Party— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by making it more natural and concise. Try to avoid redundancy and use correct grammar, for example, use 'a party' instead of 'party'. Also, use linking words like 'however' to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: I like some parties, especially when my close friends attend. However, if I don't know many people there, I usually don't enjoy it much.

Suggestion: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear expressions. 'When I was a kid' and 'in my college' are inconsistent. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'just go drinks'. Try to be more specific and use correct tenses.

Example: When I was a teenager, I often went to parties with my friends, especially during college. We usually met a few times a week to have fun and relax.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to structure your answer clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details. Use correct verb tenses and avoid repetition. Also, explain your role more clearly.

Example: Yes, I have helped my friend organize a party. As part of the group leaders, I was responsible for finding food and making sure everything was ready.

× I can't say I don't like party because I like some of them but it depends.

✓ I can't say I don't like parties because I like some of them but it depends.

The word 'party' should be plural 'parties' because it refers to parties in general, not a single party. In English, countable nouns referring to general concepts are usually pluralized here.

× If my close friend attend that party I would enjoy it so much.

✓ If my close friend attends that party I would enjoy it so much.

The verb 'attend' must agree with the singular subject 'my close friend' by adding 's' to form 'attends' in the present tense.

× But if I go to party that I don't know anyone or only one person and they talk with their friends, I may not like that.

✓ But if I go to a party where I don't know anyone or only one person and they talk with their friends, I may not like that.

The noun 'party' needs an article 'a' because it is singular and countable. Also, 'where' is more appropriate than 'that' to refer to the place.

× I usually went to parties every day when I was in my college because many of my friends really enjoy their teenage life.

✓ I usually went to parties every day when I was in college because many of my friends really enjoyed their teenage life.

The phrase 'in my college' should be 'in college' as the idiomatic expression. Also, 'enjoy' should be past tense 'enjoyed' to match the past time frame.

× They just go drinks every day.

✓ They just go drinking every day.

The phrase 'go drinks' is incorrect. The correct form is 'go drinking' where 'go' is followed by a verb in the -ing form to indicate the activity.

× Yes, I help my friend organize a party because I am part of the the the group leader that we have to locate host the party.

✓ Yes, I help my friend organize a party because I am part of the group leadership that has to locate and host the party.

The phrase 'the the the' is a repetition error. 'Group leader' should be 'group leadership' to refer to the team. Also, 'that we have to locate host the party' is incorrect; it should be 'that has to locate and host the party' for clarity and correct verb agreement.

× I only find food.

✓ I only find the food.

Adding the definite article 'the' before 'food' specifies the particular food related to the party, making the sentence clearer.