Party— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: Yes, I really like parties because they are fun and allow me to spend time with my friends. I enjoy places where the music is not too loud, so we can talk and enjoy ourselves comfortably.

Suggestion: Bạn đã trả lời khá đầy đủ nhưng câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và một số từ không chính xác, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và rõ ràng. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng, tránh lỗi phát âm và chọn từ phù hợp hơn để mô tả chi tiết.

Example: I usually had a party once a year on my birthday. My parents organized big celebrations and invited many of my friends. We played games and enjoyed delicious food like birthday cake.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa chính xác, làm cho ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên luyện tập cách sử dụng thì hiện tại hoàn thành và quá khứ, đồng thời sắp xếp câu hợp lý để truyền đạt ý tốt hơn.

Example: I have never organized a party myself because my parents always arrange it for me on special occasions like my birthday. They invite many friends and prepare special food, which makes me very happy.

× Yes, of course I am really like parties because I am a actual person and I really like some place that we don't noisy would allow of music and also that home.

✓ Yes, of course I really like parties because I am an active person and I really like some places that are not noisy and allow music, and also at home.

The sentence contains incorrect use of adjectives and adverbs such as 'really like' with 'am', 'a actual' instead of 'an active', and awkward phrasing like 'some place that we don't noisy would allow of music'. The corrections improve adjective use and sentence clarity.

× The party is. Is make me and my friend more collection in the communication?

✓ Parties make me and my friends communicate more effectively.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correction restructures the sentence to express the intended meaning clearly and grammatically.

× My parents always organize a big birthday party for me an invited many of my friends I really insured is partly because we play a lot of gay man.

✓ My parents always organized a big birthday party for me and invited many of my friends. I really enjoyed it partly because we played a lot of games.

The sentence incorrectly uses present tense 'organize' and 'invited' together and has spelling errors like 'insured' and 'gay man'. The correction uses past tense consistently and corrects spelling and word choice.

× It's delicious food like a birthday cake.

✓ There was delicious food like birthday cake.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'It's' and 'delicious food' without a proper verb. The correction uses 'There was' to indicate existence and corrects article usage.

× I have never organized a party for myself because in a special occasion like my birthday, my parents always organized is for me an invite to a lot of my friends.

✓ I have never organized a party for myself because on special occasions like my birthday, my parents always organize them for me and invite a lot of my friends.

The sentence mixes present perfect with past tense incorrectly and has errors like 'organized is' and 'an invite'. The correction uses present tense 'organize' to match 'have never organized' and corrects phrasing.

× For me also cook allows up special food in this occasion.

✓ They also cook special food for me on these occasions.

The original sentence misuses prepositions 'for me' and 'in this occasion' and has awkward phrasing 'cook allows up'. The correction uses correct prepositions and clearer wording.

× This make me feel very happy.

✓ This makes me feel very happy.

The subject-verb agreement is incorrect; 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'This'.