Shopping— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid stereotypes, correct grammar (app vs applications) and reduce redundancy. Add one specific detail about what you enjoy about shopping. Use linking words if adding detail.

Example: Yes, I enjoy shopping, especially online. For example, I use several shopping apps on my phone because they save time and let me compare styles easily.

Suggestion: Improve grammar and clarity. Give a direct topic sentence, then briefly explain reason with specific examples. Remove repeated words and use linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

Example: Not usually, because I often buy from the same online store. Since I know my sizes and the product quality there, I feel confident buying without checking prices elsewhere.

Suggestion: Make the answer smoother and more precise. Begin with a clear contrasting statement, use linking words (however, whereas), and add a specific reason or example for each case.

Example: It depends: in physical shops it's difficult because I get overwhelmed by the variety and try on many dresses. However, online shopping is easier for me because I can filter results and read reviews.

Suggestion: Avoid long, awkward sentences and grammar mistakes. Start with a clear opinion, then give concise reasons and a brief example. Use linking words like 'however' and 'for example'.

Example: I don't think expensive products are always better. Cheaper items can be fine short-term; however, for durability and better performance it's often worth investing in higher-quality products—for example, a pricier pair of shoes may last several years.

× I think every girl likes to shop so I will say yes I like and love shopping.

✓ I think every girl likes to shop, so I will say yes: I like and love shopping.

The original sentence has run-on structure and punctuation issues rather than a subject-verb disagreement. Correction adds proper punctuation and a colon to separate the response; keep 'likes' because subject 'every girl' is singular and 'likes' is correct. Suggest adding commas or connectors to separate clauses for clarity.

× I have many application online application in my cell phone so that I can use it once in a while for online shopping.

✓ I have many online shopping applications on my cell phone, so I can use them once in a while for online shopping.

Errors: 'many application' should be 'many applications' (plural) and 'online application' is redundant; use plural 'applications'. Use preposition 'on' for something on a phone, and replace 'it' with 'them' to match plural. Also reorder phrase to 'online shopping applications' for natural wording.

× I don't usually compare prices anymore because I use the an online application so I am a regular there and I know already what are the sizes, its prices and its quality, so I usually use the used it commonly.

✓ I don't usually compare prices anymore because I use an online application, so I am a regular user and I already know the sizes, prices, and quality, so I usually use it commonly.

Problems fixed: remove extra article 'the' before 'an online application' ('use an online application'). Replace 'I am a regular there' with 'I am a regular user' for clarity. Change word order 'I know already what are the sizes' to 'I already know the sizes'. Use plural or consistent references: 'prices' not 'its prices' when referring to items generally; keep 'it' to refer to the application. Remove duplicate words 'use the used'.

× I don't usually compare prices anymore because I use the an online application so I am a regular there and I know already what are the sizes, its prices and its quality, so I usually use the used it commonly.

✓ I don't usually compare prices anymore because I use an online application, so I am a regular user and I already know the sizes, prices, and quality, so I usually use it.

Use simple present consistently for habitual actions: 'I don't usually compare', 'I use', 'I am', 'I already know', 'I usually use'. Remove redundant adverbs 'commonly' and repeated words. Ensure pronoun agreement and natural collocation ('regular user').

× If it is a physical store, I must say yes because there are many choices and many dresses I see during the shopping.

✓ If it is a physical store, I must say yes because there are many choices and many dresses I see while shopping.

Maintain simple present for general truth. Change 'during the shopping' to 'while shopping' for natural English. The tense 'see' is correct in present when describing general experience.

× But if online, uh, it's easier for me to choose.

✓ But if it's online, it's easier for me to choose.

Add subject 'it' to 'if online' to form 'if it's online' for clarity. Use contraction 'it's' in both clauses for parallel structure; present tense 'is' is correct for the general statement.

× I've tried both expensive and cheap products, so for a short term you may consider using the cheaper items, but if you want something that will last a long time, it's usually worth to buy the expensive products and because it have a higher quality and it performs better.

✓ I've tried both expensive and cheap products, so in the short term you may consider using the cheaper items, but if you want something that will last a long time, it's usually worth buying the expensive products because they have higher quality and perform better.

Several issues: 'for a short term' should be 'in the short term' (preposition use). 'It's usually worth to buy' is incorrect; use 'it's usually worth buying' or 'it's usually worth it to buy' (verb + -ing after 'worth'). 'It have' wrong subject-verb agreement; use 'they have' to match plural 'products'. Remove redundant 'and because' — use single 'because' to introduce reason. Use bare verb 'perform' with plural subject 'they'.