App— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but brief and slightly unnatural. Start with a clear topic sentence, give one or two specific reasons or details, and avoid vague phrasing like “in my phone there are various apps.” Use linking words if adding details. Keep to 1–3 sentences for clarity.

Example: I’ve recently installed Snapchat. I wanted to try its filters and quick photo sharing features, and I’ve been using it to send short videos to friends because it’s fast and fun.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons with linking words (for example, because, also). Use plural/singular correctly and avoid redundancy (e.g., “meet ups our friends” → “meet up with friends”). Aim for two concise sentences.

Example: I’m usually interested in social media apps because they help me keep in touch with friends and stay connected with my culture. For example, I use Facebook and Instagram to see family updates and follow cultural events.

Suggestion: The content is fine but the phrasing is ungrammatical and repetitive. Start with a direct sentence and then give specific examples or one brief explanation. Use linking words like “often” or “sometimes” and correct prepositions (e.g., “hear about” or “learn about”).

Example: I usually hear about new apps from friends or online ads. For instance, a friend recently recommended a language app, and I later saw an ad for it on social media, so I decided to try it.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but repetitive and contains grammar mistakes. Give a clear topic sentence about the type of app you would like, then explain a specific reason or situation using linking words. Avoid repeating “in future” and correct sentence structure.

Example: In the future I would like to use ride‑hailing apps like Uber when I travel. For example, if I visit Dubai, I would install Uber to make getting around the city easier and faster.

× Usually I'm interested in social media app because by it we meet ups our friends online as well as get connected to our culture.

✓ Usually I'm interested in social media apps because through them we meet up with our friends online and also stay connected to our culture.

The noun 'app' should be plural 'apps' because 'social media' implies multiple applications; 'meet ups' is incorrect as a verb phrase — use 'meet up with' and include object 'our friends'; 'by it' is incorrect preposition and pronoun choice for plural, so use 'through them'; word order and connectors adjusted for natural English.

× Usually I'm interested in social media app because by it we meet ups our friends online as well as get connected to our culture.

✓ Usually I'm interested in social media apps because through them we meet up with our friends online and also stay connected to our culture.

The phrase 'by it' uses the wrong preposition and singular pronoun; use 'through' to indicate means and 'them' to agree with plural 'apps'. Also 'meet up with' requires preposition 'with' to mark the object.

× Usually I'm interested in social media app because by it we meet ups our friends online as well as get connected to our culture.

✓ Usually I'm interested in social media apps because through them we meet up with our friends online and also stay connected to our culture.

'Meet ups' incorrectly uses a noun form; the correct verbal expression is 'meet up' (verb) followed by 'with' and the object. 'Get connected' is acceptable but 'stay connected' is more natural in this context.

× Well, sometimes I get to know about from the advertisements as well as from my friends.

✓ Well, sometimes I learn about them from advertisements and also from my friends.

The phrase 'get to know about from' is ungrammatical. Use 'learn about' or 'find out about' and 'from' should directly follow the verb phrase: 'learn about them from advertisements'.

× Well, sometimes I get to know about from the advertisements as well as from my friends. They told me to install.

✓ Well, sometimes I learn about them from advertisements and from my friends. They told me to install the app.

Pronoun 'them' refers to 'apps' (plural) and must be explicit. The second sentence lacks the object 'the app' for 'install' — include it to clarify what was installed.

× Well in future I want to use the Uber app which is known for traveling.

✓ Well, in the future I want to use the Uber app, which is known for transportation.

Add article 'the' before 'future' for natural phrasing; 'traveling' as a noun is less natural here — 'transportation' or 'travel' fits better. Also add a comma before the nonrestrictive clause 'which is known...'. The tense 'want to use' is appropriate for future intention.

× In future I want to travel a place which known as Dubai where I install that app.

✓ In the future I want to travel to a place called Dubai, where I will install that app.

Sentence needs preposition 'to' after 'travel'; 'which known as' is incorrect — use 'called' or 'known as' with proper verb: 'called Dubai' or 'which is known as Dubai'. Also clarify sequence and tense: use future 'will install' to indicate intention to install the app when there.