Part 1
Examiner
Do you like parties?
Candidate
For 30 years I love to parties because when I in the parties I change for myself and it's giving me good chance to relaxing and this time I can hang out with my friends and we enjoy from ourselves.
Examiner
How often did you have a party when you were a kid?
Candidate
When I was young I had been a party three times or five times in the month and this time I go to there with my relatives or my parents and I find I try to find some friends to play with me.
Examiner
Have you ever organized a party?
Candidate
Unfortunately no I didn't think about this and because it's a game with good pressure during the day for the reason I didn't like didn't do like it, I just going to parties to enjoy for myself.
Do you like parties?
Score: 52.0Suggestion: Javobni sodda va aniq tuzing; grammatik xatolarni to‘g‘rilang va ortiqcha so‘zlarni olib tashlang. Boshlang‘ich gapda savolga to‘g‘ri javob bering, so‘ng qisqacha sabab yoki misol bilan davom eting. Masalan, ‘I enjoy parties because…’ kabi struktura ishlating. Qo‘shimcha ma’lumotlar uchun bog‘lovchi so‘zlardan (because, so, and) foydalaning va gaplarni 3–4 ta jumlaga sig‘diring.
Example: Yes, I enjoy parties. I find them relaxing because they give me a break from daily routines. Also, I like meeting friends there and having fun together, which helps me unwind.
How often did you have a party when you were a kid?
Score: 48.0Suggestion: Vaqt va faoliyatni aniq ifodalashni mashq qiling; grammatik zamonlarni to‘g‘ri qo‘llang. “Three or five times a month” kabi aniqlikni joyida ishlating va ‘when I was young’ bilan boshlang. Bog‘lovchi so‘zlar (often, usually, with) yordamida gapni ravon qiling. Maksimal 3 jumla ichida javob bering.
Example: When I was a child, we had parties about three to five times a month. I usually went with my parents or relatives, and I would look for friends to play with at the party.
Have you ever organized a party?
Score: 42.0Suggestion: Rad javobni to‘g‘ri va qisqa qilib ayting, keyin sababni sodda va mantiqan izohlab bering. Murakkab yoki noaniq iboralardan saqlaning. Masalan, ‘No, I haven’t organized one because I don’t enjoy the planning and pressure’ kabi iborani ishlating. Ikki jumladan ortiq ko‘p bo‘lmasin.
Example: No, I haven't organized a party. I don't like the planning and pressure involved, so I prefer to attend parties and enjoy myself instead.
× For 30 years I love to parties because when I in the parties I change for myself and it's giving me good chance to relaxing and this time I can hang out with my friends and we enjoy from ourselves.
✓ I have loved parties for 30 years because when I am at parties I feel like I can be myself. They give me a good chance to relax, and I can hang out with my friends and we enjoy ourselves.
Avvalo, jumla vaqt mosligi va fe'l shakllari noto'g'ri. 'For 30 years I love' o'rniga present perfect 'I have loved' ishlatiladi, chunki faoliyat o'tgan davrdan hozirgacha davom etadi. 'to parties' noto'g'ri; to'liq ifoda 'love parties' yoki 'go to parties' bo'lishi kerak. 'when I in the parties' o'rniga prepozitsiya bilan 'when I am at parties' kerak. 'it's giving me good chance to relaxing' da: 'give' umumiy hozirgi holatni ifodalaydi va 'to relax' infinitiv kerak; shuning uchun 'They give me a good chance to relax.' 'we enjoy from ourselves' noto'g'ri; to'g'ri ibora 'we enjoy ourselves'. Taklif: vaqt mosligini tekshiring, to'g'ri prepozitsiya va infinitiv yoki -ing shaklini ishlating, pronominal refleksiv shaklni to'g'ri qo'llang.
× When I was young I had been a party three times or five times in the month and this time I go to there with my relatives or my parents and I find I try to find some friends to play with me.
✓ When I was young, I went to parties three or five times a month. At that time I went there with my relatives or my parents, and I tried to find friends to play with me.
Bu jumla o'tgan zamonni talab qiladi. 'I had been a party' noto'g'ri; 'go to a party' yoki 'go to parties' bo'lishi kerak va sodda o'tgan zamon 'I went' ishlatiladi. 'three times or five times in the month' o'rniga 'three or five times a month' tabiiy. 'this time I go to there' vaqt mosligiga mos kelmaydi; o'tgan payt haqida gapirilayotganligi uchun 'At that time I went there' ishlatiladi. 'I find I try to find' ortiqcha va noaniq; o'tmishda 'I tried to find' yetarli. Taklif: o'tgan voqealarni tasvirlashda simple past ishlating, ortiqcha so'zlardan saqlaning va prepozitsiya 'to' bilan 'go there' yoki 'go to the party' qo'llang.
× Unfortunately no I didn't think about this and because it's a game with good pressure during the day for the reason I didn't like didn't do like it, I just going to parties to enjoy for myself.
✓ Unfortunately, no. I hadn't thought about organizing a party, and because it is quite stressful during the day I didn't want to do it. I just go to parties to enjoy myself.
'I didn't think about this' ham mumkin, lekin 'Have you ever organized a party?' savoliga mos holda o'tmishdan oldingi holatni bildirish uchun 'I hadn't thought about organizing a party' aniqroq. 'it's a game with good pressure' noaniq va xato; ehtimol 'it is quite stressful' yoki 'it involves a lot of pressure' demoqchi. 'for the reason I didn't like didn't do like it' grammatik jihatdan noto'g'ri — sodda o'tgan 'I didn't want to do it' to'g'ri. 'I just going to parties to enjoy for myself' da verb formasi noto'g'ri; hozirgi odat uchun 'I just go to parties to enjoy myself' yoki o'tmishni nazarda tutsa 'I just went'. Taklif: mos zamonni tanlang, fe'lning to'g'ri formasini ishlating (do/going), va aniq ifodalar (stressful, enjoy myself).