Advertisement— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答は直接的ですが、文法の誤り（"impressed about"は不自然）や語彙の選択（"happy set"は"Happy Meal"が正しい）に注意が必要です。また、詳細をもう少し具体的に述べると良いでしょう。

Example: When I was a child, I was impressed by a McDonald's advertisement. It showed the Happy Meal as fun and exciting, which made me want to buy it.

Suggestion: 文法の誤り（"makes me feel interesting"は不自然）や言葉の選び方に注意してください。"uh"の使用は避け、より自然な表現を心がけましょう。具体的な例を加えると良いです。

Example: Yes, in Japan, there are many advertisements on public transportation like trains and taxis, which I find quite interesting because they often promote local events.

Suggestion: "unwilling to watch a lot of ad advertisements"は不自然な表現です。"uh"は避け、より自然で簡潔な表現を使いましょう。理由や感情を具体的に述べると良いです。

Example: To be honest, I dislike advertisements because they interrupt my favorite TV programs and movies, which can be quite annoying.

Suggestion: 文法の誤り（"advertisement"は複数形が適切）や表現の明確さに注意してください。理由や具体的な内容を加えると、より良い回答になります。

Example: One of my favorite types of advertising is video ads on trains because they are short and entertaining, which helps me pass the time during my commute.

Suggestion: 文法の誤り（"advertisement interrupt"は"advertisements interrupt"が正しい）や語彙の選択に注意してください。理由を具体的に述べ、より自然な表現を使いましょう。

Example: Yes, I see many advertisements daily, especially on Instagram, but I dislike them because they interrupt my favorite content.

× I was impressed about the advertisement of McDonald's.

✓ I was impressed by the advertisement of McDonald's.

The correct preposition to use with 'impressed' is 'by', not 'about'. 'Impressed by' indicates the cause of the impression.

× I wanted to buy happy set because it's looks like enjoyable.

✓ I wanted to buy a Happy Set because it looks enjoyable.

'Happy Set' is a singular noun and needs an article 'a'. Also, 'it's looks' is incorrect; 'it looks' is correct because 'it' is the subject and 'looks' is the verb.

× Yes, in Japan a wide range of advertisements, uh, exist in public transportation, such as trains and taxis, which makes me feel interesting.

✓ Yes, in Japan, a wide range of advertisements exist in public transportation, such as trains and taxis, which I find interesting.

The phrase 'makes me feel interesting' is incorrect because 'interesting' describes things, not feelings. The correct expression is 'I find interesting'. Also, commas are added for clarity.

× When I watch uh TV program or movies, I'm unwilling to watch a lot of ad advertisements.

✓ When I watch TV programs or movies, I'm unwilling to watch a lot of advertisements.

The phrase 'watch uh TV program or movies' should be plural 'TV programs or movies' to match the context. Also, 'ad advertisements' is redundant; 'advertisements' is sufficient.

× One of my favorite advertisements is video in trains.

✓ One of my favorite advertisements is videos in trains.

The word 'video' should be plural 'videos' because it refers to multiple advertisements shown in trains.

× When I have free time and I don't have what I want, I enjoy watching advertisement in trains.

✓ When I have free time and don't have anything to do, I enjoy watching advertisements in trains.

The phrase 'I don't have what I want' is unclear; 'don't have anything to do' is more natural. Also, 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements'.

× Yes, I really watch a lot of advertisements every day, especially when I see Instagram accounts.

✓ Yes, I really see a lot of advertisements every day, especially when I use Instagram.

The verb 'watch' is not typically used with 'advertisements' in this context; 'see' is more appropriate. Also, 'when I see Instagram accounts' is better expressed as 'when I use Instagram'.

× But I dislike it because advertisement interrupt my favorite.

✓ But I dislike it because advertisements interrupt my favorites.

'Advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' to match 'interrupt'. Also, 'my favorite' is unclear; 'my favorites' (things I like) is more appropriate.