I usually compare prices when I shop because I want to get the best value for my money.

Error: 'price' after 'compare' should be plural 'prices' because you compare multiple prices (quantifier/plural usage). Suggestion: use the plural form when referring to more than one instance or options.

× For example, I often check different online and local shop before buying electronic device and comparing pies. Help me find.

✓ For example, I often check different online and local shops before buying electronic devices and comparing prices to help me decide.

Errors: 'different online and local shop' needs plural 'shops' and 'online' should modify 'shops' (word order). 'before buying electronic device' needs plural 'devices'. 'comparing pies' is a typo for 'prices'. 'Help me find' is incomplete; clarified as 'to help me decide'. Suggestion: ensure correct pluralization, correct prepositions/word order, and fix typos.

× Yes, I find some time it's difficult to me to make choice when shopping because there are same price and promotions but I have to check the review on social media before designing purchase.

✓ Yes, sometimes I find it difficult to make choices when shopping because there are the same prices and promotions, so I have to check reviews on social media before deciding on a purchase.

Errors: 'some time' should be 'sometimes' (adverb). 'it's difficult to me' is incorrect word order; use 'I find it difficult' or 'it is difficult for me'. 'make choice' needs plural 'choices'. 'there are same price' needs article and plural: 'the same prices'. 'check the review' should be plural 'reviews'. 'before designing purchase' is wrong verb; should be 'before deciding on a purchase'. Suggestion: use correct adverbs, word order for 'it is difficult for me', pluralize nouns appropriately, and choose correct verbs ('decide').

× That's hard to me too.

✓ That's hard for me too.

Error: incorrect preposition 'to me' after 'hard'; standard expression is 'hard for me'. Suggestion: use 'for' with adjectives like 'hard' when indicating who has difficulty.

× I don't think so. I think it's depend on products sometimes, uh, high price of product usually made from high quality materials, but this is do not guarantee that superior auto brands.

✓ I don't think so. I think it depends on the product sometimes: a high-priced product is usually made from high-quality materials, but this does not guarantee superiority over well-known brands.

Errors: 'it's depend' should be 'it depends' (present tense third person singular). 'depend on products' should be 'depend on the product' or 'depends on the product'. 'high price of product usually made' lacks passive auxiliary and articles: 'a high-priced product is usually made'. 'high quality' needs hyphen as compound adjective before noun: 'high-quality materials'. 'this is do not guarantee' incorrect auxiliary; use 'this does not guarantee'. 'superior auto brands' unclear; revised to 'superiority over well-known brands'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement, use articles, correct passive construction, and negative auxiliary placement.

× Some brands are cheaper, but they offer.

✓ Some brands are cheaper, but they still offer good quality or useful features.

Error: sentence fragment 'but they offer' is incomplete because the object of 'offer' is missing. Suggestion: complete the sentence with the expected object such as 'good quality', 'useful features', or 'value for money' to make the meaning clear.