Advertisement— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然，且句子结构重复。建议注意时态一致性，避免重复词汇，并使用更自然的表达方式。

Example: When I was a child, the iPhone 4 advertisement impressed me because it clearly showed the phone's benefits and caught my attention.

Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，缺少连贯性。建议使用连词连接句子，并注意冠词和名词的正确使用。

Example: Yes, I often see advertisements on almost every type of transport. For example, on airplanes, there are ads for special dishes from the destination, and sometimes there are also advertisements for books.

Suggestion: 表达较为清晰，但存在语法错误和用词不当。建议注意被动语态的正确使用，并丰富词汇表达。

Example: I don't like advertisements very much, although some are quite attractive. However, I feel they waste a lot of time because we are often forced to watch them before videos.

Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰，建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，避免重复和不完整的句子。

Example: I like advertisements that are technical and visually appealing. For example, Apple's ads attract me because they clearly show the benefits of their products.

Suggestion: 回答内容丰富，但句子较长且缺少连贯的连接词。建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，并注意名词的复数形式。

Example: Yes, I often see advertisements when I use my phone or computer. For instance, every time I open the App Store or watch videos on TikTok, I see ads for medicines or food products.

× We we can know the benefit of the mobile phone and it attract me.

✓ We can know the benefits of the mobile phone and it attracts me.

这里“benefit”应为复数形式“benefits”，因为手机有多个好处；动词“attract”应加第三人称单数形式“attracts”，因为主语是单数“it”。

× Yes, of course I can see advertisements or almost every transport.

✓ Yes, of course I can see advertisements on almost every transport.

介词“on”用于表示广告出现在交通工具上，原句缺少介词导致表达不完整。

× For example, in the airplane we can see the advertisement of the some special dishes of the destination and we can also see some advertisement of the books on.

✓ For example, in the airplane we can see advertisements of some special dishes of the destination and we can also see some advertisements of books.

“advertisement”应使用复数形式“advertisements”，因为指多个广告；“the some”是错误搭配，应去掉“the”。

× we can also see some advertisement of the books on.

✓ we can also see some advertisements of books.

“of the books on”结构不正确，去掉“the”和“on”使表达更自然。

× We always forced to watch advertisement when we open the video.

✓ We are always forced to watch advertisements when we open the video.

缺少被动语态助动词“are”，且“advertisement”应为复数“advertisements”，因为通常有多个广告。

× I think I like the some advice such as really technical and beautiful.

✓ I think I like some advice that is really technical and beautiful.

“advice”是不可数名词，前面不应加“the some”，且需要用定语从句修饰。

× I like the advertisements of from the Apple company because it really attracted me.

✓ I like the advertisements from the Apple company because they really attract me.

“advertisements of from”重复介词，应去掉“of”；“it”指代复数“advertisements”应改为“they”；时态应保持一般现在时。

× It show us the benefit and of their products.

✓ It shows us the benefits of their products.

动词“show”应加第三人称单数“shows”；“benefit”应为复数“benefits”；“and”多余，应去掉。

× Every time I open my computer I can see the advertisement of the App Store and every time I open a Tiktok or watch some videos or open the video apps, I will see the advertisement such as some medicine or some food.

✓ Every time I open my computer I can see advertisements of the App Store and every time I open TikTok or watch some videos or open video apps, I will see advertisements such as some medicine or some food.

“advertisement”应为复数“advertisements”，因为指多个广告；“a Tiktok”中“Tiktok”是专有名词，不用冠词。