Websites— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and directly state the kinds of websites you visit (e.g., academic, research databases) using a clear topic sentence, then briefly give one specific reason or example. Avoid repetition and limit to 2–3 short sentences. Use linking words (for example, because) to connect ideas.

Example: I often visit academic and research websites, such as Google Scholar and university repositories, because I am preparing a research proposal. For example, I use them to find recent studies and reference materials that help me design my methodology.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence naming the website and why you like it. Give one or two specific features you follow (e.g., share prices, exchange rates) and explain briefly how they are useful. Avoid repeating words and keep to 2–3 sentences with linking words like because or so.

Example: My favourite website is the Karachi Stock Exchange because I follow share prices and currency exchange rates there. I check it daily to monitor market trends and to understand how inflation and the dollar rate affect investments.

Suggestion: Answer directly and contrast past and present with clear linking words (e.g., previously, now). Give one specific change and one reason or effect. Remove filler words and repetitions; keep to 2–3 concise sentences.

Example: Previously the websites I visited were cleaner and had few advertisements, but now they show many commercials and pop-ups. This makes it harder to find information quickly, so I often use ad-blockers or different sites instead.

Suggestion: Begin with a clear topic sentence describing the main popular website types, then provide 2–3 specific examples (e.g., marriage, cooking, research) and a brief reason why each is popular. Use linking words like for example and because, and avoid vague phrases.

Example: Popular websites in my country include marriage and matchmaking sites, cooking and recipe blogs, and academic research portals. For example, marriage sites are widely used because arranged marriages are common, while cooking blogs are popular for sharing traditional recipes.

× As I am preparing for my higher studies so I just love to explore or check the websites according to my studies like I have.

✓ As I am preparing for my higher studies, I like to explore websites related to my studies.

The original sentence has redundant conjunctions and repetition ('so', 'or', 'like I have') causing unclear structure. Remove unnecessary words, use a single cohesive clause and correct word order: 'As I am preparing for my higher studies, I like to explore websites related to my studies.' This makes the sentence concise and grammatical.

× I like I have to make a research proposal so I would like to prefer prefer the proposal proposal including including proposal including websites.

✓ I have to make a research proposal, so I prefer websites that include proposal examples and guidance.

The original sentence contains repetitions and incorrect phrasing ('I like I have to', 'prefer prefer', 'proposal including including'). Simplify and clarify intent: state the obligation ('I have to make a research proposal') and then the preference ('I prefer websites that include proposal examples and guidance'). This corrects structure and redundancy.

× My favorite website is Karachi Stock Exchange market.

✓ My favorite website is the Karachi Stock Exchange.

The phrase 'Stock Exchange market' is redundant because 'stock exchange' already implies a market. Also include the definite article 'the' before the proper name for natural English: 'the Karachi Stock Exchange.'

× I love to watch. I love I just love to watch the the shares increasing prices and inflation of the of my country and the trending things and the dollar rates and exchange rates everything I.

✓ I just love to watch share prices rise, inflation in my country, trending news, and the dollar and exchange rates.

The original has fragmentary repetition ('I love to watch. I love I just love to watch'), incorrect noun forms ('shares increasing prices'), and extra words ('of the of'). Use parallel noun phrases and correct verb forms: 'watch share prices rise' uses 'rise' after 'watch'. Group items with commas for clarity.

× Yes, Sir, I have, I have seen little bit changes like when I scroll or when I check the websites, it's really it's it's really clear and there is no, you know there is no add.

✓ Yes, Sir, I have seen some changes: when I scroll or check websites now, the pages are much clearer and there are no ads.

Original contains repetitions and informal fillers ('I have, I have', 'it's really it's it's really', 'add' misspelled). Replace with concise phrasing, correct 'little bit changes' to 'some changes', and use 'ads' for advertisements.

× So now when I check with websites there is a lot of commercials or a lot of ads.

✓ But now, when I check websites, there are many commercials and ads.

Original has incorrect preposition use ('check with websites') and repetition ('a lot of commercials or a lot of ads'). Use correct verb-object 'check websites' and plural agreement 'there are many commercials and ads.'

× In my country there is a lot of websites and uh every and every website has its own characteristics and interest to.

✓ In my country there are many websites, and each website has its own characteristics and audience interests.

Original uses 'there is' with plural noun 'a lot of websites' (subject-verb agreement) and awkward phrase 'interest to'. Use 'there are many websites' and 'each' instead of 'every and every', and 'audience interests' or 'areas of interest' for clarity.

× There is large websites of marriage or the cooking websites or the research websites.

✓ There are many large websites for marriage, cooking, and research.

Original misuses 'There is' with plural 'websites' and awkward phrase order. Use 'There are many large websites for...' and list categories in parallel form.

× So there is a multiple websites.

✓ So there are multiple websites.

Original mixes singular 'there is a' with plural 'multiple websites.' Use plural verb 'are' and remove the article: 'there are multiple websites.'