Party— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 答えは簡潔であるべきですが、語法や語彙、意味の明瞭さに問題があります。具体的には動詞の形（offers → offer）、不自然な表現（"be confirmed"、"increase our blood"、"spend present time"）を修正し、誰とどんな場面で楽しむのかなど具体例を加えてください。また、文をつなぐために接続詞（for example, because, so）を使い、全体を3文以内でまとめる練習をしてください。

Example: Yes, I enjoy parties because they help me meet new people and relax. For example, at birthday parties I usually talk with friends and try new foods, which makes the event fun and memorable. I also like helping host because it lets me feel involved and welcomed.

Suggestion: 過去形や語順、語彙の誤りが目立ちます（hardly went there → rarely went to parties、prefers → preferred）。意味があいまいな表現（"injure infectious things"）は正確な理由に言い換えてください。頻度を表す語（rarely, often）と簡潔な理由を1文で示し、接続語（because）でつなぐ練習をしてください。具体的な例（親の心配の内容）を1つ入れると良いです。

Example: I rarely went to parties when I was a child because my parents were worried about safety and strangers. For example, they thought crowded events could be risky, so we usually stayed at family gatherings instead.

Suggestion: 文法や語彙の誤りが多く、意味が取りにくい表現（"I recently willing"、"spend prison time"）があります。過去形と現在完了の使い分けを整理し、理由は簡潔に一つ示してください。また、具体的な準備や活動（場所、人数、何をしたか）を短く付け加えると良いです。接続詞（so, because, when）を使い、2〜3文でまとめてください。

Example: Yes, I have organized a party at my house last month. I invited about ten friends, prepared snacks and music, and we played games together, which made everyone feel relaxed. I like hosting because it gives me a chance to bring friends together.

× Yes I do, I like to help or join parties.

✓ Yes, I do. I like to help organize or join parties.

The student used 'help or join' which is unclear; 'help organize' is the correct collocation when assisting with parties. A punctuation fix (comma to periods) improves clarity. Suggestion: use verbs that collocate correctly, e.g., 'help organize' or 'help with organizing'.

× Parties offers me a lot of opportunity to be confirmed and spend present time with others.

✓ Parties offer me a lot of opportunities to meet people and spend time with others.

Subject 'Parties' is plural so verb should be 'offer' not 'offers' (subject-verb agreement). 'Opportunity' should be plural here and phrases like 'to be confirmed' and 'present time' are incorrect; likely intended 'meet people' and 'spend time'. Suggestion: ensure verb agrees with plural subject and use common collocations.

× Besides, I can increase our blood, my relationship with new person.

✓ Besides, I can improve my relationships with new people.

Phrases 'increase our blood' and 'my relationship with new person' are incorrect collocations and meaning. Use 'improve my relationships with new people'. 'People' should be plural and 'improve' is the correct verb. Suggestion: choose verbs that match the intended meaning and use plural forms for general references.

× When I was a kid, I hardly went there.

✓ When I was a kid, I hardly ever went to parties.

The sentence is understandable but missing the object 'parties' and could use 'hardly ever' for naturalness. Also use 'went to' with events/places. Suggestion: include the object and use natural adverb placement.

× My parents prefers to go there because there are risk to get some injure infectious things and there are some harmful people.

✓ My parents prefer to go there less because there is a risk of getting infectious injuries and there may be harmful people.

Subject 'My parents' is plural so verb should be 'prefer' not 'prefers'. 'There are risk' should be 'there is a risk' (singular) or 'there are risks' (plural). 'Get some injure infectious things' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'getting infectious injuries'. Suggestion: match verb to plural subject and use correct noun phrases and prepositions ('risk of', 'getting').

× Yes, I have I recently willing to hold a party.

✓ Yes, I have. I was recently willing to hold a party.

The original mixes present perfect 'have' with unclear structure. To express recent willingness in past, use past tense 'was willing'. Alternatively, 'I have recently been willing' could work but is awkward. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and use auxiliary verbs correctly.

× I held party in my house and welcoming others.

✓ I held a party in my house and welcomed others.

Missing article 'a' before 'party' and parallel verb forms required: 'held' and 'welcomed' should both be past tense. 'Welcoming' is incorrect here. Suggestion: maintain parallel verb tense and include necessary articles.

× It is because I can spend prison time with my friends and I want to invite my.

✓ It is because I can spend quality time with my friends and I want to invite them.

'Prison time' is incorrect and likely a mistranslation; use 'quality time'. 'Invite my' is incomplete; use object pronoun 'them'. Suggestion: use correct nouns for intended meaning and proper object pronouns.