Party— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and be more concise. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide a clearer reason for disliking parties.

Example: Honestly, I am not a fan of parties because they can be inconvenient. I prefer spending time alone as it helps me relax and feel comfortable, so I usually avoid gatherings.

Suggestion: Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent and provide specific examples of occasions you attended parties.

Example: As a child, I generally avoided parties, but I attended special occasions like birthdays and weddings. Otherwise, I preferred spending time alone because I enjoy solitude.

Suggestion: Reduce filler words and improve grammar. Provide clearer reasons and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Example: No, I have never organized a party because I don't enjoy the work involved. Moreover, I am not good at organizing events, so I usually avoid such activities.

× I am not a fan of uh parties because it's really inconvenient for me sometimes.

✓ I am not a fan of parties because they are really inconvenient for me sometimes.

The phrase 'it's really inconvenient' incorrectly uses a singular pronoun 'it' to refer to 'parties', which is plural. The correct pronoun should be 'they' to agree with the plural noun 'parties'.

× I enjoy my me time alone and it's really comfortable and relaxing for me.

✓ I enjoy my me time alone and it is really comfortable and relaxing for me.

The phrase 'my me time' is redundant. 'Me time' alone is sufficient and correct. Also, 'it's' is acceptable but expanding to 'it is' improves clarity.

× That's why I really like to avoid this kind of parties or get togethers.

✓ That's why I really like to avoid these kinds of parties or get-togethers.

The phrase 'this kind of parties' is incorrect because 'kind' is singular but 'parties' is plural. It should be 'these kinds of parties' to match plural form. Also, 'get togethers' should be hyphenated as 'get-togethers'.

× From my childhood, I try to keep maintain distance from uh parties.

✓ Since my childhood, I have tried to keep a distance from parties.

The phrase 'From my childhood' is better expressed as 'Since my childhood' to indicate a starting point in the past continuing to present. 'Try to keep maintain distance' is incorrect; it should be 'have tried to keep a distance'. The verb tense should be present perfect to indicate an action continuing from past to present.

× I usually join parties when uh, there was a special birthday or any kind of weddings, uh, then I will go.

✓ I usually joined parties when there was a special birthday or any kind of wedding; then I would go.

The question is about past frequency, so past tense 'joined' is appropriate. 'Any kind of weddings' should be singular 'wedding' because 'kind' is singular. 'Then I will go' should be 'then I would go' to maintain past conditional tense.

× But in other others, generally I try not to go there because I love enjoying my me time alone.

✓ But on other occasions, generally I try not to go there because I love enjoying my me time alone.

The phrase 'in other others' is incorrect and unclear. 'On other occasions' is a correct expression to indicate other times. 'My me time' is redundant; 'my me time' is acceptable but 'me time' alone is better.

× No, I haven't ever organized a party because I am not a fan of uh, doing uh works because I am really enjoy my time and I am not really good at this kind of organizing things.

✓ No, I have never organized a party because I am not a fan of doing work; I really enjoy my time and I am not very good at organizing these kinds of things.

'Haven't ever' is better expressed as 'have never'. 'Doing uh works' is incorrect; 'doing work' is correct. 'I am really enjoy' is incorrect; it should be 'I really enjoy'. 'This kind of organizing things' should be 'these kinds of things' to match plural form.

× That's why I give a distance from these types of activities.

✓ That's why I keep my distance from these types of activities.

The phrase 'give a distance' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'keep my distance'.