History— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally relevant but contains some inaccuracies and awkward phrasing. For example, 'French revelation' should be 'French Revolution', and 'mobile stat ruled India' is unclear. Try to use correct historical terms and ensure clarity. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Example: Yes, I studied history in my 10th standard. I learned about many kings, such as Francis I of France, and important events like the French Revolution. Additionally, I studied the period when the Mughal Empire ruled India.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and relevant, but some word choices are slightly awkward, such as 'novels from the past' and 'quite indulging'. Use more precise vocabulary like 'historical novels' and 'engaging'. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

Example: I mostly learn history by reading history books and historical novels. Moreover, there are many reels on the Internet that present history through graphical representations, which helps me understand better. Apart from that, I also watch engaging movies based on historical events.

Suggestion: Your answer has good intent but contains unclear phrases like 'sentient culture' and 'sits and gestures'. Try to use clearer and more accurate expressions. Also, provide specific reasons and examples to support your points, and use linking words for coherence.

Example: Learning history has many benefits. For example, it helps people feel connected to their culture and heritage. When we learn about heroes who fought for freedom, we become more enthusiastic and develop respect for their sacrifices.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'learning history is very important for a person' and 'learning about their inches'. Try to correct grammar and use precise vocabulary. Also, use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Example: Yes, I believe learning history is very important because nowadays, due to media influence, many children forget about their ancestors and focus more on influencers. However, if they learn about their heritage, they can feel connected to their roots and become more responsible members of society.

× I read about lot of kings in the past like Francis of France and I also read about the French revelation.

✓ I read about a lot of kings in the past like Francis of France and I also read about the French revolution.

The phrase 'lot of kings' is missing the article 'a' before 'lot'. Also, 'revelation' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'revolution' when referring to historical events like the French Revolution.

× Moreover, I also get to learn about the mobile stat ruled India.

✓ Moreover, I also got to learn about the mobile state that ruled India.

The verb 'get' should be in past tense 'got' to match the past context. Also, 'stat' is a typo and should be 'state'. Additionally, 'that' is needed to connect the clause properly.

× I mostly learn history by reading books or novels from the past.

✓ I mostly learn history by reading books or novels about the past.

The preposition 'from' is incorrect here; 'about' is appropriate when referring to the subject matter of books or novels.

× Moreover, there are a lot of reels available on the Internet which shows history in graphical representation, which is very good to learn.

✓ Moreover, there are a lot of reels available on the Internet which show history in graphical representation, which is very good to learn.

The subject 'reels' is plural, so the verb should be 'show' instead of 'shows' to maintain subject-verb agreement.

× Apart from that, there are also a lot of movies based on history which are quite indulging.

✓ Apart from that, there are also a lot of movies based on history which are quite engaging.

The word 'indulging' is incorrect here; the correct adjective is 'engaging' to describe movies that hold interest.

× By learning history, a person can feel connected to a sentient culture.

✓ By learning history, a person can feel connected to a certain culture.

The word 'sentient' means 'able to perceive or feel'; the intended word is 'certain', meaning specific or particular.

× Whenever a person reads about sits and gestures who fought for their freedom, they feel very enthusiastic about learning them, and they also start respecting them.

✓ Whenever a person reads about saints and leaders who fought for their freedom, they feel very enthusiastic about learning about them, and they also start respecting them.

The words 'sits and gestures' are incorrect; likely intended 'saints and leaders'. Also, 'learning them' should be 'learning about them' for correct usage.

× Yes, I think the learning history is very important for a person because nowadays due to influence of media, children these days are forgetting about their ancestors and are more focused on influencer.

✓ Yes, I think learning history is very important for a person because nowadays, due to the influence of media, children these days are forgetting about their ancestors and are more focused on influencers.

The phrase 'the learning history' is incorrect; 'learning history' is correct. Also, 'influencer' should be plural 'influencers' to match the context.

× These days if they will learn about their inches, they can feel connected to their roots and become responsible in their society.

✓ These days, if they learn about their ancestors, they can feel connected to their roots and become responsible in their society.

The word 'inches' is incorrect; the intended word is 'ancestors'. Also, the conditional sentence should use 'if they learn' instead of 'if they will learn' for correct tense usage.