Advertisement— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答要更自然、语法正确并且简洁。开头直接回答问题，然后用一两句具体细节支持，例如广告内容、为什么印象深刻和当时的感受。注意时态和代词，避免重复词语如“attract me”多次。

Example: Yes. When I was a child, I saw a TV commercial for a colorful candy that featured a cheerful mascot and catchy music. It caught my attention because of its bright colors and fun jingle, and I remember begging my parents to buy it.

Suggestion: 回答简洁明了但可增加连词和具体例子使内容更丰富。用连接词（e.g., not only... but also...）很棒，建议补充一两个具体广告类型或位置以增加细节。

Example: Yes, I see a lot of advertising on transport. Not only on trains, but also in subway stations, buses and airports, where there are large posters and digital screens promoting travel deals and consumer products.

Suggestion: 表达要更自然并直接给出观点，然后用具体理由支持。避免否定和双重否定（如 'not disgusted'），改用正面说法。句子要简洁并注意词序与冠词。

Example: I don't mind advertisements because they help me discover useful products. For example, I often learn about new apps or kitchen gadgets from ads and decide whether to try them.

Suggestion: 直接陈述偏好并提供具体原因和例子。改进流畅性，避免重复（例如 'choose, choose'），并用连接词如 'because' 或 'so' 来衔接原因与结果。

Example: I prefer food advertisements because they use vivid images and appetizing descriptions that stick in my mind, so I often end up buying a snack I saw in an ad.

Suggestion: 答案结构清晰，但需要更自然的表达并矫正冗余用词（例如重复使用 'like'）。可以提到广告形式（short videos, banners）和频率以增加细节。

Example: Yes, I often see ads on apps such as TikTok, Xiaohongshu and Taobao, mainly as short video ads or banner ads that appear between content.

× Yes, when I was a child, I see AI see an advertisement about the candy and it attracts me, attract me a lot that I really want to eat it.

✓ Yes. When I was a child, I saw an advertisement about a candy and it attracted me a lot; I really wanted to eat it.

句子中表示过去发生的动作，需要使用过去时。原句使用了现在时的 see、attract，且存在重复的 see。改为 saw、attracted、wanted 表示过去的动作和感受；同时去掉多余的词并调整为更自然的连接方式。建议：描述过去的经历时，一律使用过去时态，避免重复词。

× Of course, not only on trains, but also in the subway, bus station or airport.

✓ Of course, not only on trains, but also in the subway, at bus stations or at airports.

地点短语需要正确使用介词和复数形式。原句中 bus station 和 airport 单数与前文不一致，应使用复数或加介词 at 表示“在车站/机场”。建议：列举多个地点时使用复数（bus stations, airports）或在每个地点前加介词。

× I am not disgusted with advertisement because I can see the advertisement and think what thing, what things I can buy or uh useful for me.

✓ I am not disgusted by advertisements because I can see them and think about what things I can buy or what is useful for me.

形容词、介词搭配及代词使用不当。disgusted 通常与 by 搭配（disgusted by），并且 advertisement 应为复数或用代词替代；think 后需接 about，且原句中 what thing/eclectic重复且不自然，改为 what things 或 what is useful。建议：注意固定搭配（disgusted by）、复数形式和 think about 的用法。

× I prefer some food advertisement because they catch me attention and are more memorable. And I will choose, uh, choose some snack to buy.

✓ I prefer food advertisements because they catch my attention and are more memorable. I will choose some snacks to buy.

形容词顺序和名词单复数使用不当；catch someone’s attention 的结构需要 my attention，原句 catch me attention 不正确；advertisement 应为复数 adverts/advertisements；snack 需用复数或 a snack。建议：使用固定搭配 catch my attention，注意名词单复数一致。

× I often see advertisements on my like some application like a Tiktok, Redbook or Taobao.

✓ I often see advertisements on apps like TikTok, REDBOOK or Taobao on my phone.

时态本身可用一般现在时表示习惯，但原句结构混乱，重复使用 like，且应用名和平台应写为 apps 或 applications，并标明是在手机上。建议：简化结构，用 apps like + 列表；保持一致的名词形式（apps）。