App— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Говорите более уверенно и прямо, избегайте лишних пауз и слов-паразитов. Дайте полное предложение, укажите конкретные приложения и кратко поясните, почему вы их использовали. Попробуйте ограничиться одной-двумя предложениями и использовать связку для ясности.

Example: I recently used Netflix to watch a TV series last night because I wanted to relax after studying. I also checked my messaging app to catch up with friends.

Suggestion: Фокусируйтесь на грамматически правильной форме и стройте предложение с подлежащим и сказуемым. Давайте конкретные примеры и объясняйте, как именно приложение вам помогает, используя связки (for example, because, so). Не говорите расплывчато.

Example: I am usually interested in language-learning apps, such as Duolingo and Memrise, because they help me understand difficult topics and practice vocabulary. For example, they provide short exercises and instant feedback.

Suggestion: Убирайте повторения и ненужные слова, стройте логичную фразу: сначала источник информации, затем краткое объяснение. Используйте связки (for example, because, from) для связности. Приводите конкретные источники, например, друзья, отзывы или статьи.

Example: I usually discover new apps through recommendations from friends and online reviews. For example, English learners in my study group often share useful apps, and I also read articles and forum posts to compare options.

Suggestion: Используйте правильную грамматику и конкретные формулировки: назовите типы приложений и объясните причину. Избегайте расплывчатых выражений и повторов. Уточните, какие функции вам нужны (трекеры, планировщики и т.д.).

Example: In the future, I would like to use productivity apps and health apps, such as habit trackers and workout planners, because they can help me organize my tasks and improve my lifestyle. For instance, a calendar app and a fitness tracker would be useful.

× I usually interested in the language learning apps because they help me with understanding and recognize some topic which I don't understand.

✓ I am usually interested in language learning apps because they help me understand and recognize topics that I don't understand.

The sentence lacks the correct present tense continuous structure for 'usually interested' which requires a form of to be + adjective (am interested). Also 'help me with understanding and recognize' mixes structures: use either 'help me understand and recognize' or 'help me with understanding and recognizing'. 'Some topic' should be plural 'topics' to match general meaning and avoid singular/plural mismatch. Suggestion: use 'I am usually interested in language learning apps because they help me understand and recognize topics I don't understand.'

× So really helps like that.

✓ So they really help with that.

The fragment 'So really helps like that' is missing a clear subject and uses a verb form that does not agree with the implied plural subject 'apps'. Use 'they help' for subject-verb agreement and 'with that' to express assistance. Suggestion: include the subject and adjust verb: 'So they really help with that.'

× Like this side website.

✓ Like this website.

The phrase 'this side website' is ungrammatical and redundant. Likely the speaker meant 'this website.' Remove 'side' which is unnecessary. Suggestion: simplify to 'Like this website.'

× It's, uh, it's happened quite often from advice, uh, and advice from people who just who learning, uh, English or have, uh, advantage levels.

✓ It has happened quite often because of advice from people who are learning English or who have advanced levels.

'It's happened' is an incorrect contraction for present perfect; use 'it has happened.' The preposition 'from' is wrong for cause; use 'because of' or 'due to' (preposition error). 'Who just who learning' misses auxiliary 'are' and word order is wrong. 'Advantage levels' is incorrect word choice; should be 'advanced levels.' Suggestion: use clear present perfect and correct relative clause: 'It has happened quite often because of advice from people who are learning English or who have advanced levels.'

× So, and they help me with it.

✓ They help me with it.

The original contains an unnecessary filler 'So, and' which disrupts sentence flow. Grammar itself is fine but remove extra conjunction. Suggestion: say 'They help me with it.'

× Just find out different apps and so.

✓ I just find different apps that way.

The original is a fragment lacking a clear subject and awkward ending 'and so.' Use 'I just find different apps that way' to supply subject and link to previous idea. Suggestion: keep sentence concise and complete.'

× Actually I think I would like to use apps which is support productivity and help with with losing a health life.

✓ Actually, I think I would like to use apps that support productivity and help me live a healthier life.

Use 'that support' instead of 'which is support' because 'apps' is plural and requires plural verb 'support' (subject-verb agreement). 'Help with with losing a health life' is ungrammatical: 'lose a healthy life' is incorrect; intended meaning is to 'live a healthier life.' Also double 'with' should be one. Suggestion: 'apps that support productivity and help me live a healthier life.'

× Something like that maybe.

✓ Something like that, maybe.

This is not a major grammatical error but needs a comma for natural pause. Suggestion: include a comma: 'Something like that, maybe.'