Advertisement— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答不够自然且表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，建议简化句子并直接表达印象深刻的广告内容。

Example: Yes, I remember an advertisement about a boy washing his mother's feet. It impressed me because it showed the love and care between family members.

Suggestion: 表达有语法错误，词汇使用不准确，建议使用更自然的表达并注意冠词和名词单复数。

Example: Yes, I often see many advertisements on trains and other forms of transport because they are good places to display ads.

Suggestion: 回答表达不够流畅，句子连接不自然，建议使用连词使表达更连贯，并改进词汇选择。

Example: I feel neutral about advertisements. Good ones help me relax and understand the products, but bad ads can make me feel annoyed.

Suggestion: 句子结构不清晰，词汇使用不当，建议简化句子并使用正确的表达方式。

Example: I like advertisements that use comedy or talk show styles because they are entertaining and help me understand the products better.

Suggestion: 语法错误较多，表达不连贯，建议注意主谓一致和句子完整性，使用更准确的词汇。

Example: Yes, I often see advertisements on my phone and computer. As a designer, I sometimes use ads as references when I am working.

× Yes, I can stop reminding an advertisement about a boy washing his mum's feet because it taught me about the good relationship of my parents when I was in childhood.

✓ Yes, I can stop remembering an advertisement about a boy washing his mum's feet because it taught me about the good relationship of my parents when I was a child.

这里动词短语应为 'stop remembering'，表示记得某事，而不是 'stop reminding'，后者意思是停止提醒。'in childhood' 应改为 'a child'，更符合英语表达习惯。

× Yeah, I often see a lot of advertising on trains and other transport because I think transport is a equipment for advertising exhibition.

✓ Yeah, I often see a lot of advertising on trains and other transport because I think transport is equipment for advertising exhibition.

'equipment' 是不可数名词，前面不应加不定冠词 'a'。

× Just so so I think it's in different cases. Good effective advertisements always make me relaxed and understand what the products are, but bad ad makes me nervous.

✓ Just so so, I think it depends on different cases. Good effective advertisements always make me feel relaxed and help me understand what the products are, but bad ads make me nervous.

'make me relaxed' 应改为 'make me feel relaxed'，因为 'make' 后面接感受时需用 'feel'。'bad ad' 应为复数 'bad ads'，与前文复数保持一致。

× In my mind, the advertising, including comedy and talk shows is my favorite ad because it also brings me relaxed and funny when I understand the products better.

✓ In my mind, advertising, including comedy and talk shows, is my favorite type of ad because it also makes me feel relaxed and happy when I understand the products better.

'brings me relaxed and funny' 语法错误，应改为 'makes me feel relaxed and happy'，'funny' 用于描述人时通常指 '滑稽的'，此处应用 'happy' 表示开心。

× Yes, I often see advertisements when I on my and computer. Because I'm a designer, I often find reference from ads when I surfing on the clock.

✓ Yes, I often see advertisements when I am on my phone and computer. Because I'm a designer, I often find references from ads when I am surfing online.

句子缺少动词 'am'，'on my and computer' 结构不完整，应为 'on my phone and computer'。'find reference' 应为复数 'find references'。'surfing on the clock' 表达不正确，应为 'surfing online'。