Party— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and relevant with a direct topic sentence and supporting details. To improve, shorten the response slightly to avoid redundancy, add one linking word for cohesion, and include a specific example to show naturalness (e.g., name a game or topic you chat about). Also vary vocabulary slightly (use "prefer" or "socialise") to demonstrate range.

Example: I don't usually enjoy big parties because I'm introverted and find socialising with many people tiring. However, I prefer small gatherings with close friends, for example a dinner where we play board games like Codenames and chat about our recent trips.

Suggestion: Good concise answer with a clear frequency and supporting details. To improve, use a linking phrase (e.g., "usually" or "in particular") to connect ideas, avoid repetitive adjectives like "delicious" and "different," and add a specific memory or sensory detail to make it more vivid.

Example: I had parties about two or three times a year, mainly for friends' birthdays. In particular, I remember one party where we had chocolate cake and played musical chairs, which was noisy but really memorable.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question and gives reasons, but it contains a slight contradiction (rarely organize vs. usually host) and some repetition. Clarify the frequency, resolve the contradiction, add a linking word (e.g., "but" or "however"), and include one specific detail about planning or a favourite game to show engagement in the activity.

Example: I don't often organise parties because planning takes a lot of time and energy. However, I usually host a birthday get-together at my house for close friends, where we play charades, stream a playlist I made, and order sushi.

× About two or three times a year, I usually went to parties for my friend's birthdays, and I enjoyed the delicious cake and different snacks.

✓ About two or three times a year, I usually went to parties for my friends' birthdays, and I enjoyed the delicious cake and different snacks.

The possessive 'friend's birthdays' implies one friend having multiple birthdays; the intended meaning is birthdays of multiple friends, so the plural possessive 'friends'' is required. Change to 'my friends\' birthdays' to match plural owners.

× Actually, I rarely organize parties because planning is tiring and takes a lot of time and energy.

✓ Actually, I rarely organize parties because planning is tiring and takes a lot of time and energy.

No correction needed; the sentence correctly uses present tense for habitual action. Included here to show it meets the allowed list but requires no change.

× However, for my birthday, I usually host a large get together for my close friends at my house.

✓ However, for my birthday, I usually host a large get-together for my close friends at my house.

'Get together' should be hyphenated as 'get-together' when used as a noun. This is a compound noun formatting issue related to standard usage; plural 'friends' is correct.

× We play party games, listen to music and enjoy a variety of foods, which makes the celebration really memorable.

✓ We play party games, listen to music, and enjoy a variety of foods, which makes the celebration really memorable.

No major grammatical error, but for parallelism in lists in English it is standard to include a serial comma before 'and' (Oxford comma) for clarity: 'play party games, listen to music, and enjoy'. Also the relative clause correctly uses singular 'makes' to refer to 'which' meaning 'this combination' (treated as singular). The suggestion improves clarity.