Advertisement— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Is there an advertisement that made an impression on you when you were a child?
Candidate
Absolutely. I was really fond of snack advertisements when I was young because the food presented on TV often give me an attractive impression. For instance, the food in KFC's advertisements always looks delicious.
Examiner
Do you see a lot of advertising on trains or other transport?
Candidate
Frankly speaking, I often find a lot of advertisements in taxis in Beijing when I travel with my friends or parents, which is a common phenomenon.
Examiner
Do you like advertisements?
Candidate
Frankly speaking, I'm obsessed with advertisements which created by art artists because they showcase the creativity and aesthetic science of painters. For example, the art exhibitions advertisements is open.
Examiner
What kind of advertising do you like?
Candidate
Well, I'm always keen on the advertisements which related to our exhibitions because it always gives me a deep impression on the display.
Examiner
Do you often see advertisements when you are on your phone or computer?
Candidate
Frankly speaking, I always find advertisements when I'm using my phone. For example, the video games on my phone are full of advertisements regarding other.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
Is there an advertisement that made an impression on you when you were a child?
Score: 75.0Suggestion: 回答较为自然，但存在语法错误（如"give"应为"gave"），且表达略显简单。建议注意时态一致性，避免语法错误，同时丰富细节，使回答更具体。
Example: Yes, I was particularly impressed by snack advertisements during my childhood because they often showed delicious food that looked very appealing. For example, KFC commercials always featured crispy fried chicken that made me want to try it immediately.
Do you see a lot of advertising on trains or other transport?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 回答直接但略显简单，缺少连接词使句子显得断裂。建议使用连接词丰富句子结构，并提供更具体的细节。
Example: Yes, I often see many advertisements inside taxis in Beijing when I travel with my friends or parents, and this seems to be a common phenomenon across the city.
Do you like advertisements?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清（如"advertisements is open"），且用词不准确。建议注意语法，使用恰当的词汇，并提供清晰具体的例子。
Example: Yes, I really like advertisements created by artists because they display creativity and artistic skills. For instance, posters for art exhibitions often have beautiful designs that attract my attention.
What kind of advertising do you like?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 回答语法错误较多（如"which related"应为"which are related"），表达不够清晰。建议注意语法结构，使用连接词，并具体说明喜欢的广告类型及原因。
Example: I prefer advertisements related to exhibitions because they usually provide detailed information and leave a strong impression about the displays.
Do you often see advertisements when you are on your phone or computer?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答不完整且表达不清（如"advertisements regarding other"不明确），缺少具体细节。建议补充完整句子，使用准确表达，并举具体例子。
Example: Yes, I often see many advertisements when I use my phone. For example, the mobile games I play usually have numerous ads promoting other games or apps.
Grammar
× the food presented on TV often give me an attractive impression.
✓ the food presented on TV often gives me an attractive impression.
主语是单数名词短语“the food”，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“gives”，而不是复数形式“give”。
× the art exhibitions advertisements is open.
✓ the art exhibitions advertisements are open.
主语“advertisements”为复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”，而不是单数“is”。
× the advertisements which related to our exhibitions
✓ the advertisements which are related to our exhibitions
“related”是过去分词，需用被动语态结构“are related to”表示“与……相关”。
× the video games on my phone are full of advertisements regarding other.
✓ the video games on my phone are full of advertisements regarding others.
“others”表示其他人或事物，复数形式更符合语境，单数“other”用法不当。
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