Advertisement— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但存在重复词汇（"how how"）和表达不够简洁的问题。建议避免重复，使用更准确的词汇表达感受，并适当使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Example: Yes, the iPhone 10 advertisement impressed me deeply because it highlighted the phone's advanced camera features. I was amazed by the clarity of the photos and the wide-angle lens, which allows users to capture more in a single shot.

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“advertising”应为“advertisements”，句子结构不够连贯。建议注意名词复数形式，使用连接词如“for example”或“also”来增强逻辑性。

Example: Yes, I often see many advertisements on public transport. For example, there are ads on the back of taxis that other drivers can see. Also, the underground stations have numerous posters, which catch the attention of commuters.

Suggestion: 回答表达了观点，但句子较长且有语法错误，如“seize my thinking”表达不准确。建议简化句子结构，使用更自然的表达方式，并避免重复。

Example: No, I don't like advertisements because they can be quite annoying. For instance, when I read ebooks on my Kindle, ads often pop up and distract me, which affects my concentration and learning.

Suggestion: 回答内容具体且结构较好，但句子稍显冗长，部分表达重复。建议使用连接词简化句子，并避免重复表达相似意思。

Example: I like travel advertisements because they introduce foreign countries, their cultures, and customs. This inspires me to visit new places and broadens my horizons.

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题，如“so I do”不明确，句子结尾不完整。建议注意句子完整性，避免重复，并使用更准确的表达。

Example: Yes, I often see advertisements on my phone and computer. I don't like them because they frequently distract me from studying or reading, which is quite annoying.

× I was shocked by how how clear the phone can shoot and the wide angle can also help people to view more things at once.

✓ I was shocked by how clear the phone can shoot and how the wide angle can also help people view more things at once.

句中“how how”重复，应删除一个“how”；此外，'help people to view'中不需要不定式to，直接用动词原形view即可。

× There are advertising on the back of the taxis so that other drivers can see the advertising.

✓ There is advertising on the back of the taxis so that other drivers can see the advertising.

advertising是不可数名词，前面应使用单数形式的there is，而不是there are。

× Moreover, there are many advertisements on the underground, so commuters can see them and leave them deep.

✓ Moreover, there are many advertisements on the underground, so commuters can see them and leave a deep impression.

原句中“leave them deep”表达不完整，应补充“a deep impression”表示留下深刻印象。

× No, I don't like advertisements because I think they are to a certain extent A nuisance because when I was reading ebooks on the Kindle, there are always some advertisements popping up which can distract my attention and seize my thinking, which I think is not good for my learning.

✓ No, I don't like advertisements because I think they are, to a certain extent, a nuisance. When I was reading ebooks on the Kindle, there were always some advertisements popping up which could distract my attention and seize my thinking, which I think is not good for my learning.

句中“are”应改为过去时“were”以保持时态一致；“can”改为“could”表示过去可能性；“A nuisance”中的大写字母应改为小写。

× I like traveling advertisements because by watching these advertisements, I can know more about the foreign countries and their local culture and their customs.

✓ I like traveling advertisements because by watching these advertisements, I can learn more about foreign countries and their local culture and customs.

“know more about the foreign countries”中“the”不必要，应去掉；“know”用法不当，改为“learn”更合适。

× Yes, there are always advertisements popping up when I use phones or computers, so I do.

✓ Yes, there are always advertisements popping up when I use phones or computers, so I do notice them.

句尾“so I do”不完整，应补充动词“notice them”使句子完整。

× I don't like them because they always distract me from studying or reading books on the phones and they are a nuisance to a certain extent and.

✓ I don't like them because they always distract me from studying or reading books on the phones, and they are a nuisance to a certain extent.

句尾多余的“and”导致句子结构不完整，应删除。