Part 1
Examiner
Do you like parties?
Candidate
I don't really enjoy parties because I'm quite introverted and prefer quieter evenings at home. For instance, I feel uncomfortable in large crowds and would rather relax with a good book.
Examiner
How often did you have a party when you were a kid?
Candidate
I often had small birthday celebrations when I was a kid because my family wasn't really into big parties. Usually only close relatives came and we would have a simple cake and play games, which I always enjoyed.
Examiner
Have you ever organized a party?
Candidate
I organized a party once for my brother's birthday. I booked a small cake, arrange light refreshments and music, and sends our invitations and reminders so everyone could attend.
Do you like parties?
Score: 82.0Suggestion: 回答自然并直接,但可更精练并加入一两句具体例子或对比来丰富内容。注意句子数量不超过5句,避免重复表达(例如“prefer quieter evenings”与“would rather relax”意义接近)。
Example: I usually don’t enjoy parties because I’m introverted and feel uneasy in large crowds. For example, at crowded events I often leave early and prefer staying home reading a novel where I can relax.
How often did you have a party when you were a kid?
Score: 88.0Suggestion: 回答清楚具体,包含频率与原因。可以增加一处细节(如年龄或一次特别的记忆)来使内容更生动,但注意保持连贯并使用连接词。
Example: I usually had small birthday celebrations as a child because my family didn’t like big parties. For example, when I turned eight we invited only grandparents and cousins, had a simple cake and played board games — I remember feeling very happy.
Have you ever organized a party?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 内容具体但有语法和用词错误(时态与主谓一致,如“arrange”应为“arranged”,“sends”应为“sent”)。建议把动作按顺序列出并用连接词使条理更清晰。保持句子数量在不超过5句。
Example: Yes, I organized my brother’s birthday once. I booked a small cake, arranged light refreshments and music, and sent invitations and reminders so guests would attend on time.
× I organized a party once for my brother's birthday. I booked a small cake, arrange light refreshments and music, and sends our invitations and reminders so everyone could attend.
✓ I organized a party once for my brother's birthday. I booked a small cake, arranged light refreshments and music, and sent our invitations and reminders so everyone could attend.
错误类型涉及动词时态和主谓一致,需按过去式一致使用。句子描述的是过去发生的事情,动词应使用过去式:booked(已正确)、arranged(原句用原形 arrange,应改为过去式)和 sent(原句用现在时 sends,应改为过去式 sent 并且主语为 I,所以不加 -s)。建议:描述过去的事件时,确保所有主要动词都使用过去式;检查每个并列动词是否与句子的时态一致,并注意第三人称单数 -s 只用于现在时的第三人称主语。