Stories— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ phù hợp hơn. Bạn nên dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích chi tiết cụ thể hơn và dùng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc.

Example: Yes, I loved stories in my childhood because they helped me understand the world around me. Especially, I enjoyed animal stories since I found animals very cute. For example, my mother often told me stories about animals before bedtime.

Suggestion: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ không chính xác và nói lắp. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc và có cấu trúc tốt hơn. Hãy dùng liên từ để kết nối ý và giải thích rõ lý do bạn thích nghe hơn đọc.

Example: I definitely prefer listening to stories because I can understand the main ideas quickly. Reading stories sometimes makes me feel sleepy, and I get bored easily when I have to read for a long time.

Suggestion: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Hãy dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, giải thích chi tiết và dùng từ vựng phù hợp để mô tả câu chuyện bạn viết.

Example: Yes, I did. When I was a child, I loved dogs, so I wrote many stories about them. For example, I wrote a story about two dogs who could walk like humans, and in the end, they met and fell in love, which I thought was very sweet.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp số nhiều/số ít và cách dùng từ chính xác hơn. Bạn nên dùng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc và diễn đạt ý rõ ràng hơn.

Example: My favorite stories are definitely magical ones. For example, I am a big fan of Harry Potter because I find it interesting how the characters use their words and powers to control objects and fight against their enemies.

× The reason is I find stories were really useful to learn about their surrounded world, especially the stories about the animal, which is really cute.

✓ The reason is I find stories really useful to learn about their surrounding world, especially the stories about animals, which are really cute.

The phrase 'stories were really useful' incorrectly uses the past participle 'were' after 'find'. The correct form is 'find stories really useful' without 'were'. Also, 'surrounded' should be 'surrounding' as an adjective describing the world. 'The animal' should be plural 'animals' to match the context, and 'which is' should be 'which are' to agree with the plural noun 'animals'.

× For example, Migrant Mother usually told me the stories before going to bed.

✓ For example, Migrant Mother usually told me stories before going to bed.

The article 'the' before 'stories' is unnecessary because it refers to stories in general, not specific ones. Removing 'the' makes the sentence more natural.

× Definitely listening uh this because I thought I'm a person that can get bored easily when producing the stories because I can catch the concept quickly.

✓ Definitely listening to this because I think I'm a person who can get bored easily when producing stories because I can catch the concept quickly.

The phrase 'listening uh this' is incorrect; it should be 'listening to this' because 'listen' requires the preposition 'to'. 'Thought' should be 'think' to match the present tense context. 'That' is better replaced by 'who' when referring to a person. 'The stories' should be 'stories' as a general reference.

× So uh, it is really sleepy when read a story.

✓ So, it is really boring to read a story.

'Sleepy' is an adjective describing a person, not an activity. The correct adjective to describe the activity is 'boring'. Also, 'when read a story' is incorrect; it should be 'to read a story'.

× More particularly, I wrote a story about two dogs can walk like humans, so in the end they come to each other and heart over, which is really fine.

✓ More particularly, I wrote a story about two dogs who can walk like humans, so in the end they come to each other and fall in love, which is really nice.

The phrase 'two dogs can walk' needs a relative pronoun 'who' to connect the clause. 'Heart over' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'fall in love'. 'Fine' is better replaced by 'nice' to express a positive feeling about the story.

× My favorite stories are definitely about something that are magical.

✓ My favorite stories are definitely about things that are magical.

'Something' is singular and does not agree with the plural verb 'are'. It should be replaced with 'things' to match the plural verb.

× I find the way the characters use their words and their power to manipulate those items and to fight each other people is really interesting.

✓ I find the way the characters use their words and their power to manipulate those items and to fight each other is really interesting.

The phrase 'fight each other people' is incorrect. 'Each other' already implies mutual action between people, so 'people' is redundant and should be removed.