Advertisement— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答不够连贯，表达含糊且有语法错误。建议简化句子结构，避免重复和犹豫词，明确表达广告内容和印象。

Example: Yes, I remember a baby formula advertisement from my childhood. It featured a loving mother singing to her children, which left a strong impression on me.

Suggestion: 回答较为简单，存在重复和语法错误。建议使用连贯的句子，避免重复，并提供具体例子。

Example: Yes, I often see many advertisements on the MRT, trains, and other public transport. For example, there are posters and digital screens showing ads everywhere around us.

Suggestion: 回答较好，但有犹豫词和语法不准确。建议去除犹豫词，使用更准确的表达，并举例说明。

Example: I like advertisements because they are creative and entertaining. For example, some ads introduce new products that I find useful.

Suggestion: 回答不连贯，语法错误多，表达不清。建议简洁明了地说明喜欢的视频广告类型，并举具体例子。

Example: I like video advertisements because they are often funny and entertaining. For example, commercials with humorous stories always catch my attention.

Suggestion: 回答不完整且有语法错误。建议完整表达观点，使用正确语法，并说明原因。

Example: Yes, I often see many ads on my phone and computer, especially when browsing the Internet. I think it's unavoidable because companies want to reach their customers.

× Yes, I remember there was uh, advertisement about a baby formula which contain umm, song of a loving mom carrying her her children which impressed her left.

✓ Yes, I remember there was an advertisement about a baby formula which contained a song of a loving mom carrying her children which impressed her a lot.

advertisement是可数名词，前面需要加冠词an；contain应使用过去式contained，因为描述的是过去的事情；song前应加冠词a；句中重复了her；impressed her left表达不清，改为impressed her a lot更合适。

× Yes, I see a lot of ads on the MRT or on the the train and even the other forms of the transportation.

✓ Yes, I see a lot of ads on the MRT or on the train and even other forms of transportation.

ads是复数形式，使用正确；the the是重复，应去掉一个；the other forms of the transportation中，transportation作为不可数名词，前面不需要加the。

× Basically they are everywhere in around us.

✓ Basically, they are everywhere around us.

in around是错误的介词搭配，应只用around表示“在我们周围”；另外，句首加逗号使句子更通顺。

× Additionally, we can learn new product or information on it.

✓ Additionally, we can learn about new products or information from it.

product是可数名词，单数时前面应加冠词或改为复数products；learn后面通常接about表示“了解”；on it用法不当，改为from it更合适。

× I like the video advertisements the most because they often pretty funny and entertaining as well.

✓ I like video advertisements the most because they are often pretty funny and entertaining as well.

the video advertisements中the不必要，去掉更自然；they often pretty funny缺少系动词are。

× For example some video a ads. Is Creek our creative?

✓ For example, some video ads are creative.

原句结构混乱，缺少谓语动词，且单词拼写错误（Creek应为creative）；改为完整句子表达清楚意思。

× Yes, I often see many ads on my phone or on my computer, especially when I browse the Internet.

✓ Yes, I often see many ads on my phone or on my computer, especially when I browse the Internet.

该句无明显语法错误，符合语境。

× It is unavoidable I think, because company want to get in touch with their.

✓ It is unavoidable, I think, because companies want to get in touch with their customers.

company应使用复数companies；want应与复数主语一致；句尾their后应有宾语customers；句中逗号位置调整使句子更通顺。