Websites— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific details. Avoid redundancy and use linking words (for example, 'for example' or 'such as'). Correct verb forms and articles (e.g., 'the Government of India' and 'scholarship opportunities').

Example: I often visit the Government of India website to check scholarship opportunities for higher studies. For example, I regularly read announcements about merit-based and need-based scholarships and their application deadlines.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence and avoid hesitations and repetitions. Use linking words to add a brief reason why it is your favourite. Correct phrasing: 'I developed the website' and avoid repeating the same idea.

Example: My favourite website is Harvin Technologies because I developed it for my company. As the CEO, I designed the site to showcase our services and client projects, so I visit it often to update content and check performance.

Suggestion: Use clearer grammar and structure: start with a direct statement then give specific examples using linking words like 'for example' or 'for instance'. Avoid invented words ('oftenly') and unclear phrases. Be specific about types of changes and their purpose.

Example: Yes, we update our websites regularly. For example, we change the layout and colour scheme to improve usability, and we also post recent results and news to keep users informed.

Suggestion: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence and then give 1–2 specific categories and reasons using linking words ('for example', 'because'). Avoid vague language and repetition.

Example: Several types of websites are popular in my country, such as news portals and e-commerce sites. For example, people use news websites to follow current events and online marketplaces to shop because they offer convenience and good prices.

Suggestion: Give a concise opinion sentence and support it with one clear reason, using correct grammar and linking words ('because' or 'since'). Use correct noun forms ('information' is uncountable) and simplify phrasing.

Example: I prefer getting information from websites because they are updated daily and developers can quickly correct or add content. For instance, online articles often reflect the latest statistics, while books may become outdated.

Suggestion: Start with a direct answer and add a brief reason or example. Avoid repeating earlier sentences; instead, expand slightly by explaining how the website is useful. Keep it to one or two supporting sentences.

Example: Yes, I would like to have my own website. As I mentioned, I developed a site for Harwin Technologies to showcase our services and attract clients, and I plan to add a blog to share industry insights.

× I often visit the websites of Government of India especially for notifying the scholarships opportunities that are given to the students who want to accomplish for their higher studies.

✓ I often visit the Government of India websites, especially to look for scholarship opportunities offered to students who want to pursue higher studies.

Problems: incorrect article/word choice ('the websites of Government of India' -> 'the Government of India websites'), incorrect gerund/infinitive use ('for notifying the scholarships opportunities' should be 'to look for scholarship opportunities'), plural/article issues ('scholarships opportunities' -> 'scholarship opportunities'), wrong verb choice ('accomplish for their higher studies' -> 'pursue higher studies'). Suggestion: use 'look for' or 'find' with 'scholarship opportunities' and 'pursue' for studies; correct articles and adjective order. (Grammar problem types: 22 Article errors; 11 Incorrect use of prepositions; 13 Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs.)

× My favorite website is Harvin Technologies. It is a company and I'm the CEO of it. I made the website I developed, sorry, I developed the website. So it's my favorite website to me.

✓ My favorite website is Harvin Technologies. It is a company and I am its CEO. I developed the website, so it is my favorite.

Problems: pronoun and possessive ('the CEO of it' -> 'its CEO'), redundancy and awkward sequence ('I made the website I developed, sorry, I developed the website' -> 'I developed the website'), unnecessary phrase 'to me' after 'favorite'. Suggestion: use 'its CEO' for company ownership, keep statements concise and avoid repetition. (Grammar problem types: 12 Incorrect use of pronouns; 26 Sentence structure errors.)

× Yes, we oftenly do changes in the website by take by replacing the layout with the other layout and changing the colours of the layout and we'll be posting our most results has been got by.

✓ Yes, we often make changes to the website by replacing the layout, changing its colors, and posting our most recent results.

Problems: incorrect adverb 'oftenly' -> 'often', wrong verb collocation 'do changes' -> 'make changes', incorrect preposition 'in the website' -> 'to the website', awkward phrase 'by take by replacing' removed, unnecessary repetition 'the other layout', incorrect tense/structure at end ('we'll be posting our most results has been got by' -> 'posting our most recent results'). Suggestion: use common collocations ('make changes to'), correct adverb forms, and simplify sentence structure. (Grammar problem types: 20 Incorrect adverb placement; 11 Incorrect use of prepositions; 26 Sentence structure errors.)

× In my country there are lots of website are popular. It is all depended on the individuals who often check the websites for their use or advantage of that website for them by giving some some benefit to the viewer.

✓ In my country, many websites are popular. It all depends on the individuals who check websites for their own use or advantage, since those sites provide benefits to viewers.

Problems: singular/plural ('lots of website' -> 'many websites'), duplicate verb 'are' removed, wrong passive 'It is all depended' -> 'It all depends', redundant phrases and repetition ('some some', 'for them by giving...') simplified, pronoun clarity ('their own use'). Suggestion: ensure noun and verb number agree, use 'depend on' in active form, avoid repetition. (Grammar problem types: 1 Singular and plural issue; 5 Past tense issue (wrong past participle 'depended'); 12 Incorrect use of pronouns.)

× Most of the time I prefer getting informations from websites rather than taking from the books because websites are changes from day-to-day and we can they can the developer can edit the changes while in the books it is already printed we cannot change.

✓ Most of the time I prefer getting information from websites rather than from books because websites change day to day and developers can edit them, while books are already printed and cannot be changed.

Problems: uncountable noun 'informations' -> 'information', awkward 'taking from the books' -> 'from books', incorrect verb form 'websites are changes' -> 'websites change', redundant phrases 'we can they can the developer can' simplified to 'developers can edit them', tense and passive clarity for books. Suggestion: remember 'information' is uncountable, use simple present for general truths, and avoid redundant pronouns. (Grammar problem types: 1 Singular and plural issue; 26 Sentence structure errors; 6 Present tense issue.)

× Yes, I would like to have my own website. As I told you before, I have developed a website which is useful to my company Harwin Technologies.

✓ Yes, I would like to have my own website. As I told you before, I have developed a website that is useful for my company Harwin Technologies.

Problems: relative pronoun/use ('which is useful to my company' -> 'that is useful for my company'), preposition choice 'useful for' is more natural than 'useful to' in this context. Suggestion: use 'that' for restrictive clauses and 'useful for' to indicate benefit to the company. (Grammar problem types: 11 Incorrect use of prepositions; 26 Sentence structure errors.)